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Facebook Page =https://www.facebook.com/Saba-Qamar-785862164852382/ Braveheaxt (talk) 13:47, 17 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

That's not an official page with sole like from the creator.--Galaxy Kid (talk) 16:27, 17 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

About Saba Qamar Edits

Let us consider the following:

Qamar has established a career in Pakistani entertainment industry, and is regarded as the nations most popular and second highest-paid actress.

It has been established that she is a Pakistani actress. It is implied that she is in the entertainment business. This sentence is redundant and the provided references do not corroborate the part of the sentence of being the 2nd highest paid actress.

Qamar continued to appear in supporting roles in the following years, but her claim to fame came in 2007, when she played leading roles in two of the hit dramas, Dhoop Mein Andhera Hai and Jinnah Ke Naam

There is no proof for this statement. There is neither any proof that she became famous in 2007, nor there is any proof that the dramas were hit. If there is proof, provide it with reputable sources.

he later received widespread recognition for her portraying unconventional roles in several of the highest-rated Urdu television series, including the domestic drama Uraan (2010), the period drama Dastaan (2010), the social drama Main Chand Si (2011), the family dramas Maat (2011) and Ullu Baraye Farokht Nahi (2013), the melodrama Thakan (2012), the psychodrama Sannata (2013), the romantic dramas Bunty I Love You (2013) and Digest Writer (2014), the tragic drama Sangat (2015) and the modern drama Besharam (2016), all of which earned her critical acclaim as well as several accolades

There is neither any proof that Saba Qamar received any recognition for her work other than an award for Tinkay, not there is any proof all the dramas cited were hit dramas, or they were highest rated dramas. The listed films and serials have been repeated in the filmography. Hence removed.

Qamar established herself as a leading actress of Urdu cinema with the acclaimed films, the biographical drama Manto (2015), the travel comedy Lahore Se Aagey (2016), both of which rank among the highest-grossing Pakistani films of all time.

1 source about Manto being acclaimed is provided. No such proof about Lahore Se Aagey is provided. Hence it is removed.

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 [[User:Braveheaxt|Braveheaxt]] ([[User talk:Braveheaxt|talk]]) 13:47, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
 :: That's not an official page with sole like from the creator.--[[User:Galaxy Kid|Galaxy Kid]] ([[User talk:Galaxy Kid|talk]]) 16:27, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
+== About Saba Qamar Edits ==
+Let us consider the following:
+  {{Quote|text= Qamar has established a career in Pakistani entertainment industry, and is regarded as the nations most popular and second highest-paid actress.}} It has been established that she is a Pakistani actress. It is implied that she is in the entertainment business. This sentence is  redundant and the provided references do not corroborate the part of the sentence of being the 2nd highest paid actress.
+{{Quote|text=Qamar continued to appear in supporting roles in the following years, but her claim to fame came in 2007, when she played leading roles in two of the hit dramas, ''[[PTV Home|Dhoop Mein Andhera Hai]]'' and ''[[Jinnah Ke Naam]]''}}
+There is no proof for this statement. There is neither any proof that she became famous in 2007, nor there is any proof that the dramas were hit. If there is proof, provide it with reputable sources.
+{{Quote|text=he later received widespread recognition for her portraying unconventional roles in several of the [[Pakistani dramas|highest-rated Urdu television series]], including the domestic drama ''[[Uraan]]'' (2010), the period drama ''[[Dastaan (TV series)|Dastaan]]'' (2010), the social drama ''[[Main Chand Si]]'' (2011), the family dramas ''[[Maat (TV series)|Maat]]'' (2011) and ''[[Ullu Baraye Farokht Nahi]]'' (2013), the melodrama ''[[Thakan]]'' (2012), the psychodrama ''Sannata'' (2013), the romantic dramas ''[[Bunty I Love You]]'' (2013) and ''[[Digest Writer]]'' (2014), the tragic drama ''[[Sangat (TV series)|Sangat]]'' (2015) and the modern drama ''[[Besharam (TV series)|Besharam]]'' (2016), all of which earned her critical acclaim as well as several accolades}}
+There is neither any proof that Saba Qamar received any recognition for her work other than an award for Tinkay, not there is any proof all the dramas cited were hit dramas, or they were highest rated dramas. The listed films and serials have been repeated in the filmography. Hence removed.
+{{Quote|text=Qamar established herself as a leading actress of Urdu cinema with the acclaimed films, the biographical drama Manto (2015), the travel comedy Lahore Se Aagey (2016), both of which rank among the highest-grossing Pakistani films of all time.}}
+source about Manto being acclaimed is provided. No such proof about Lahore Se Aagey is provided.  Hence it is removed.