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:[[User:ARTEST4ECHO|ARTEST4ECHO]], I appreciate your thorough work checking those sources. [[User:Tripleahg|Tripleahg]] ([[User talk:Tripleahg|talk]]) 10:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
:[[User:ARTEST4ECHO|ARTEST4ECHO]], I appreciate your thorough work checking those sources. [[User:Tripleahg|Tripleahg]] ([[User talk:Tripleahg|talk]]) 10:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
::Ditto. - [[User:Ecjmartin|Ecjmartin]] ([[User talk:Ecjmartin|talk]]) 22:44, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
::Ditto. - [[User:Ecjmartin|Ecjmartin]] ([[User talk:Ecjmartin|talk]]) 22:44, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

== Rewrite ==

I've created a revision of this article in my sandbox (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ecjmartin/sandbox), which I think might address the pertinent issues here to (hopefully!) everyone's satisfaction. I especially invite consideration of the following:

:The second paragraph of the opener has been substantially revised to indicate that the question of the exact role of this order in murders of Mormons is debated by historians, while not giving undue weight to either 'side' in this dispute. Check the wording, and see if you concur. I furthermore state that it ''was'' cited by General John Clark as a pretext for expelling the Mormons--the only time I know of when any Missouri militiaman or official ever cited this order as a direct reason for action against the Mormons.
:The first paragraph in the opener received some general cleanup; the first paragraph in "background" received some cleanup and removal of redundant material.
:"Aftermath and recession" has been broken up into two sections: "Aftermath" and "recession."
:In "aftermath," I have inserted a pertinent quote from General Clark, in which the order is directly referenced as a reason for expelling the Mormons, and further threats of death and destruction made in case of their failure to leave the state by the following spring. I also added sourced information regarding the Mormon decision not to avail themselves of Clark's offer of 'clemency' -- an offer which, as I have said before, *I* would never have believed in, either...

I think that there are all good changes, but tell me what you guys think. I especially think the stuff on Clark should go in, since that is directly pertinent to the order and hasn't been inserted, before. I also think the second paragraph changes (in the opener) might address everyone's concerns about equity and accuracy. I didn't want to post all the changes here because they're too lengthy--please stop by my sandbox, then let me know what you think (and any changes you suggest), here. I won't post anything to the article itself until I get some feedback from you guys. Cheers! - [[User:Ecjmartin|Ecjmartin]] ([[User talk:Ecjmartin|talk]]) 00:42, 28 January 2015 (UTC)
:I am happy ether to leave it as is or with your changes. I think its a very good attempt at a compromise, without effecting the [[WP:NPOV]] of the article. However, I don't necessarily think the page needs to be changed as I will address the sources that [[User talk:Keepitreal2|Keepitreal2]] used. After reading them last night they do not pass [[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verification]] anyway. Therefore the inclusion that unsources POV statements is inappropriate.--- [[User:ARTEST4ECHO|ARTEST4ECHO]]<sup>([[User talk:ARTEST4ECHO|Talk]])</sup> 12:43, 28 January 2015 (UTC)

::I decided to go ahead and insert the changes, because I believe first of all that the info on John Clark ''definitely'' needs to be here. This is extremely pertinent information on this subject, considering that this is the one contemporary Missouri official other than Boggs himself who directly cites this order as legal justification for actions against the Mormons. I also believe the rewording of Paragraph two of the opener will improve that portion of the article and make it even more NPOV than before. That said, I still leave this open for discussion and/or changes, as the common concensus may decide. - [[User:Ecjmartin|Ecjmartin]] ([[User talk:Ecjmartin|talk]]) 18:21, 28 January 2015 (UTC)
:::Thanks very much for the added information about General Clark. I have some other concerns, mostly minor.
:::1) As mentioned elsewhere on this page, "The academic consensus is that at no time did the militiamen use Order 44 to kill someone." But in the most recent edit of the article, "Historians debate whether anyone was killed as a direct result of it between October 27 (the date of its issuance) and November 1, 1838 (the date of the Mormon surrender)." If the academic consensus is that this NEVER happened, I don't think the statement in the article should be limited to a five day period. Also, if there is academic consensus, I think the article should not state "historians debate" unless specific sources/historians can be identified. As it currently reads, a reader would think there is active disagreement in the academic community.
::::{{done}} Rewrote this sentence to reflect your excellent point, while adding also that some Latter Day Saints disagree with this conclusion (and this should be WITHOUT the hyphen, since there are more Latter Day Saints than just those in the Utah Church. Disagreement with the academic conclusion is found among [[Church of Christ (Temple Lot)|Temple Lot Mormons]], [[Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints (Strangite)|Strangites]], [[Church of Jesus Christ (Cutlerite)|Cutlerites]], etc.).
:::2) As mentioned elsewhere on this page, "While some argument can be made that since the Mormons face the wintry conditions due to Order 44, they died from Order 44. I don't see any reliable sources making that claim. I also feel it falls under Post hoc ergo propter hoc..." The article currently reads "This forced exodus in difficult, wintry conditions posed a substantial threat to the health and safety of the affected Mormons, and an unknown number died from hardship and exposure." Also, as you have just added information to the article about how enforcement supposedly was going to be stayed until Spring, I don't think we can call this a "forced exodus" in the strict sense of the term. So I think the article should read something like "While state officials said that enforcement of the order would be delayed until Spring, the Mormons had obvious reason to be distrustful of this promise. They determined to leave for Illinois immediately, despite the harsh winter conditions. An unknown number died from hardship and exposure during that exodus." This avoids saying the deaths were due to EO44 in the strict sense, but still is clear that the state set up conditions where the best option available to the Saints was to semi-voluntarily travel in wintertime. A terrible choice to have to make, to be sure, and given that it was due to the political climate surrounding EO44 I think it belongs in the article.
::::{{done}} Added your proposed sentence, verbatim, as I think it is superbly-written. Also added a clause stating that recent actions, including those committed by members of the Militia (such as at Haun's Mill) gave them reason to distrust the state officials. If you think that should come out, please remove it.
:::2a)Additionally, in "Aftermath" first paragraph, there is more mention of forced real-time expulsion. If that is inaccurate it needs to be removed- the entire paragraph could be erased without losing anything from the article if that information is inaccurate.
::::{{done}}{{not done}} I moved this into its own subsection; here I didn't remove the entire paragraph, but I did rewrite it to reflect (a) that some Mormons, especially in outlying areas, WERE harassed and even forced to leave their homesteads at gunpoint (a fact LeSueur and others affirm--I'll see if I can find my copy of his book after work today, and add a specific reference), and (b) that it quickly became clear to all of them that state officials were going to leave them with no choice but to leave. This in turn serves as a good lead-in for Clark's comment. Take a gander, and tell me what you think.
:::3) The article reads "No militiaman or other participant in anti-Mormon killings is known to have used it as a justification for any actions prior to 1 November 1838, though General John B. Clark did cite it after that date." Why limit the sentence to the militia and to murderers if the middle of the sentence now references "any actions" and not just murders? How about either "No miliaman or participant in anti-Mormon actions is known to have used it as a justification for any murder. General John..." or "No one is known to have used it to justify anti-Mormon behavior prior to 1 November 1838, though General John..."
::::{{done}} Used your option two.
:::4) That sentence is also quite unclear about how exactly Clark was using EO44. It seems to say that he cited it to justify his personal involvement in murders after that date, which is inaccurate according to the information provided throughout the rest of the article. From the excellent information you added to "Aftermath" it seems he said that had the Mormons not surrendered, EO44 would have been enforced, but because of the surrender he would not enforce it until Spring so as to not make them travel in dangerous wintry conditions. So back in the lead, maybe it should read something like "General John B. Clark did cite the Order soon after the Mormon surrender in November 1838, saying that violence would have been used had the Mormons chosen not to surrender, and that they could stay the Winter, but if they did not leave in the Spring then violence would be used to compel them to leave."
::::{{done}} Another excellent point. Incorporated your proposed sentence, but broke it up into two sentences and made a couple of other minor changes. Take a look, and tell me if this wording meets your concerns.
:::5) Given the way the lead currently reads, and also the way it would read with the above edits, I recommend moving the last line break in the lead upward a couple of sentences so the Haun's Mill section begins a new paragraph.
::::{{done}} Made this into its own paragraph, and added wording to emphasize the particularly unprovoked and savage nature of this attack, while retaining the fact that no participant is known to have cited this order as justification (rather, they justified it as indicated in this paragraph), and there is no evidence that they knew of it at the time. To say when Reynolds or someone else ''might'' have known is not proof, and PROOF is what is required here. Reynolds never cited the order to justify what he did, nor did anyone else--hence, we can't say that the massacre was a direct result of the order, though I have inserted that some Latter Day Saints certainly ''believe'' that it was.
:::6) The sentence "There is no evidence that the militiamen knew of Boggs' decree, nor did they ever use it to justify their actions, instead saying that they had word from Mormon dissenters that the Mormons at Haun's Mill were planning to "invade" their county." seems awkward to me. Maybe "...justify their actions. Rather, they claimed to have committed the massacre because of rumors that the Mormons at Haun's Mill in XYZZZ County were planning to invade ABCDDD County (where the militiamen were stationed)."
::::{{done}} Reworded, per your suggestion, though not exactly as you put it here. Take a look, and tell me what you think.
:::7) In "Background" paragraph two, the word "further" would make any reader without prior knowledge of this topic confused as to whether violence had already started again when Rigdon made the speech. I recommend dropping "further". Then I'd change "had happened" to "had already happened" to maintain the tone in the sentence and not make it seem like the persecution of Mormons is being downplayed at all. (Ordinarily I wouldn't worry about something that minor in an article that is far more sympathetic to Mormons than to their attackers, but I want to be sensitive to Keepitreal2.)
::::{{done}} Rewrote, per your suggestions. Also inserted wording indicating their previous expulsion from that area.
:::8) Last paragraph in "Background" reads "Boggs issued Executive Order #44 to General John Clark, whom he had appointed to head up the state militia forces being assembled to reinstate citizens of Daviess County (north of Caldwell) who had been allegedly driven from their homes by renegade Mormons. Having heard lurid reports of alleged Mormon depredations on the Crooked River, Boggs directed Clark to change his mission to one of direct military operations against the Mormons themselves." This feels like a run-on sentence and it's confusing. How about something like "Boggs had previously appointed General John Clark to lead the state militia in assisting citizens of Daviess County (north of Caldwell) to return to their homes. (They had allegedly been driven out by renegade Mormons.) After hearing lurid reports of alleged Mormon depredations on the Crooked River, Boggs issued EO44 to Clark, changing his mission to one of direct military operations against the Mormons themselves.
::::{{done}} Rewrote this per your suggestion, though I used slightly different wording. Take a look, and tell me what you think.
:::Let me know what you all think. If any these edits seem ok to you, feel free to enact them, or I can take care of them the next time I log on (usually about once every few weeks). [[User:Tripleahg|Tripleahg]] ([[User talk:Tripleahg|talk]]) 10:32, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
:::: Excellently, excellently done. These are all good suggestions, and I think they'll improve the article immensely. Thanks so much for taking the time! - [[User:Ecjmartin|Ecjmartin]] ([[User talk:Ecjmartin|talk]]) 11:37, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
::::: This drama is the most exciting thing that's happened to me all week so I decided to check in again this morning. [[User:Ecjmartin|Ecjmartin]], you updated everything so quickly! I love all the changes the way you did them. One question- last paragraph of "Background"- does "new orders" refer specifically to EO44? It wasn't clear to me from that sentence whether it was referring to that or to other orders. [[User:Tripleahg|Tripleahg]] ([[User talk:Tripleahg|talk]]) 18:52, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
:::::: Yeah, Triple, it makes me think of Simon Cowell on ''American Idol,'' for some reason!! Your question is a good one; my wording referred to EO44, but I'll clarify that better in the rewrite that I'm just starting to work on. - [[User:Ecjmartin|Ecjmartin]] ([[User talk:Ecjmartin|talk]]) 22:49, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

