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== For school ==

Hello Wikipedians! I'm writing some comments on what I think about this article for a school project.

*'''How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?''' It's rated both B and C class as well as of mid to high importance to multiple WikiProjects. Some of these are WikiProject Japan/Military history, WikiProject China, WikiProject Korea, WikiProject East Asia, WikiProject Human Rights, and WikiProject Military history.
* '''How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?''' The only way that this article really differs from what I've read in my textbook is that these crimes go through a lot more time periods rather than just the Tokugawan era of Japan. Some of these crimes relate to World War II as well as goes into a lot further detail (such as the practice of cannibalism and the apologies that were made). The article defines what "war crime in Japan" is defined as but goes into much much further detail.

[[User:Ansleymm|Ansleymm]] ([[User talk:Ansleymm|talk]]) 17:45, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

<https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_war_crimes#Japanese_military_culture_and_imperialism>

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Former good articleJapanese war crimes was one of the History good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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DateProcessResult
June 22, 2006Good article nomineeListed
February 12, 2008Good article reassessmentDelisted
Current status: Delisted good article

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Explaining quotes inline

@Carbon Caryatid: You explained the terms PT-163 and Bluejacket which in itself are improvements, however I felt the way the explanations were done broke the quotation a bit. Could it be done in a fashion that improves readability both in terms of textflow and ease of understanding? BFG (talk) 12:37, 22 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your feedback; I can see your point. Usually I'd discuss wording on Talk, but this is visually a bit tricky, so I've been bold again and had another go. What do you think? Carbon Caryatid (talk) 13:07, 22 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Carbon Caryatid: Bold is usually good, it can always be reverted. Not really sure if it was much better, if I'd had a good solution I would certainly have stated it. I'm leaning towards it being slightly better. BFG (talk) 08:41, 23 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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For school

Hello Wikipedians! I'm writing some comments on what I think about this article for a school project.

  • How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects? It's rated both B and C class as well as of mid to high importance to multiple WikiProjects. Some of these are WikiProject Japan/Military history, WikiProject China, WikiProject Korea, WikiProject East Asia, WikiProject Human Rights, and WikiProject Military history.
  • How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class? The only way that this article really differs from what I've read in my textbook is that these crimes go through a lot more time periods rather than just the Tokugawan era of Japan. Some of these crimes relate to World War II as well as goes into a lot further detail (such as the practice of cannibalism and the apologies that were made). The article defines what "war crime in Japan" is defined as but goes into much much further detail.

Ansleymm (talk) 17:45, 30 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

<https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_war_crimes#Japanese_military_culture_and_imperialism>