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Hello, I am an undergraduate student at Washington University in St. Louis editing this page for a class assignment. I restructured your page to organize it in a way with which things flow together better. Specifically, I created all the current subsections under larger sections (especially under 'Behavior'). I think this is easier to follow than having each specific behavior have its own main section. I also eliminated your 'Overview' section and combined that with your introductory hook, as I saw that having them separate was redundant. I also took the liberty of fixing your reference/citation problems, so everything is correctly cited to the linked reference in the end section. Hope this helps! [[User:Marcus.kwon|Marcus.kwon]] ([[User talk:Marcus.kwon|talk]]) 18:31, 30 September 2015 (UTC) |
Hello, I am an undergraduate student at Washington University in St. Louis editing this page for a class assignment. I restructured your page to organize it in a way with which things flow together better. Specifically, I created all the current subsections under larger sections (especially under 'Behavior'). I think this is easier to follow than having each specific behavior have its own main section. I also eliminated your 'Overview' section and combined that with your introductory hook, as I saw that having them separate was redundant. I also took the liberty of fixing your reference/citation problems, so everything is correctly cited to the linked reference in the end section. Hope this helps! [[User:Marcus.kwon|Marcus.kwon]] ([[User talk:Marcus.kwon|talk]]) 18:31, 30 September 2015 (UTC) |
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Hi, I am an undergraduate student at Washington University in St. Louis peer reviewing this page for the same class assignment as the student above. First of all, I added a course banner to the talk page. This article was thorough and well-written in the "Behavior" section. I removed "Britain Distribution," as I did not think it was necessary, and put all the information concerning the species distribution under "Distribution." In addition, I would expand the section "Habitat" with information concerning the specific types of niches B. sylvestris might occupy in the environments they are in. I also edited for grammatical errors, particularly under "Colony Cycle". [[User:Eliseoh|Eliseoh]] ([[User talk:Eliseoh|talk]]) 20:57, 1 October 2015 (UTC) |
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Section/Subsection Reorganization + Reference/Citation Fixes
Hello, I am an undergraduate student at Washington University in St. Louis editing this page for a class assignment. I restructured your page to organize it in a way with which things flow together better. Specifically, I created all the current subsections under larger sections (especially under 'Behavior'). I think this is easier to follow than having each specific behavior have its own main section. I also eliminated your 'Overview' section and combined that with your introductory hook, as I saw that having them separate was redundant. I also took the liberty of fixing your reference/citation problems, so everything is correctly cited to the linked reference in the end section. Hope this helps! Marcus.kwon (talk) 18:31, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
Wikipedia Peer Review
Hi, I am an undergraduate student at Washington University in St. Louis peer reviewing this page for the same class assignment as the student above. First of all, I added a course banner to the talk page. This article was thorough and well-written in the "Behavior" section. I removed "Britain Distribution," as I did not think it was necessary, and put all the information concerning the species distribution under "Distribution." In addition, I would expand the section "Habitat" with information concerning the specific types of niches B. sylvestris might occupy in the environments they are in. I also edited for grammatical errors, particularly under "Colony Cycle". Eliseoh (talk) 20:57, 1 October 2015 (UTC)