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AfC notification: Draft:Green Garage Detroit has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Green Garage Detroit. Thanks! Abdullah Alam (talk) 04:19, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, I have recently revised a previously deleted page called the Green Garage Detroit. It was deleted due to unambiguous advertisement. I was simply wondering if someone could look over it, and tell me if it still reads like an advertisement. Please help me with...

NeheScar (talk) 13:57, 9 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

You can submit the draft to WP:AFC to have it reviewed. ~ Rob₁₃^Talk 20:25, 9 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 6)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Hello again, this is unfortunately still not enough significant major independent news as it's simply local news stories along with a few others that are simply too trivial.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to User:NeheScar/sandbox and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

SwisterTwister talk 18:39, 6 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: User:NeheScar/sandbox has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at User:NeheScar/sandbox. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 00:10, 10 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft has notability issues and tone issues. It appears to be written to promote the Green Garage operation. Please ask for advice at the Teahouse on how to make this read neutrally.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to User:NeheScar/sandbox and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Robert McClenon (talk) 18:46, 13 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! NeheScar, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 18:46, 13 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at [[User:NeheScar/sandbox]]. Thanks! [[User:SwisterTwister|<font color="green">'''S'''wister'''T'''wister</font>]] [[User talk:SwisterTwister|<font color="green">talk</font>]] 00:10, 10 January 2017 (UTC) </div>
+== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[User:NeheScar/sandbox|sandbox]] (January 13) ==
+<div style="border: solid 1px #FCC; background-color: #F8EEBC; padding: 0.5em 1em; color: #000; margin: 1.5em; width: 90%;"> [[File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svg|50px|left]]Your recent article submission to [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for Creation]] has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time.<nowiki> </nowiki>The reason left by Robert McClenon was:
+{{divbox|gray|3=This submission appears to [[WP:ARTSPAM|read more like an advertisement]] than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a [[Wikipedia:Neutral point of view|neutral point of view]], and should refer to a range of [[Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources|independent, reliable, published sources]], not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's [[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiability policy]] and the [[Wikipedia:Notability|notability]] of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.|}}&nbsp;The comment the reviewer left was:
+{{divbox|blue|3=This draft has notability issues and tone issues.  It appears to be written to promote the Green Garage operation.  Please ask for advice at [[WP:THQ|the Teahouse]] on how to make this read neutrally.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer.  You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit <u>when they have been resolved</u>.
+{{clear}}
+* If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to [[User:NeheScar/sandbox]] and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
+* If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the <span class="plainlinks">{{#if:'''Articles for creation help desk'''
+ |[//en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User:NeheScar/sandbox '''Articles for creation help desk''']
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+}}</span> or on the <span class="plainlinks">{{#if:'''reviewer's talk page'''
+ |[//en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Robert_McClenon&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User:NeheScar/sandbox '''reviewer's talk page''']
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+}}</span>.
+* You can also use [[Wikipedia:IRC help disclaimer|Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors]].
+[[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 18:46, 13 January 2017 (UTC)</div><!--Template:Afc decline-->
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+I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the '''[[Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk|Articles for creation help desk]]'''. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the '''[[Wikipedia:Teahouse|Teahouse]]''', a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 18:46, 13 January 2017 (UTC)</div>
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