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Reviewer: DannyMusicEditor (talk · contribs) 19:58, 21 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

As part of a review deal, I'd be happy to review this, but I'm going to start on Thursday, possibly Wednesday. Hope to see another wonderful passing article! dannymusiceditor ^{Speak up!} 19:58, 21 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section:

B. Cites reliable sources, where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused (see summary style):
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
It seems Wikipedia doesn't have an appropriate one available.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
New part of my review policy: Please don't make any changes until I finish the review.

Toolbox checks

Everything in the GA toolbox checks out fine.

Lead & Infobox

Album cover needs alt text, something I neglected to catch in "Give It All" (oops!)
As a result of their newfound exposure... What exposure? Elaborate on that in or before the current sentence.
Recording took place over the course of five weeks...
Link "critics" to music journalism
~~who praised the hardcore music~~
Why were the liner notes updated? Just cause it's 2005 and the band's lineup changed, or what? Elaborate, but don't overdo it for the lead.
Might want to indicate that it was out of print at one point (that's why it was reissued, right?)

Background and recording

No comma necessary with Toni & Tim.
Might want to indicate that Tim was fresh out of leaving the bass position in Arma Angelus (possibly because of Rise Against), a metalcore band which featured all of Fall Out Boy's members at one point or another. Who knew, right?
Possibly indicate Fat Mike is the NOFX vocalist? They did have notable success.
Again with the exposure thing.
No need to spell out Sonic Iguana Studios twice so soon.

Back for more later or tomorrow.

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 As part of a review deal, I'd be happy to review this, but I'm going to start on Thursday, possibly Wednesday. Hope to see another wonderful passing article! {{Smiley}} '''[[User:DannyMusicEditor|<span class="smallcaps" style="font-variant:small-caps;">danny</span><small>music</small><span class="smallcaps" style="font-variant:small-caps;">editor</span>]]''' <sup> [[User talk:DannyMusicEditor|Speak up!]] </sup> 19:58, 21 November 2016 (UTC)
+#Is it '''reasonably well written'''?
+#:A. Prose is "[[MOS:JARGON|clear]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style|concise]]", without [[Wikipedia:Copyright violations|copyvios]], or spelling and grammar errors: {{GAList/check|n}}
+#::
+#:B. [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style|MoS]] compliance for [[WP:LEAD|lead]], [[WP:LAYOUT|layout]], [[WP:WTW|words to watch]], [[WP:WAF|fiction]], and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (embedded lists)|lists]]: {{GAList/check|n}}
+#::
+#Is it '''factually accurate''' and '''[[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]]'''?
+#:A. Has an [[Wikipedia:LAYOUT#Standard_appendices_and_footers|appropriate reference section]]: {{GAList/check|y}}
+#::
+#:B. Cites [[WP:Identifying reliable sources|reliable sources]], [[Wikipedia:Good article criteria/where necessary|where necessary]]: {{GAList/check|}}
+#::
+#:C. [[Wikipedia:No original research|No original research]]: {{GAList/check|}}
+#::
+#Is it '''broad in its coverage'''?
+#:A. [[Wikipedia:Out of scope|Major aspects]]: {{GAList/check|y}}
+#::
+#:B. [[WP:LENGTH|Focused]] (see [[WP:summary style|summary style]]): {{GAList/check|y}}
+#::
+#Is it '''[[WP:NPOV|neutral]]'''?
+#:Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
+#::
+#Is it '''stable'''?
+#: No [[Wikipedia:Edit warring|edit wars]], etc: {{GAList/check|y}}
+#::
+#Does it '''contain [[Wikipedia:Images|images]]''' to illustrate the topic?
+#:A. Images are [[Wikipedia:Copyright tags|tagged]] with their [[Wikipedia:Copyright FAQ|copyright status]], and [[Wikipedia:Non-free use rationale guideline|valid fair use rationales]] are provided for [[Wikipedia:Non-free content|non-free content]]: {{GAList/check|y}}
+#::
+#:B. Images are provided if possible and are [[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|relevant]] to the topic, and have [[WP:CAP|suitable captions]]: {{GAList/check|y}}
+#:: It seems Wikipedia doesn't have an appropriate one available.
+#'''Overall''':
+#:Pass or Fail: {{GAList/check|}}
+#::New part of my review policy: '''Please don't make any changes until I finish the review.'''
+===Toolbox checks===
+Everything in the GA toolbox checks out fine.
+===Lead & Infobox===
+* Album cover needs alt text, something I neglected to catch in "Give It All" (oops!)
+* {{xt|As a result of their newfound exposure...}} What exposure? Elaborate on that in or before the current sentence.
+* {{xt|Recording took place over ''the course of'' five weeks...}}
+* Link "critics" to [[music journalism]]
+* {{xt|<s>who praised the hardcore music</s>}}
+* Why were the liner notes updated? Just cause it's 2005 and the band's lineup changed, or what? Elaborate, but don't overdo it for the lead.
+* Might want to indicate that it was out of print at one point (that's why it was reissued, right?)
+===Background and recording===
+* No comma necessary with Toni & Tim.
+* Might want to indicate that Tim was fresh out of leaving the bass position in [[Arma Angelus]] (possibly because of Rise Against), a metalcore band which featured all of [[Fall Out Boy]]'s members at one point or another. Who knew, right?
+* Possibly indicate Fat Mike is the NOFX vocalist? They did have notable success.
+* Again with the exposure thing.
+* No need to spell out Sonic Iguana Studios twice so soon.
+Back for more later or tomorrow.