This is so comical I don't even know where to start. Glad you KNOW when Reynolds heard of 44 [[User:ARTEST4ECHO|Artest4echo]] I just can't with this ish right now... lemme go pray for the patience of job first... ughhhhh [[User:Keepitreal2|Keepitreal2]] ([[User talk:Keepitreal2|talk]]) 07:49, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
:Per an above comment, academic consensus is that Reynolds did not know of EO44 at the time of the massacre. Personally I am not opposed to the brief mention of Haun's Mill in this article as long as it either states that academic consensus is that he didn't know, OR it clearly states that there is no evidence that he knew. I'd also be 110% behind a longer discussion of Haun's Mill if we can find a wikipedia-appropriate source suggesting the possibility that Reynolds knew about EO44 in advance of the masacre. If you can locate such a source please bring it up because I think that would return Haun's Mill to the scope of this article and we could probably even give it its' own section. [[User:Tripleahg|Tripleahg]] ([[User talk:Tripleahg|talk]]) 10:32, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
:I agree with Tripleh, while acknowledging your concerns. Since ''none'' of us KNOW ''when'' Reynolds learned of the order, we can't say here that he did. If you can find an independent source that shows him citing this order as an excuse for his actions and indicating that he knew of it ''at the time'' he committed these Nazi-style atrocities, I would be more than glad to see it and include that here. - [[User:Ecjmartin|Ecjmartin]] ([[User talk:Ecjmartin|talk]]) 11:41, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

:: Blanketly claiming academic consensus without citation has already been rejected not just by me but others on this page as well. Stating or suggesting they didn't know ALSO requires citation. If we follow your standards. The only fact in this matter is they were murdered AFTER the order was in place. Subjecture or speculation is irrelevant. [[User:Keepitreal2|Keepitreal2]] ([[User talk:Keepitreal2|talk]]) 14:12, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
:: {{done}} Added your requested citation. Verifiable. He threatened to do exactly what he did BEFORE he did it AND explicitly cited Boggs order in his threats. [[User:Ecjmartin|Ecjmartin]], [[User:Tripleahg|Tripleahg]], [[User:ARTEST4ECHO|ARTEST4ECHO]]
:: Now go ahead and remove your slanderous contributions as promised please and thank you. <small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Keepitreal2|Keepitreal2]] ([[User talk:Keepitreal2|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Keepitreal2|contribs]]) 17:03, 29 January 2015 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:::[[User:Keepitreal2|Keepitreal2]], has the libelous comment been removed? If not, I'd be happy to look at it and assist in reporting it. I don't see such a comment here so I assume it was removed, but I'm not seeing it on the history page either. It's possible it was purged from there if it was so far beyond the pale that it wasn't even acceptable to have on record, but I think I must just be missing it since such purges are exceptionally rare. Please let me know. Also, thank you for providing that excellent source. I'm very excited for the article to be rewritten to highlight the role of EO44 in the massacre. Please feel free to contribute to the rewrite which I assume will be well underway by the end of the day.[[User:Tripleahg|Tripleahg]] ([[User talk:Tripleahg|talk]]) 18:52, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

=== Requested Citation ===

Since there has been a complaint of "dead links", lets go ahead and document this here.

Below is an accont of the Haun's Mill massacre. It is quoted exactly, complete, and unedited with it's nineteenth century sentiments, spelling, and language:

Women of Mormondom, Edward W. Tullidge, 576 pages
Published November 9th 2010 by Deseret Book pages 116 - 132.
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"Towards the close of October, 1838, several small detachments of migrants from Ohio entered the state of Missouri. They were of the refugees from Kirtland Ohio. Their destinations were the counties of Caldwell and Davies, where the Saints had located in that State. Haun's Mill, in Caldwell county, was soon to become the scene of one of the darkest tragedies on record. The mill was owned by a Mormon brother whose name it bore, and in the neighborhood some Mormon families had settled. To Haun's Mill came the doomed refugees. They had been met on their entrance into the state of Missouri by armed mobs. Governor Boggs had just issued his order to exterminate the entire Mormon community.

