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The article [[Nick Jr. (Israel)|Nick Jr. Israel]] has several issues. It starts off by listing the many programs Nick Jr. (Israel) plays on the network but gives no background on what type of television network it is. It could have a leading section that includes that Nick Jr. (Israel) is a family/child friendly network that plays a series of types of television shows from educational to entertainment. Also, this article lacks valid sources that can be referenced. |
The article [[Nick Jr. (Israel)|Nick Jr. Israel]] has several issues. It starts off by listing the many programs Nick Jr. (Israel) plays on the network but gives no background on what type of television network it is. It could have a leading section that includes that Nick Jr. (Israel) is a family/child friendly network that plays a series of types of television shows from educational to entertainment. Also, this article lacks valid sources that can be referenced. |
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Wiki Article Draft: Cosmopolitan Magazine |
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Cosmopolitan has 64 international editions worldwide '''including: Croatia, Greece, Romania, Estonia,UK, Norway, Australia, Spain, Sweden, Malaysia, Singapore, The Middle East Region, Latin America Region, Hungary, Finland, Netherlands, South Africa, France, Portugal, Armenia and Russia''' '''<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.cosmopolitan.com/entertainment/celebs/news/g1447/cosmo-international-covers/?slide=9}}</ref>''',and are published in 35 languages, with distribution in more than 100 countries making Cosmopolitan the largest-selling young women's magazine in the world.[3] Some international editions are published in partnerships, such as licenses or joint ventures, with established publishing houses in each local market. |
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Helen Gurley Brown changed the entire trajectory of the magazine during her time as editor.She passed away in 2012 at the age of 90.<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.nytimes.com/2012/08/14/business/media/helen-gurley-brown-who-gave-cosmopolitan-its-purr-is-dead-at-90.html|website=New York Times|accessdate=26 October 2017}}</ref> The magazine continues to honor her legacy and vision to this day. A look back on the covers perfectly express her vision and the change she contributed to Cosmopolitan Magazine. <ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.slate.com/blogs/browbeat/2012/08/14/cosmo_covers_how_helen_gurley_brown_changed_cosmopolitan_s_cover_.html|website=Slate.com}}</ref> |
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==article evaluation==
The article Nick Jr. Israel has several issues. It starts off by listing the many programs Nick Jr. (Israel) plays on the network but gives no background on what type of television network it is. It could have a leading section that includes that Nick Jr. (Israel) is a family/child friendly network that plays a series of types of television shows from educational to entertainment. Also, this article lacks valid sources that can be referenced.
Wiki Article Draft: Cosmopolitan Magazine
- My additions are in bold*
Cosmopolitan has 64 international editions worldwide including: Croatia, Greece, Romania, Estonia,UK, Norway, Australia, Spain, Sweden, Malaysia, Singapore, The Middle East Region, Latin America Region, Hungary, Finland, Netherlands, South Africa, France, Portugal, Armenia and Russia [1],and are published in 35 languages, with distribution in more than 100 countries making Cosmopolitan the largest-selling young women's magazine in the world.[3] Some international editions are published in partnerships, such as licenses or joint ventures, with established publishing houses in each local market.
Helen Gurley Brown changed the entire trajectory of the magazine during her time as editor.She passed away in 2012 at the age of 90.[2] The magazine continues to honor her legacy and vision to this day. A look back on the covers perfectly express her vision and the change she contributed to Cosmopolitan Magazine. [3]
- ^ http://www.cosmopolitan.com/entertainment/celebs/news/g1447/cosmo-international-covers/?slide=9.
{{cite web}}: Missing or empty|title=(help) - ^ New York Times http://www.nytimes.com/2012/08/14/business/media/helen-gurley-brown-who-gave-cosmopolitan-its-purr-is-dead-at-90.html. Retrieved 26 October 2017.
{{cite web}}: Missing or empty|title=(help) - ^ Slate.com http://www.slate.com/blogs/browbeat/2012/08/14/cosmo_covers_how_helen_gurley_brown_changed_cosmopolitan_s_cover_.html.
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