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Comments by Krishna Vangipuram (Krish707)

Overall, I believed this article contained a lot of interesting information. Originally, this section was completely one large paragraph, which made it difficult to comprehend the material. In order to better improve this article, I primarily consolidated the information in this section in four main sub-sections: Polyandrous Behavior, Fitness Benefits of Polyandrous Behavior, Fitness Consequences of Polyandrous Behavior, and Mate Search and Reproductive Success. I also added paragraph headings and moved consolidated relevant information under each paragraph heading (I moved text around). Krish707 (talk)

In terms of sentence structure, I introduced transitions in two paragraph headings, to better improve the flow of information. For example, under the Infanticide from a Female Perspective heading, I added an introductory sentence, which introduced the topic of infanticide. Under the Infanticide from a Male Perspective heading, I also added an introductory sentence, which introduced the main reason why infanticide increases an individual male’s fitness. Krish707 (talk)

In terms of content, I primarily added some background information regarding the geographic distribution of the spider and the type of prey it captures. In addition, based on my own research, I expanded on the topic of genetic compatibility in terms of multiple mating. I cited an experiment in which it was shown that although multiple mating increases the likelihood of genetic compatibility, it did not contribute to an increase in population size over generations (hence it is not a fitness advantage). Krish707 (talk)

It was a very good article in general and I learned a lot from it! Krish707 (talk)

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+== Comment Section ==
+=== Comments by Krishna Vangipuram (Krish707) ===
+Overall, I believed this article contained a lot of interesting information. Originally, this section was completely one large paragraph, which made it difficult to comprehend the material. In order to better improve this article, I primarily consolidated the information in this section in four main sub-sections: Polyandrous Behavior, Fitness Benefits of Polyandrous Behavior, Fitness Consequences of Polyandrous Behavior, and Mate Search and Reproductive Success. I also added paragraph headings and moved consolidated relevant information under each paragraph heading (I moved text around). [[User:Krish707|Krish707]] ([[User talk:Krish707|talk]])
+In terms of sentence structure, I introduced transitions in two paragraph headings, to better improve the flow of information.  For example, under the Infanticide from a Female Perspective heading, I added an introductory sentence, which introduced the topic of infanticide.  Under the Infanticide from a Male Perspective heading, I also added an introductory sentence, which introduced the main reason why infanticide increases an individual male’s fitness. [[User:Krish707|Krish707]] ([[User talk:Krish707|talk]])
+In terms of content, I primarily added some background information regarding the geographic distribution of the spider and the type of prey it captures. In addition, based on my own research, I expanded on the topic of genetic compatibility in terms of multiple mating. I cited an experiment in which it was shown that although multiple mating increases the likelihood of genetic compatibility, it did not contribute to an increase in population size over generations (hence it is not a fitness advantage). [[User:Krish707|Krish707]] ([[User talk:Krish707|talk]])
+It was a very good article in general and I learned a lot from it! [[User:Krish707|Krish707]] ([[User talk:Krish707|talk]])