The coming of the refugees into the inhospitable State could not have been more ill-timed, though when they left Kirtland they expected to find a brotherhood in Far West.
"Halt!" commanded the leader of a band of well-mounted and well-armed mobocrats, who charged down upon them as they journeyed on their way.
"If you proceed any farther west," said the captain, "you will be instantly shot."
"Wherefore?" inquired the pilgrims.
"You are d__d Mormons!"
"We are law-abiding Americans, and have given no cause of offence."
"You are d__d Mormons. That's offence enough. Within ten days every Mormon must be out of Missouri, or men, women, and children will be shot down indiscriminately. No mercy will be shown. It is the order of the Governor that you should all be exterminated; and by G_d you will be."
In consternation the refugees retreated, and gathered at Haun's Mill.... To sister Amanda Smith must be given the pinciple thread of this tragedy, for around her centres the terrible interest of the Haun's Mill massacre, which even to-day rises before her in all the horrors of an occurring scene. She says:
"We sold our beautiful home in Kirtland for a song, and traveled all summer to Missouri -- our teams poor, and with hardly enough to keep body and soul together.
"We arrived in Caldwell county, near Haun's Mill, nine wagons of us in company. Two days before we arrived we were taken prisoners by an armed mob that had demanded every bit of ammunition and every weapon we had. We surrendered all. They knew it, for they searched our wagons.
"A few miles more brought us to Haun's Mill, where that awful scene of murder was enacted. My husband pitched his tent by a blacksmith's shop.
"Brother David Evans made a treaty with the mob that they would not molest us. He came just before the massacre and called the company together and they knelt in prayer.
"I sat in my tent. Looking up I suddenly saw the mob coming -- the same that took away our weapons. They came like demons or wild Indians.
"Before I could get to the blacksmith's shop door to alarm the brethren, who were at prayers, the bullets were whistling amongst them.
"I seized my two little girls and escaped across the mill-pond on a slab-walk. Another sister fled with me. Yet though we were women, with tender children, in flight for our lives, the demons poured volley after volley to kill us.
"A number of bullets entered my clothes, but I was not wounded. The sister however, who was with me, cried out that she was hit. We had just reached the trunk of a fallen tree, over which I urged her, bidding her to shelter there where the bullets could not reach her, while I continued my flight to some bottom land.
"When the firing had ceased I went back to the scene of the massacre, for there were my husband and three sons, of whose fate I as yet knew nothing.
"As I returned I found the sister in a pool of blood where she had fainted, but she was only shot through the hand. Farther on was lying dead Brother McBride, an aged white-haired revolutionary soldier. His murderer had literally cut him to pieces with an old corn cutter. His hands had been split down when he raised them in supplication for mercy. Then the monster cleft open his head with the same weapon, and the veteran who had fought for his country, in the glorious days of the past, was numbered with the martyrs.
"Passing on I came to a scene more terrible still to mother and wife. Emerging from the blacksmith shop was my eldest son, bearing on his shoulders his little brother Alma.
"Oh! my Alma is dead!" I cried in anguish.
"No, mother; I think Alma is not dead. But father and brother Sardius are killed!"
"What an answer was this to appal me! My husband and son murdered; another little son seemingly mortally wounded; and perhaps before the dreadful night should pass the murderers would return and complete their work!
"But I could not weep then. The fountain of tears was dry; and the heart overburdened with its calamity, and all the mother's sense absorbed in it's anxiety for the precious boy which God alone could save by his miraculous aid.
"The entire hip joint of my wounded boy had been shot away. Flesh, hip bone, joint and all had been ploughed out from the muzzle of the gun which the ruffian placed to the child's hip through the logs of the shop and deliberately fired.
"We laid little Alma on a bed in our tent and I examined the wound. It was a ghastly sight. I knew not what to do. It was night now.
"There was none left from that terrible scene, throughout that long, dark night, but about half a dozen bereaved and lamenting women, and the children. Eighteen or nineteen, all grown men excepting my murdered boy and another about the same age, were dead or dying; several more of the men were wounded, hiding away, whose groans through the night too well disclosed their hiding places, while the rest of the men had fled, at the moment of the massacre, to save their lives.
"The women were sobbing, in the greatest anguish of spirit; the children were crying loudly with fear and grief at the loss of fathers and brothers; the dogs howled over their dead masters and the cattle were terrified with the scent of the blood of the murdered.
"Yet was I there, all that long, dreadful night, with my dead and my wounded, and none but God as our physician and help.
"Oh my Heavenly Father, I cried, what shall I do? Thou seest my poor wounded boy and knowest my inexperience. Oh Heavenly Father direct me what to do!
"And then I was directed as by a voice speaking to me.
"The ashes of our fire was still smoldering. We had been burning the bark of a shag-bark hickory. I was directed to take those ashes and make a lye and put a cloth saturated with it right into the wound. It hurt, but little Alma was too near dead to heed it much. Again and again I saturated the cloth and put it into the hole from which the hip joint had been ploughed, and each time mashed flesh and splinters of bone came away with the cloth; and the wound became as white as chicken's flesh.
"Having done as directed I again prayed to the Lord and was again instructed as distinctly as though a physician had been standing by speaking to me.
"Near by was a slippery-elm tree. From this I was told to make a slippery-elm poultice and fill the wound with it.
"My eldest boy was sent to get the slippery-elm from the roots, the poultice was made, and the wound, which took fully a quarter of a yard of linen to cover, so large was it, was properly dressed.
"It was then I found vent to my feelings in tears, and resigned myself to the anguish of the hour.
"And all that night we, a few poor, stricken women, were thus left with our dead and wounded.
"All through the night we heard the groans of the dying. Once in the dark we crawled over the heap of dead in the blacksmith's shop to try to soothe the sufferer's wants; once we followed the cries of a wounded brother who hid in some bushes from the murderers, and relieved him all we could.
"It has passed from my memory whether he was dead in the morning or whether he recovered.
"Next morning brother Joseph Young came to the scene of the massacre.
"'What shall be done with the dead?' he inquired, in horror and deep trouble.
"There was not time to bury them, for the mob was coming on us. Neither were there left men to dig the graves. All the men excepting the two or three who had so narrowly escaped were dead or wounded. It had been no battle, but a massacre indeed.
"'Do anything, brother Joseph,' I said, 'rather than to leave their bodies to the fiends who have killed them.'
"There was a deep dry well close by. Into this the bodies had to be hurried, eighteen, or nineteen in number.
"No funeral service could be performed, nor could they be buried with customary decency. The lives of those who in terror performed the last duty to the dead were in jeopardy. Every moment we expected to be fired upon by the fiends who we supposed were lying in ambush waiting for the opportunity to dispatch the remaining few who had escaped the slaughter of the preceeding day. So in the hurry and terror of the moment some were thrown into the well head downwards and some feet downwards.
"But when it came to the burial of my murdered boy Sardius, Brother Joseph Young, who was assisting to carry him on a board to the well, laid down the corpse and declared that he could not throw that boy into this horrible grave.
"All the way on the journey, that summer, Joseph had played with the interesting lad who had been so cruelly murdered. It was too much for one whose nature was so tender as Uncle Joseph's, and whose sympathies by this time were quite overwrought. He could not perform that last office. My murder son was left unburied.
"'Oh! they have left my Sardius unburied in the sun,' I cried, and ran and got a sheet and covered his body.
"There he lay until the next day, and then I, his mother, assisted by his elder brother, had to throw him into the well. Straw and earth were thrown into this rude vault to cover the dead.
"Among the wounded who recovered were Isaac Laney, Nathaniel K. Knight, Mr. Yokum, two brothers by the name of Myers, Tarlton Lewis, Mr. Haun and several others, besides Miss Mary Stedwell, who was shot through the hand while fleeing with me, and who fainting, fell over the log into which the mob shot upwards of twenty balls.
"The crawling of my boys under the bellows in the blacksmith's shop where the tragedy occurred, is an incident familiar to all our people. Alma's hip was shot away while thus hiding. Sardius was discovered after the massacre by the monsters who came in to despoil the bodies. The eldest, Williard, was not discovered. In cold blood, one Glaze, of Carroll county, presented a rifle near the head of Sardius and literally blew off the upper part of it, leaving the skull empty and dry while the brains and the hair of the murdered boy were scattered around and on the walls.
"At this one of the men, more merciful than the rest, observed:
"'It was a d__d shame to kill those little boys.'
