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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 05:02, 23 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Ok. will take a look at this - jot notes below and copyedit as I go. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:02, 23 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

''As previously mentioned, iodine is the least reactive of the halogens, though it is still one of the more reactive elements. - no need to spoon feed - why not, "Though it is the least reactive of the halogens, iodine is still one of the more reactive elements. "

Done Double sharp (talk) 05:42, 23 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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 Ok. will take a look at this - jot notes below and copyedit as I go. [[User:Casliber|Cas Liber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 05:02, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
-::''As previously mentioned, iodine is the least reactive of the halogens, though it is still one of the more reactive elements.''  - no need to spoon feed - why not, "Though it is the least reactive of the halogens, iodine is still one of the more reactive elements. "
+::'<s>'As previously mentioned, iodine is the least reactive of the halogens, though it is still one of the more reactive elements.''  - no need to spoon feed - why not, "Though it is the least reactive of the halogens, iodine is still one of the more reactive elements. "</s>
 :::{{done}} [[User:Double sharp|Double sharp]] ([[User talk:Double sharp|talk]]) 05:42, 23 October 2016 (UTC)