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Between the words "Wisconsin" and "Maine's 2nd Congressional District", replace the word "and" with the words "as well as". Please. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/ 2018‎ 2601:401:c400:357:ac66:5c2e:65e7:a1dd| 2018‎ 2601:401:c400:357:ac66:5c2e:65e7:a1dd]] ([[User talk: 2018‎ 2601:401:c400:357:ac66:5c2e:65e7:a1dd#top|talk]]) 02:30, 13 January 2018 (UTC)</small>
Between the words "Wisconsin" and "Maine's 2nd Congressional District", replace the word "and" with the words "as well as". Please. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/ 2018‎ 2601:401:c400:357:ac66:5c2e:65e7:a1dd| 2018‎ 2601:401:c400:357:ac66:5c2e:65e7:a1dd]] ([[User talk: 2018‎ 2601:401:c400:357:ac66:5c2e:65e7:a1dd#top|talk]]) 02:30, 13 January 2018 (UTC)</small>
:The preceding sentence reads "Six states plus a portion of Maine that Obama won in 2012 switched to Trump." The list following correctly enumerates six states and a Maine Congressional district. The word "and" is appropriately used. There is no grammar correction needed. <span style="font-family: Gill Sans MT, Arial, Helvetica; font-weight:140;">[[User:General Ization|<span style="color: #006633;">General <i>Ization</i></span>]]</span> <sup>[[User talk:General Ization|<i style="color: #000666;">Talk </i>]] </sup> 02:33, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
:The preceding sentence reads "Six states plus a portion of Maine that Obama won in 2012 switched to Trump." The list following correctly enumerates six states and a Maine Congressional district. The word "and" is appropriately used. There is no grammar correction needed. <span style="font-family: Gill Sans MT, Arial, Helvetica; font-weight:140;">[[User:General Ization|<span style="color: #006633;">General <i>Ization</i></span>]]</span> <sup>[[User talk:General Ization|<i style="color: #000666;">Talk </i>]] </sup> 02:33, 14 January 2018 (UTC)

== What I meant to say ==

For grammar fixing, what I meant to say is that between the words "Wisconsin" and Maine's 2nd congressional district" in the second INTRO paragraph at the TOP of the article's page, replace the word "and" with the words "as well as".
Please.

Revision as of 23:20, 15 January 2018

Consensus on pre-election discussions about presentation of candidates


Three options for a future RFC

If we are going to turn this into a marathon, start stockpiling your opinions below these three.Cards84664 (talk) 01:39, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@EEng: Cards84664 (talk) 02:41, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
2016 United States presidential election
 
2016 United States presidential election
 
2016 United States presidential election
 

You know what? I think the middle choice is the best.

Middle, or bottom. Jean-Jacques Georges (talk) 08:59, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
The middle one looks best to me. Good photo of Trump, and less than a year since the election is fine. Both smiling. And zooming it to the same level as Clinton is a good idea too, so it's not "official photo" vs "informal photo". Oppose the bottom one, because the pic of Clinton is very old.  — Amakuru (talk) 11:43, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Middle for reasons I listed previously. 70.44.154.16 (talk) 22:54, 10 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Key Controversies Overlooked?

I know that there is much already embedded in this page and so concision is necessary. However, the page does mention several of Hillary Clinton's controversial policies or even simply platform issues but does not mention an equal amount of some of Donald Trump's more controversial issues or statements which contributed to a significant amount of election-time discussion. It might be a good idea to add some for balance's sake. I have drafted up an additional few sentences to add both about his statements on Islam and Muslims during the election which caused a lot of conversation (as an example), but also have found a study put out by a think tank that makes a connection between such statements and the low percentage of Muslims that voted for Trump mentioned in the voter statistics on the page. I think including such a study will help that mentioned statistic seem less... random... so to speak.

Is there a way for me to leave those edits? I have citations and everything ready to go. Or should I simply share them here and hope that a more experienced editor can or could add them in?

Let me know what you think!

Isabelle P (talk) 06:50, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Trump outperformed Romney and McCain among Muslims. Bomberswarm2 (talk) 11:08, 9 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Bush lost the Muslims in 2004 because of his Middle East policy.[1] Incidentally, Trump also increased votes among blacks and Latinos. TFD (talk) 19:37, 9 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Semi-protected edit request on 17 December 2017

This page states: "Russia's goals were to undermine public faith in the US democratic process, denigrate Secretary Clinton, and harm her electability and potential presidency." and sites as reference for this assertion 11: "Intelligence Report on Russian Hacking". The New York Times. January 6, 2017. p. 11. Retrieved January 8, 2017.

However this assertion is not an actual fact as proven by "Because intelligence community procedures on drafting this type of analysis were not followed and it reflected the views of only three intelligence agencies – not all 17 as the mainstream media claimed. The New York Times was forced to publish a correction on this point last June." [1]

In conclusion the Russian hacking was not necessarily to denigrate Clinton, nor to get Trump elected. It was merely to undermine the entire process. 2601:281:C400:7033:5E1:1206:D356:AAD3 (talk) 15:22, 17 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. Also, you have taken this out of context. It is a direct quote from the intelligence report -- not an opinion by The New York Times.

References

  1. ^ Fred Fleitz, senior vice president for policy and programs with the Center for Security Policy, a national security think tank.

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Indiana Percentages Are Wrong

Dividing Indiana's votes for Clinton and Trump by the total votes from the state on the right don't equal the percentages the table says. EvanJ35 (talk) 17:44, 25 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Grammar Fixing

Between the words "Wisconsin" and "Maine's 2nd Congressional District", replace the word "and" with the words "as well as". Please. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2018‎ 2601:401:c400:357:ac66:5c2e:65e7:a1dd (talk) 02:30, 13 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The preceding sentence reads "Six states plus a portion of Maine that Obama won in 2012 switched to Trump." The list following correctly enumerates six states and a Maine Congressional district. The word "and" is appropriately used. There is no grammar correction needed. General Ization Talk 02:33, 14 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

What I meant to say

For grammar fixing, what I meant to say is that between the words "Wisconsin" and Maine's 2nd congressional district" in the second INTRO paragraph at the TOP of the article's page, replace the word "and" with the words "as well as". Please.