"'D__n the difference!' retorted the other; 'nits make lice!'
"My son who escaped, also says that the mobocrat William Mann took from my husband's feet, before he was dead, a pair of new boots. From his hiding place, the boy saw the ruffian drag his father across the shop in the act of pulling off his boot.
" 'Oh! you hurt me!' groaned my husband. But the murderer dragged him back again, pulling off the other boot; 'and there,' says the boy, 'my father fell over dead.'
"Afterwards this William Mann showed the boots on his own feet, in Far West, saying: 'Here is a pair of boots that I pulled off before the d__d Mormon was done kicking!'
"The murderer Glaze also boasted over the country, as a heroic deed, the blowing off the head of my young son.
"But to return to Alma, and how the Lord helped me to save his life.
"I removed the wounded boy to a house, some distance off, the next day, and dressed his hip; the Lord directing me as before. I was reminded that in my husband's trunk there was a bottle of balsam. This I poured into the wound, greatly soothing Alma'a pain.
"'Alma, my child,' I said, 'you believe that the Lord made your hip?'
"'Yes, mother.'
"'Well, the Lord can make something there in the place of your hip, don't you believe he can, Alma?'
"'Do you think that the Lord can, mother?' inquired the child in his simplicity.
"'Yes, my son,' I replied, 'he has shown it all to me in a vision.'
"Then I laid him comfortably on his face, and said, 'Now you lay like that, and don't move, and the Lord will make you another hip.'
"So Alma laid on his face for five weeks, until he was entirely recovered -- a flexible gristle having grown in place of the missing joint and socket, which remains to this day a marvel to physicians.
"On the day that he walked again I was out of the house fetching a bucket of water, when I heard screams from the children. Running back in affright, I entered, and there was Alma on the floor, dancing around, and the children screaming in astonishment and joy.
"It is now nearly forty years ago, but Alma has never been the least crippled during his life, and has traveled quite a long period of time as a missionary of the gospel and a living miracle of the power of God.
"I cannot leave the tragic story without relating some incidents of those five weeks when I was a prisoner with my wounded boy in Missouri, near the scene of the massacre, unable to obey the order of extermination.
"All the Mormons in the neighborhood had fled out of the state, except a few families of the bereaved women and children who had gathered at the house of brother David Evans, two miles from the scene of the massacre. To this house Alma had been carried after that fatal night.
"In our utter desolation, what could we women do but pray? Prayer was our only source of comfort; our Heavenly Father our only helper. None but He could save and deliver us.
"One day a mobber came from the mill with the captain's fiat:
"'The captain says if you women don't stop your d__d praying he will send down a posse and kill every d__d one of you!'
"And he might as well have done it, as to stop us poor women praying in that hour of our great calamity.
"Our prayers were hushed in terror. We dared not let our voices be heard in the house in supplication. I could pray in my bed or in silence, but I could not live thus long. This godless silence was more intolerable than had been that night of the massacre.
"I could bear it no longer. I pined to hear once more my own voice in petition to my Heavenly Father.
"I stole down into a corn field, and crawled into a 'stout of corn.' It was as the temple of the Lord to me at that moment. I prayed aloud and most ferevntly.
"When I emerged from the corn a voice spoke to me. It was a voice as plain as I ever heard one. It was no silent strong impression of the spirit, but a voice, repeating a verse of the saint's hymn:
"That soul who on Jesus hath leaned for repose,
I cannot, I will not desert to its foes;
That soul, though all hell should endeaver to shake,
I'll never, no never, no never forsake!"
"From that moment I had no more fear. I felt that nothing could hurt me. Soon after this the mob sent us word that unless we were all out of the State by a certain day we should be killed.
"The day came, and at evening came fifty armed men to execute the sentence.
"I met them at the door. They demanded of me why I was not gone? I bade them enter and see their own work. They crowded into my room and I showed them my wounded boy. They came, party after party, until all had seen my excuse. Then they quarreled among themselves and came near fighting.
"At last they went away, all but two. These I thought were detailed to kill us. Then the two returned.
"'Madam,' said one, 'have you any meat in the house?'
"'No,' was my reply.
"'Could you dress a fat hog if one was laid at your door?'
"'I think we could!' was my answer.
"And then they went and caught a fat hog from a herd which had belonged to a now exiled brother, killed it and dragged it to my door, and departed.
"These men, who had come to murder us, left on the threshold of our door a meat offering to atone for their repented intention.
"Yet even when my son was well I could not leave the State, now accursed indeed to the saints.
"The mob had taken my horses, as they had the drove of horses, and the beeves, and the hogs, and wagons, and the tents, of the murdered and exiled.
"So I went down into Davies county (ten miles) to Captain Comstock, and demanded of him my horses. There was one of them in his yard. He said I could have it if I paid five dollars for it's keep. I told him I had no money.
"I did not fear the captain of the mob, for I had the Lord's promise that nothing should hurt me. But his wife swore that the mobbers were fools for not killing the women and children as well as the men -- declaring that we would 'breed up a pack ten times worse than the first.'
"I left without the captain's permission to take my horse, or giving pay for it's keep; but I went into his yard and took it, and returned to our refuge unmolested.
"Learning that my other horse was at the mill, I next yoked up a pair of steers to a sled and went and demanded it also.
"Comstock was there at the mill. He gave me the horse, and then asked if I had any flour.
"'No; we have had none for weeks.'
"He then gave me about fifty pounds of flour and some beef, and filled a can with honey.
"But the mill, and the slaughtered beeves which hung plentifully on its walls, and the stock of flour and honey, and abundant spoil besides, had all belonged to the murdered or exiled saints.
"Yet was I thus providentially, by the very murderers and mobocrats themselves, helped out of the State of Missouri.
"The Lord had kept his word. The soul who on Jesus had leaned for succor had not been forsaken even in this terrible hour of massacre, and in that infamous extermination of the Mormons from Missouri in the years 1838-39.
"One incident more, as a fitting close.
"Over that rude grave -- that well -- where the nineteen martyrs slept, where my murdered husband and boy were entombed, the mobbers of Missouri, with an exquisite fiendishness, which no savages could have conceived, had constructed a rude privy. This they constantly used, with a delight which demons might have envied, if demons are more wicked and horribly beastly than were they.
"Thus ends my chapter of the Haun's mill massacre, to rise in judgment against them!"
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[[User:Keepitreal2|Keepitreal2]] ([[User talk:Keepitreal2|talk]]) <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned"> — Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|undated]] comment added 16:12, 29 January 2015 (UTC)</span><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
::The only dead link I was referring to was [https://rsc.byu.edu/archived/mormon-redress-petitions-documents-1833-1838-missouri-conflict/part-iii-individual-affidav-0 Part III: Individual Affidavits from the National Archives (M–Z)] which was used to cite, "William Reynolds put his musket against Sardius's skull and blew off the top of his head, killing him."
::The [https://rsc.byu.edu/archived/mormon-redress-petitions-documents-1833-1838-missouri-conflict/part-iii-individual-affidav-0 Part III: Individual Affidavits from the National Archives (M–Z) link] is still a [[Wikipedia:Link rot|Dead Link]]. I used [https://web.archive.org/web/20131021195004/https://rsc.byu.edu/archived/mormon-redress-petitions-documents-1833-1838-missouri-conflict/part-iii-individual-affidav-0 wayback]] to find the page, but the only Williams to appear on the page was "William Niswanger" and "William Laughlin". No where is there a "William Reynolds" nor do the words "Reynolds", "musket", or "Sardius" appear anywhere. That source had failed [[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verification]] because it didn't say what it was being used to cite.
::However, that still doesn't address the other issues below. --- [[User:ARTEST4ECHO|ARTEST4ECHO]]<sup>([[User talk:ARTEST4ECHO|Talk]])</sup> 21:37, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
:::FYI, I found that the BYU resource can be found live [http://rsc.byu.edu/archived/mormon-redress-petitions-documents-1833-1838-missouri-conflict/part-iii-second-appeal here] and three sub-pages ([http://rsc.byu.edu/archived/mormon-redress-petitions-documents-1833-1838-missouri-conflict/part-iii-second-appeal-0], [http://rsc.byu.edu/archived/mormon-redress-petitions-documents-1833-1838-missouri-conflict/part-iii-second-appeal-1], [http://rsc.byu.edu/archived/mormon-redress-petitions-documents-1833-1838-missouri-conflict/part-iii-second-appeal-2]) but I am also unable to find the material we're trying to validate. <big><sup>—</sup></big><sup>[[User talk:AsteriskStarSplat|Asterisk]]</sup><big><big>[[User:AsteriskStarSplat|*]]</big></big><sup>[[Special:Contributions/AsteriskStarSplat|Splat]]</sup><big><sup>[[Special:Random|→]]</sup></big> 00:19, 30 January 2015 (UTC)

