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Hello, Cmurphey80, and welcome to Wikipedia!

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Such as you did from [1] Thanks Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 03:31, 28 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Treatment

We discuss it in the management section and say "There is no cure for RA, but treatments can improve symptoms and slow the progress of the disease. Disease-modifying treatment has the best results when it is started early and aggressively.[62]"

Thus the content you added is already covered? Please advise. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 04:44, 28 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: DiCentral Corporation (September 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

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SwisterTwister talk 08:06, 20 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Cmurphey80, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! SwisterTwister talk 08:06, 20 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: DiCentral Corporation (September 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timtrent was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Fiddle Faddle 08:27, 22 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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-== COI ==
-You seem to have previously alluded that you're an employee or stakeholder for "DiCentral Corporation". Have you had a chance to read over our [[WP:COI|conflict of interest guidelines]]? Are your employers aware you're altering the pages of your competitors? That seems poorly thought out; you may want to consult with your corporate communications or PR function very quickly.  Also, per the [[WP:TOU|terms of use]], you need to explicitly identify yourself as a paid editor, in the employ of the firm you're promoting, if that's the case. [[User:Kuru|<span style="font-family:Segoe print; color:#cd853f; text-shadow:gray 0.2em 0.2em 0.4em;">Kuru</span>]] [[User talk:Kuru|<span style="color:#f5deb3">''(talk)''</span>]] 13:47, 26 September 2015 (UTC)
-I am actually not being paid to do this.  I am trying to help them with their page on my own time. I was trying to put up the page and used the same sort of references that similar companies used.  When it was turned down and each site was shot down I decided to correct the others.  I've already told them they don't qualify and the DiCentral page won't be updated anymore.--[[User:Cmurphey80|Cmurphey80]] ([[User talk:Cmurphey80#top|talk]]) 23:07, 26 September 2015 (UTC)