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Although the "lead" section is quite short, it still gave me insight as to what the article would be about in the coming information. Once you gather more research, I would suggest expanding the "lead section," including her birth date and death date in the beginning of the lead as well. You might also want to find out what year "Young Abe Lincoln" was published and put that into your article. I suggest this because after the Marsh Joint Guardianship Law is mentioned, which took place in 1913, the next date to be mentioned is her death in 1946. This large gap makes me curious as to what went on during the years between, if anything. William.hirsch (talk) 17:13, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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+== Peer Review / 10/4 ==
+Although the "lead" section is quite short, it still gave me insight as to what the article would be about in the coming information. Once you gather more research, I would suggest expanding the "lead section," including her birth date and death date in the beginning of the lead as well. You might also want to find out what year "Young Abe Lincoln" was published and put that into your article. I suggest this because after the Marsh Joint Guardianship Law is mentioned, which took place in 1913, the next date to be mentioned is her death in 1946. This large gap makes me curious as to what went on during the years between, if anything. [[User:William.hirsch|William.hirsch]] ([[User talk:William.hirsch|talk]]) 17:13, 4 October 2016 (UTC)