=== Requested reference... ===

I am presently at work and had stopped to check my mobile phone to see if there were any responses to recent changes on this article, and I came across Keepitreal's citation--FINALLY, I said to myself, something we can use: an outstanding first-person source that now allows (and indeed requires) a rewrite of the pertinent portions of this article. THIS is what we've been looking for, this whole time! I had written a complimentary reply to Keepitreal--whom I '''''still''''' compliment for her contribution--when the edit-conflict screen informed me that someone else had posted something new to this page.

As far as the feelings expressed by this editor toward myself and other editors throughout this entire matter, I simply say: "the Lord judge between us, and may His will be done." I serve a higher Master, One who calls me to forgive, to turn the other cheek, to do good even to those who hate me. I don't usually find that easy to do; as I am sure I have demonstrated, myself, here and on other past occasions. That said, I compliment Keepitreal for her contribution, and invite her to consider the notion that "you catch more flies with honey, than you do with flypaper." Wikipedia is a collaborative effort: we may not all agree on everything; we may even disagree sharply on even the most basic of issues--the challenge, and the point, is for us all to work together and 'get along.' If I have offended you in some way, Keepitreal, I apologize here and ask your forgiveness. And I equally extend my forgiveness to you, for any offense you have caused me.

This evening, when I return home from work, I intend to dedicate my evening to a complete rewrite of the appropriate portions of this article, to incorporate the source Keepitreal has given us, here. I consider it a valid source for purposes of this article, and hope to be able to incorporate it in a manner that will preserve the article's NPOV nature. As the man on the TV said: "stay tuned..." God bless you, Keepitreal, and I wish you only the very, very best--even if I must sharply disagree with you on some points (as I recently expressed here and on your talk page). - [[User:Ecjmartin|Ecjmartin]] ([[User talk:Ecjmartin|talk]]) 17:42, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

::I'm actually glad for the reference also. I am going to also use this source on the Hans Mill page, but it still isn't correct. Just so you know you can link the book [https://archive.org/stream/womenofmormondom00tullrich#page/116/mode/2up here]
::However, the source doesn't back up what it being used to cite. What it says is:
:::{{Quotation|Sardius was discovered after the massacre by the monsters who came in to despoil the bodies. The eldest, Williard, was not discovered. In cold blood, one Glaze, of Carroll county, presented a rifle near the head of Sardius and literally blew off the upper part of it, leaving the skull empty and dry while the brains and the hair of the murdered boy were scattered around and on the walls.}}
::No where dose it say that "William Reynolds" did it. It say someone named "one Glaze, of Carroll county" did it. William Reynold isn't mention at all with regards to killing Sardius. Therefore even using the new source, as written, has failed [[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verification]]. I have reworded its use on Haun's Mill.
:::As for the indlusion here, I still think saying "one Glaze, of Carroll county, put his musket against Sardius's skull and blew off the top of his head, killing him." is [[Wikipedia:Scope|out of scope]] and [[WP:POV]]. It isn't needed and this page isn't about Haun's Mill.--- [[User:ARTEST4ECHO|ARTEST4ECHO]]<sup>([[User talk:ARTEST4ECHO|Talk]])</sup> 20:51, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
::::Hang loose, if you can... I just got home, and am just getting started. I'll let you know when I'm done, and you can tell me what you think and offer/make any needed changes. - [[User:Ecjmartin|Ecjmartin]] ([[User talk:Ecjmartin|talk]]) 22:45, 29 January 2015 (UTC)


