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The rest of the article is still lack in sources to which I hope I can remedy. |
The rest of the article is still lack in sources to which I hope I can remedy. |
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Upon reading more |
Upon reading more of the article there are certain facts that I have been unable to verify and the ones that I can verify I have added in-text citations. |
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The article does not represent a bias. |
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The origins section of the article primarily talks about the family prior to the start of the dynasty which partially confuses me to what role if any the family it references had anything to do with rise of the dynasty other than they existed and were important people of their time. |
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The one reference that it has is old and when I searched it in Google I was unable to access it without a login. |
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We will not talk about in class unfortunately |
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Latest revision as of 21:15, 29 October 2017
Evaluating Ottonian dynasty article
The initial paragraph was riddled with half truths and some false statements I corrected those as well as added a source.
The rest of the article is still lack in sources to which I hope I can remedy.
Upon reading more of the article there are certain facts that I have been unable to verify and the ones that I can verify I have added in-text citations.
The article does not represent a bias.
The origins section of the article primarily talks about the family prior to the start of the dynasty which partially confuses me to what role if any the family it references had anything to do with rise of the dynasty other than they existed and were important people of their time.
The one reference that it has is old and when I searched it in Google I was unable to access it without a login.
We will not talk about in class unfortunately
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