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I've fixed several grammar and spelling problems. I've also tagged a few sections as "cite needed" because they're weasel words. "received some backlash" doesn't explain exactly what happened; "Some fans have criticized" doesn't tell us how many, or how unpopular, the change was. "Reportedly there are no plans" sounds official, but unless we know who reported the lack of plans, we don't know if we should believe it or not. -- [[User:Mikeblas|Mikeblas]] 22:30, 4 July 2006 (UTC) |
I've fixed several grammar and spelling problems. I've also tagged a few sections as "cite needed" because they're weasel words. "received some backlash" doesn't explain exactly what happened; "Some fans have criticized" doesn't tell us how many, or how unpopular, the change was. "Reportedly there are no plans" sounds official, but unless we know who reported the lack of plans, we don't know if we should believe it or not. -- [[User:Mikeblas|Mikeblas]] 22:30, 4 July 2006 (UTC) |
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If the article mentions that AJ does not usually take part in the building of the car, and goes on to point out that she tore out a windshield with a sledgehammer, then it might as well also state that she was the lead designer in one of the builds (a 1963 Mercury Comet convertible) |
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Revision as of 22:54, 11 October 2006
This is another page with lots of weasels & peacocks in the arguably necessary 'criticisms' sections.
I find that portions of it are valid for criticisms. Most noteably:
- The Ian Zeiring Camaro Build.
- The East Coast build reluctance.
So, i'm reverting them back in. And sign your comments please. --293.xx.xxx.xx 06:03, 28 June 2006 (UTC)
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I've fixed several grammar and spelling problems. I've also tagged a few sections as "cite needed" because they're weasel words. "received some backlash" doesn't explain exactly what happened; "Some fans have criticized" doesn't tell us how many, or how unpopular, the change was. "Reportedly there are no plans" sounds official, but unless we know who reported the lack of plans, we don't know if we should believe it or not. -- Mikeblas 22:30, 4 July 2006 (UTC)
AJ's role/participation
If the article mentions that AJ does not usually take part in the building of the car, and goes on to point out that she tore out a windshield with a sledgehammer, then it might as well also state that she was the lead designer in one of the builds (a 1963 Mercury Comet convertible)