== New Stuff... ==
== New Stuff... ==

Revision as of 01:02, 29 July 2015


Recent edits

Recently, this article has been hit by a series of edit-and-reverts, which I have been partially involved in. Myself and Tripleahg (talk have endeavored (see previous section) to raise issues that we feel should be discussed here with regard to some of these edits, but not all of those involved in this "edit conflict" have chosen to participate. It is not enough to insist that a one-line edit summary is a sufficient substitute for an in-depth talk page discussion, especially when other, established Wikipedia editors have asked for one. It is not enough to insist that myself and Tripleahg are unable to recognize some alleged "inconvenient truth," without discussing in depth what that "truth" is, and how we are failing to recognize it. If there's some "inconvenient truth" being ignored here, I would invite you in a friendly and gentlemanly spirit to come over here and discuss it with us. Let's all work together, and see if we can't agree on a way to make this article the best it can be. You state your side; each of us will state ours, and we'll see if we can't meet somewhere in the middle. How 'bout it? Cheeers! - Ecjmartin (talk) 18:42, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Although I was not involved until today's edit by me, I figure I would see if I can't sum up the issue at hand and give my opinion.
It seems to me this edit is where the issues came up. Ultimately it seems to me that the dispute is if there were any deaths caused by Missouri Executive Order 44. So it comes down to the following questions:
  1. If were any death directly related to the Missouri Executive Order 44 (Order 44).
  2. If those that died due to the wintry conditions the expelled the Mormons faced can be considered deaths from Order 44.
  3. If the deaths at Haun's Mill massacre three days later can be considered deaths from Order 44.
In my opinion, and I believe Ecjmartin and Tripleahg would agree, the answer to all three of this is NO for the following reasons:
  1. While many people died, it was not directly related to the Missouri Executive Order 44. The academic consensus is that at no time did the militiamen use Order 44 to kill someone. All the deaths were caused by the wintry conditions.
  2. While some argument can be made that since the Mormons face the wintry conditions due to Order 44, they died from Order 44. I don't see any reliable sources making that claim. I also feel it falls under Post hoc ergo propter hoc ( "after this, therefore because of this", a type of Logical fallacy). Just because Order 44 came first, doesn't mean it was the cause of the deaths. Would the militiamen have expelled the Mormons without Order 44? Did they even know about Order 44? If that answer to ether question is "Yes", then the Mormons did not die from Order 44, even though it came first.
  3. There is no evidence that the militiamen who were at Haun's Mill knew of the Order 44. If this is to be included there needs to be reliable sources as the academic consensus is that they didn't.
Unless some serious reliable sources can be found directly linking the deaths to order 44, it should written as it is. The current format is more WP:NPOV, while still addresses the fact that people died. The only real difference is the new version place direct blame on Order 44, while the original version states indirect causes.
However, I would love to hear from the other side of this debate.--- ARTEST4ECHO (talk) 19:28, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Wholeheartedly agree with this. This is what I've been trying to say, all along. Nobody--certainly not me!--disputes that Boggs did an vile, reprehensible thing in issuing Order 44; the fundamental question is whether anyone can prove that people died as a direct result of it via academic sources that are acceptable for this encyclopedia. Let's consider the following:
  1. Not one participant in the Haun's Mill Massacre ever cited this missive; indeed, there's no evidence that they even knew of it at the time this evil event occurred. To insinuate in any way that they might have, without direct, academically-acceptable evidence to back that up, is misleading and totally out of place in an NPOV encyclopedia. No other persons involved in the murder of any Mormon ever cited it, either, to my knowledge. If someone can show us proof to the contrary, I for one would love to see it.
  2. General Clark did mention the Governor's order more than once (including the word "exterminated") at Far West when he addressed the Saints after their surrender. However, he equally made it clear that HE WOULD NOT ENFORCE THAT ORDER AT THIS PARTICULAR TIME; RATHER HE TOLD THE SAINTS THAT THEY COULD REMAIN TEMPORARILY, simply warning them not to think of "putting in crops" or "staying another season." This indicates that Clark--to whom Boggs had given full authority to execute Order 44--had no intention of forcing the Mormons out of Missouri in the dead of winter. While one might infer that the Saints didn't (for excellent reasons) trust Clark, Boggs or any other Missouri authorities and thus felt they should leave right then, this was still THEIR decision. We would need a firsthand source from the Mormons at this time SAYING that this was their reason, in order to attribute the winter deaths directly to Order 44. Otherwise, it remains that the Mormons (again, for entirely understandable reasons) chose not to avail themselves of Clark's "clemency" (as he put it)--but this was still THEIR decision and MUST be presented as such.
Don't get me wrong: if I were a Mormon in Far West in 1838, I'd have packed my stuff and headed out within one hour of Clark's speech, "clemency" or not. But to say that Order 44 was directly responsible by itself for the Mormon deaths in the winter of 1838-39, without equally referencing Clark's offer to DELAY its enforcement until the following spring and the MORMON decision (again, for entirely understandable reasons--nobody here, I think, would debate that!) not to avail themselves of it, is POV and misleading.
In summary, I would say that Points 1 and 3 raised earlier by Artist I am in 100% agreement with; Point 2 I would say I am in "qualified" agreement with, for the reasons given above. In general, I wholeheartedly concur. We need to keep this article on this still-volatile subject as factual and neutral as possible, and it seems to me that the edit restored by Artist does that best. - Ecjmartin (talk) 01:38, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure why you guys think your Opinion matters. You have stated it is your opinion this and your opinion that... trying to talk your way out of the facts is arbitrary. My edits were sourced, my answers to you factual and concise. Hot air is still hot air, no matter which way you try to blow it. You are trying to rewrite history... and even went so far as to blame the Mormons for leaving. Your arrogance is beyond unacceptable. Believe you me, this will be resolved. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Keepitreal2 (talkcontribs) 22:31, 27 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Our opinion matters, for the same reason yours does, and everyone else's does. Because we are human beings. Because we have a right to one, and to express it in a civil manner. I hate to say this, and I mean no offense, but I have yet to see you do this here--and until you do, I refuse to carry this discussion further. Come back sometime, when you're ready to do so. I'll be waiting. Until then, God bless you and yours. - Ecjmartin (talk) 23:25, 27 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
No sir, Your Opinion does not matter. Not in the presentation of facts. It's a simple journalistic concept. Not one of my design. Keepitreal2 (talk) 08:22, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Let's check one of your "facts." I quote: "As stated before, there is no proof they had no knowledge and given the political positions the men had there is more probability they knew than did not." Is this "fact?" I don't think so. You used that as an edit summary to justify insisting that they knew. "Probability" is not fact; it's opinion. So why should your opinion matter, and mine should not?? On your talk page you speak of your "credentials," which appear to consist entirely of a list of your great-grandfathers. Does this make you an expert?? Joseph Smith III was Joseph Smith's own son; should I take HIS insistence that his father wasn't a polygamist over the overwhelming evidence that he was--just because he was Smith's eldest boy?? I have tried VERY hard to be understanding here, while you have been belligerent, flippant and downright hostile--not just to me, but to all of the other editors who have tried to engage with you on this subject. I still have no desire to offend you, but you apparently do not care whether you offend me, or anyone else here. That said, I STILL thank you for your source, and will still use it in my rewrite, this evening. - Ecjmartin (talk) 22:42, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Do I point out here that the fact was You Had No Proof they didn't know about it??? Or do you need a little time for it to dawn on you? Keepitreal2 (talk) 04:01, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't need any proof that they didn't know; all I needed was to state, as I did, that there was no evidence that they knew of it--because since you hadn't yet shared with the rest of us the evidence that you had, we had none. I made no false statements, there; all I did was to factually affirm the academic consensus, and the fact (as it appeared then, in the absence of the evidence you provided only just today) that none of the militiamen ever cited the order as an excuse for what they did. I and several other editors repeatedly asked you to provide evidence to show otherwise; only this morning did you do so. I have nothing personal against you for the position you've taken; all I am saying is that in the absence of evidence of the kind you provided only just today, I had no choice but to write what I did. As I said earlier, the "probability" you cited in your earlier edit summary is not proof. Today, you finally provided us with some hard evidence to work with--for which I thank you, in all sincerity, once again. If you had given us this when we first asked for it, a lot of this could have been avoided. Again, no hard feelings on my end; I understand the emotional issues involved here, especially when this concerns family. I just wish you could have told us all this a few days ago. That's all. - Ecjmartin (talk) 04:07, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps the takeaway here is writing about something so important and personal, to which your knowledge is limited and presentig it as fact, might not be the best idea. As much as you might want to be an expert, you never will be.

By yall saying a mother's firsthand account of her experience with this order is questionable... welp... this is where I sign off... I'm not dealing with peeps in the right state of mind... while it "This drama" might be the most exciting thing to happen to you guys all week, what yall consider casual entertainment is actually mocking others deep rooted pain and long term generational affects of genocide.

I will let the admins take it from here. Peace. Keepitreal2 (talk) 04:36, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not trying to be, or pass myself off as being, an "expert." I am not such, have never considered myself such, and nobody else has ever said I was such. I am merely an honest seeker after truth, trying to muddle through a difficult and volatile subject as best I can--just like every other editor on this encyclopedia, in the ultimate sense. You used a word that I think summarizes the entire dilemma here: "personal." For you--and I can totally respect this--this whole Order 44 / Haun's Mill tragedy is very personal, since it concerns your ancestors. Hence, out of respect to them and love for them, you accord their journals, etc. a level of credibility that others who aren't so "personally" involved do not, and cannot, because they have no independent proof that they are completely trustworthy. You may consider them eminently trustworthy, and that is certainly your right--and again, considering the fact that these people are your ancestors, this is completely understandable and respectable. What I, and the rest of the editors out here wish to get across to you is that we can't consider them that way until we find some reason, other than your insistence that they are, to do so. You, I believe, would insist on the same thing, if our roles were reversed.
Your continued insistence that we simply take your word for this isn't enough--and nor should it be. But this is precisely what you are insisting on. I didn't see it before, but I realize after reading your latest entry, here, that this is SO very "personal" for you, that you are genuinely unable to see the concerns that the rest of us have, or how your own deeply-felt (and again, very understandable and respectable) emotions have caused you to behave in an insensitive, even rude, manner toward other editors. I haven't been perfect, either; I have let my emotions get the better of me here a time or two, and for that I apologize. But I realize now that there's really no real solution, no "middle ground" that we can find, here. I refuse to ask for any sanctions against you, only because I believe you are a sincere person who is "too close" to this matter (in terms of it involving your own ancestors) to understand where the rest of us are coming from, or to give our concerns any consideration or validity. So I am going to wash my hands of this conflict, as of now--because I don't think this is a battle either "side" here can win. I wish you no ill will; I sincerely wish only God's blessings on you and yours. I am sorry for what happened to your ancestors--just as I'm sorry for what happened to the families of my Jewish friends in Hitler's Europe, or my Orthodox friends in Soviet Russia. I know people who have experienced genocide--not through the pages of an ancestral journal, but sadly, in their very own lives. I hope you're able to find peace, friend, and I also hope someday you can understand where the rest of us were coming from here--and realize that we were never your enemies. Cheers, and God bless! - Ecjmartin (talk) 05:42, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Keepitreal2, I'm having trouble finding your answers to ARTEST4ECHO. I see above you mentioned they were "factual and concise" and I wonder if I am overlooking them because they are concise? I'd really appreciate it if you could direct me to those answers, particularly the answer to his question #3, but I'd really like to hear your response to all three of the questions he raised.
I also moved up and indented your comment right above this one so that it's easier to see who is responding to what. I hope that's ok- if not, please put your extra line breaks back in and remove the colons. I don't want to overstep any boundaries with anything that approaches editing someone else's posts, so all I did was shift it up and right slightly for clarity in reading the thread. But if that's too much I apologize, you can just change it right back. Tripleahg (talk) 10:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Arbitrary Break

Keepitreal2 keeps saying that "My edits were sourced, my answers to you factual and concise." so I have gone and looked at the sources. There are three:

1. "Part III: Individual Affidavits from the National Archives (M–Z)," in Mormon Redress Petitions: Documents of the 1833–1838 Missouri Conflict, ed Clark V. Johnson (Provo, Utah: Religious Studies Center, Brigham Young University, 1992), 493–559.
2. History of the Church, Vol. III, Jul. 1139, 182–186.
3. Andrew Jenson, Historical Record, Dec. 1888, 673.

So lets address the first two:

1. Part III: Individual Affidavits from the National Archives (M–Z) is used to cite, "William Reynolds put his musket against Sardius's skull and blew off the top of his head, killing him."
Frist Part III: Individual Affidavits from the National Archives (M–Z) is a Dead Link. Using wayback, I find that the last time this page was active was 2013. If you go to the 2013 archive the only Williams to appear are William Niswanger" and "William Laughlin". No where is there a "William Reynolds" nor do the words "Reynolds", "musket", or "Sardius" appear anywhere. This source had Failed verification.
Fabulous change it to this one. Religion of a Different Color: Race and the Mormon Struggle for Whiteness W. Paul Reeve, Oxford University Press, Feb 2, 2015 - History - 352 pages - Located page 54.
Dead link != not verifiable or true. Keepitreal2 (talk) 08:38, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I was able to look up this source. It reads: After putting a gun to the head of young Sardius Smith and pulling the trigger, Missouri militiaman William Reynolds declared, "Nits will make lice, and if he had lived he would have become a Mormon."
"The Historical Record" by Andrew Jenson, p 673 (https://archive.org/stream/historicalrecord01jens#page/672/mode/2up), also names the murderer as William Reynolds, and unlike the above source, it confirms the bullet "literally shot off the upper part" of the boy's head. But it also says that the gun was "near" his head as opposed to "to" his head, and the below source (the recollections of the boy's mother) also states "near" and in fact seems to have been a source upon which "Historical Record" drew. So of the three, I think the most primary and accurate source for this particular information is probably the below source, followed by "Historical Record" for other details that she didn't mention which were taken from other (likely also primary or near-primary) sources. Tripleahg (talk) 01:09, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
2. History of the Church V III is used to cite the statement, "Although participants in the massacre boasted of their acts for years, none of the Missouri attackers were ever brought to trial".
No where between pages 182 and 186 dose it address the Post massacre behavior of participants in the massacre. Pages 182-186 discuss the "Gathering of the Mob at Richmond", "Gen. Clark's Movements", and "Joseph Young's Narrative of the Massacre at Haun's Mills". NOTHING is mentioned about the POST massacre and Mormon War events until page 197 and that is the Trial of Joseph Smith et all. No mention of any request for trial nor the behavior of the participants in the massacre occurs. This source had Failed verification.

Now lets address the last one:

3. The Historical Record is used to cite "Reynolds later explained, "Nits will make lice, and if he had lived he would have become a Mormon.". After much looking
Finally one that is actually right, partly. I had to go and look for this occurrence myself as the cited source isn't complete. After much looking I found it here. Reynolds did say that....AND? What has that got to do with Order 44? The cite says nothing of Order 44. It says that Reynolds made this statement during the Haun's Mill massacre, before he had even heard of Order 44. Even the citations says nothing of Order 44. Wikipedia:Scope explains the problem. The Haun's Mill massacre is out of this pages Wikipedia:Scope, which is determined by Wikipedia:Consensus. Therefore it is irrelevant that it is true that he said it as it is out of this pages Scope, so it doesn't belong.

Simply put two the sources have Failed verification and All Three are Out of Scope. Therefore none of them can be part of this page per Wikipedia:Verifiability, not truth and Wikipedia:Scope.

Since one of the sources is a Dead Link, it would seems that Keepitreal2 just copied and pasting this from Haun's Mill massacre without bothering to read the cites, then modified the wording to introduce a WP:POV, which hasn't even been addressed by Keepitreal2. Ultimately the Haun's Mill massacre has nothing to do with Missouri Executive Order 44. The academic consensus is that the participates in the massacre had no knowledge of Order 44, making all of this irrelevant to a page on Order 44.

Lastly, Wikipedia:Consensus makes it clear, Consensus is "the primary way decisions are made on Wikipedia". Given that Four editor have rejected the new wording, that 2 of the 3 sources have Fail verification, that all 3 are out of scope, and that Keepitreal2 is simply refusing to accept the Consensus, the page should stay the way it is.--- ARTEST4ECHO(Talk) 14:17, 28 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

ARTEST4ECHO, I appreciate your thorough work checking those sources. Tripleahg (talk) 10:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Ditto. - Ecjmartin (talk) 22:44, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

New Stuff...

I'm putting this into a new section, since there's so much stuff in the previous sections and subsections...

This morning I had only time for a cursory examination of the source offered by Keepitreal with regard to Order 44 and Haun's Mill. Upon examining this source more closely this afternoon, it appears that the incident referred to in it (as stated by the eyewitnesses themselves) occurred on October 26, a full day before Order 44 was issued. Hence, I can see the difficulties academic historians have, in using this as "proof" that the militiamen at that slaughter knew of Boggs' decree. However, since it refers to an alleged order of the governor extremely similar to the wording of Order 44 (the only real difference being the "ten days" part), I decided to include the quote here with appropriate notations as to the date to preserve NPOV.

I also reworked the opener somewhat (as you can see), to incorporate this new information. I also took care of the issue you raised, Tripleahg, by tying the "new orders" directly to Order 44 just prior to the quote.

Since this article is not about Haun's Mill (which has an article entirely devoted to it), I kept the Haun's Mill information here to a minimum--basically, just info that's directly pertinent to this subject, here--while providing a direct link to the main article for interested parties to access.

Take a look, and tell me what you think. I think this is the best we can do, given that the date given by the eyewitnesses themselves is one day prior to Order 44 being issued. I do thank Keepitreal2 once again, for bringing this source to our attention. - Ecjmartin (talk) 23:33, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I think I figured it out. Took me a lot of time and reading today! I now have to try to sleep tonight with fresh memories of page after page of stomach-turning affadavits. But I found what I was looking for here, under Henderson, James: http://rsc.byu.edu/archived/mormon-redress-petitions-documents-1833-1838-missouri-conflict/part-iii-second-appeal-1 (spelling/punctuation updated and emphasis added as well as dates):
"What was more surprising then all the rest was the Governor's order of extermination, which reached Far West in some days after [it was given, which was October 27th]. This order reached Far West about the 4th or 5th day of November, but before this, there was [Major] General [Samuel D.] Lucas of Jackson County- arrived about the 29th or 30th day of October- which also had an order to eliminate us if we would not comply with their proposals. That was, if we would give up our arms, and sign away all our property to pay the expense of the war, and leave the State forthwith, that we could live. Otherwise we must die. Which order was a forged one, without contradiction. ... Among them was Captain S[amuel] Bogart, Mathew McGaw, John Craig, Kneel Gillum, Charles Morehead, Lieutenant Cook. (About this time there was a massacre. Took place at Haun's Mill, where the mob fell upon a settlement of our people and killed 18.) ... General Lucas then took 7 prisoners (and started for Jackson county), names of which is Joseph Smith Jr, Hyrum Smith, ... and started for Jackson County [on November 2nd]. The next day or two [November 4], general [John Bullock] Clark arrived with 1200–1500 men with the proper order of Extermination from the Governor. Though, between the time of Lucas' departure and the arrival of Clark, we was ... forced to sign this deed of trust. Among those of our antagonists were Wiley Williams, Thomas Berch, George M. Hinkle."
Henderson says it's uncontested that Lucas made up his "orders" but Clark had real ones. He associates the fake orders with the massacre in addition to the anti-mormon behaviors Lucas' men were enacting in Far West. I'll come back to the link to Haun's Mill in a minute, but first:
I see some substantial differences between the fake order and the real one. Even if we didn't have the above affidavit I think the first one seems less than legit.
  1. I don't see the word "extermination" but rather "eliminate", while all or nearly all references to the real order use some form of "exterminate".
  2. Lucas' "order" mentions "indiscriminately shoot[ing] down women and children", but even his own men found it controversial to murder children (as described later in the long block quote). These are the same men who thought nothing of wounding children, torturing adults to death, using human bodies as a latrine for days while the grieving families hide in nearby woods and watch, etc etc. Clark's militiamen were engaged in mob violence, but not to that level of depravity. They would not have stood for what Lucas was describing. In fact Lucas wanted Joseph Smith and the six other adult male prisoners executed the day after they were captured, but militiamen from a slightly less savage group refused to allow it, instead ensuring that Smith et al. were brought to a jail to await a trial with a judge who was not also jury and executioner. This is a huge difference between the two "orders." I have trouble believing this difference is just that Lucas was misquoted repeatedly and Clark was quoted accurately. It seems much more likely that Lucas, knowing that expulsion from various counties had already been happening, found it convenient to lie about this expulsion rule now applying to the entire state. I'll also come back to this later, with why he would want to be lying in this situation, but for now I'm just saying that the phrasing and implications are wildly different between the two. This would also explain why the murderers at Haun's Mill never cited EO44 as justification- they knew they had gone far beyond the scope of EO44, even in the eyes of fellow Missourians. If it was all the same order, we would expect that order to be mentioned as justification after the fact, but it wasn't.
  3. While both "orders" say the Mormons can either leave the state or die, the first one adds that they must fully disarm and also sign away all their property to pay the troops acting against them. The latter requirement is counterproductive as they can't move if they have no property to sell to get provisions, and no livestock to pull wagons. Boggs would have understood that, and Clark demonstrates his understanding of it when he keeps most of the men with their families and withdraws the troops so they have some space to get ready to leave, plus gives them several months to get ready. Clark is actually trying to succeed in driving out the Mormons, knowing he has to be a bit more hands-off in order to get them out the door. Lucas is trying to fail at driving them out, so he can shoot everybody. His "order" conveniently aligns with that goal, and EO44 does not, which I think strongly suggests that this isn't a simple issue of people misquoting him.
  4. This goes even further with Lucas demanding they be gone within 10 days, which is completely impossible even if he did allow them to keep their horses and the other things necessary to move. Boggs wants them out of the state. Clark wants them out of the state. Paradoxically, a 10 day requirement actually makes it harder for them to get out. Why try when failure is a guarantee? EO44 is worded as though Boggs wants them out. Lucas' wording is as though he wants to make ridiculous demands and then kill all the Mormons very slowly. Again, I think it's unlikely that these are both the same order and Lucas was just misquoted in a way that happens to be really convenient for him (see below). It's much more likely that the two orders are simply different from each other.
On a related note, why would Lucas have them sign the treaty if it's a law he is enforcing? They don't have to sign anything when Clark arrives holding an order that's actually legal to enforce.
I think Clark's speech implies the treaty and EO44 are different things: He says the saints signed a treaty with Lucas. He intends to hold them to it. If he had been in Lucas' place he would have made the same demands Lucas did. He makes a tangential comment about character, then makes his main point: Boggs ordered him to exterminate or drive out the Mormons. Had they refused to unconditionally surrender to Lucas they would have had their houses burned and then been killed, but in contrast, Boggs' orders to Clark allow him to be flexible. He is not actually going to enforce all the property seizures in the treaty, instead allowing them to live in their homes until Spring, and on top of that he is withdrawing the troops so the saints can raise funds/provisions for the exodus instead of cowering under muskets the whole time. In the speech he always calls the prior agreement a "treaty" but he calls what he has an "order". He doesn't come out and say that Lucas was lying about having orders from Boggs, but he certainly isn't conflating the treaty and EO44.
Looking at the above block quote from the murdered boy's mother, I think it's more consistent with Lucas lying than it is with Lucas telling the truth. He makes the refugees gather at Haun's Mill, disarming them on the way. Then according to other sources I read today, Lucas and his men come close to the settlement and look menacing just to freak people out. It works. Then they send a man into town and pretend at concern- we didn't want to scare you! Let's make a peace treaty just to soothe your anxieties! And then... the next day? Day after? I can't remember. Lucas invades and ignores the guy he'd signed the treaty with, even as the guy yells "Peace! Peace!" Some Mormon men start running into the blacksmith's while still calling out for a truce. Lucas says that any man who doesn't want to get shot should also go into the blacksmith's, implying he will accept their surrender once they all gather there. Then he waits several seconds with neither him nor his mob-men shooting at the men running toward the blacksmith's. He gives his men the signal and they all simultaneously shoot at the blacksmith's, just once, for effect. They then approach and surround it and we all know the story from there. While some of those details may have been exaggerated by the mormons writing the affidavits, I think it's pretty obvious that Lucas was planning a massacre from at least the time he re-routed the settlers to Haun's Mill if not before. Making up a lie about an order from Boggs fits the timeline better than EO44, which hadn't been written yet. And a lie fits with his vile planning process much better than the comparatively almost-civilized EO44. The similarities between his lie and the real order are easily explained when we recall that expulsion orders were already present for individual counties and they were on everyone's mind, making it only a small leap for Boggs to think up a statewide order, and a small leap for Lucas to also think up a fake statewide order, within several days of each other.
What cinched it for me was that Baugh in "A Call to Arms" (a very long, academic book on the Mormon War that was originally his PhD dissertation and then got picked up by a real publisher) has an entire chapter on the massacre. It has an eight page subchapter called "The Attack Not Connected to the Exterminating Order". I was unable to find any copies of this subchapter online for free, but Hartley in "Missouri’s 1838 Extermination Order" states "Baugh argues persuasively that the attackers had not heard about the extermination order; see Baugh, 'A Call to Arms,' 296–98". I looked into Baugh's credentials and there is no way he is simply unfamiliar with the sources we are reviewing today. So to me that strongly, strongly suggests that there is a solid case to be made that Lucas was lying, and EO44 and Haun's Mill are truly not directly connected. If anyone has access to Baugh's book or can determine what argument he spends eight pages making, particularly the three pages Hartley found persuasive, I think it would be extremely valuable for this discussion. Tripleahg (talk) 09:03, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I'm done here, folks. - Ecjmartin (talk) 17:57, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
It took some time for me to read over this. Thank you Tripleahg for looking over all this stufd. I agree what that EO44 and Haun's Mill are truly not directly connected. The statement is already cited with another source. Hopefully that will help calm things down.--- ARTEST4ECHO(Talk) 14:52, 4 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Giving Up

Ecjmartin has quit wikipedia over this. I'm out too. There are many published academic sources saying that EO44 was not related to the Haun's Mill massacre. Your source is the stories you were told as a child. If your family tradition states that satan himself took over the body of Governor Boggs and transformed him into a dragon who personally delivered EO44 across the state in less than a day before he ate several people and used their bones to guard diamonds, that's wonderful. Put it in the article.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Tripleahg (talk

Hartley, William G. (2001). "Missouri's 1838 Extermination Order and the Mormons' Forced Removal to Illinois" (PDF). Mormon Historical Studies. 2 (1): 6. is the source that Haun's Mill massacre used to show that published academic sources saying that EO44 was not related to the Haun's Mill massacre. It isn't hard to find others.--- ARTEST4ECHO(Talk) 16:54, 2 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]