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Your submission at Articles for creation: Hangzhou No.2 High School of Zhejiang Province (February 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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David.moreno72 06:24, 24 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Hitmanagement2016! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! David.moreno72 06:24, 24 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hangzhou No.2 High School of Zhejiang Province (March 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Notable Alumni entries need to link to existing articles ABOUT the alumni. Only the first entry satisfies the criteria. Must have significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Current references all link to the school website.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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David.moreno72 07:34, 3 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hangzhou No.2 High School of Zhejiang Province (March 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

There is only one reference that has 'significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject', which is not enough. Wikipedia requires multiple. The 'Notable Alumni ' section has two red links. They MUST be sourced, and the sources MUST verify that they went to the school, which at the moment they don't.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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David.moreno72 23:53, 3 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hangzhou No.2 High School of Zhejiang Province (March 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Newly added references are from baidu and are not permitted. 'Notable Alumni' section has not be fixed per previous comments. Please read previous comments and act upon them before resubmission.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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David.moreno72 07:37, 4 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Line 3 (Hangzhou Metro) - moved to Draft:Line 3 (Hangzhou Metro)

Hi Hitmanagement2016, Greetings. Pls note that your creation of Line 3 (Hangzhou Metro) has been moved to Draft:Line 3 (Hangzhou Metro). Content added/edited in Wikipedia needs "inline citation" from independent (third party / secondary / tertiary) reliable source (in any language) for verification to gauge the nobility criteria is met. The articles's inline citation is the WP:BURDEN which it is on the person adding the information. Please note official website, records of sport events or individual player records are consider primary source and not independent source, and social network source such as facebook, twitter, instagram, imbd and etc are considered NOT reliable source and can not be used for citing. Independent reliable source are sources are those obtain from major newspaper, such as The Guardian, Sydney Morning Herald, CNN news and etc. or source obtain from major publisher of the work (for example, Random House or Cambridge University Press). Pls see

reliable source - see WP:RS
primary vs secondary vs tiartiary source - see WP:WPNOTRS
verification - see WP:V
notability - see WP:N
webcite - see WP:CITEWEB and its template -see Template: cite web

Once you have provided inline citations, you could move back the page to "article" to resubmit. For more editing help, you could send your question to the friendly and helpful volunteers at the Teahouse. Lastly, I strongly encourage you to visit WP:The Wikipedia Adventure for there are some short and fun exercises on neutrality, verifiability, collaboration, research and sourcing. Thank you. CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 06:48, 8 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hitmanagement201, Thank you for providing inline ciation for Line 7 (Hangzhou Metro) and it has been reviewed. Please do the same for Draft:Line 3 (Hangzhou Metro). Happy editing. CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 08:22, 8 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Revision as of 08:22, 8 March 2018 edit Cassiopeia (talk \| contribs) Autopatrolled, Extended confirmed users, Page movers, New page reviewers, Pending changes reviewers, Rollbackers 228,252 edits →Line 3 (Hangzhou Metro) - moved to [[Draft:Line 3 (Hangzhou Metro)]]: Comment Tag: 2017 wikitext editor ← Previous edit		Revision as of 09:05, 8 March 2018 edit undo Cassiopeia (talk \| contribs) Autopatrolled, Extended confirmed users, Page movers, New page reviewers, Pending changes reviewers, Rollbackers 228,252 edits →Line 3 (Hangzhou Metro) - moved to [[Draft:Line 3 (Hangzhou Metro)]]: fixing link - adding missing [ Tag: 2017 wikitext editor Next edit →
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	Once you have provided inline citations, you could move back the page to "article" to resubmit. For more editing help, you could send your question to the friendly and helpful volunteers at [[WP:TEAHOUSE\|the Teahouse]]. Lastly, I strongly encourage you to visit [[WP:The Wikipedia Adventure]] for there are some short and fun exercises on neutrality, verifiability, collaboration, research and sourcing. Thank you. [[User:CASSIOPEIA\|<b style="font-family:Georgia;font-size:80%;color:#FA0"> CASSIOPEIA</b>]]<sup>([[User talk:CASSIOPEIA\|<b style="#0000FF">talk</b>]])</sup> 06:48, 8 March 2018 (UTC)		Once you have provided inline citations, you could move back the page to "article" to resubmit. For more editing help, you could send your question to the friendly and helpful volunteers at [[WP:TEAHOUSE\|the Teahouse]]. Lastly, I strongly encourage you to visit [[WP:The Wikipedia Adventure]] for there are some short and fun exercises on neutrality, verifiability, collaboration, research and sourcing. Thank you. [[User:CASSIOPEIA\|<b style="font-family:Georgia;font-size:80%;color:#FA0"> CASSIOPEIA</b>]]<sup>([[User talk:CASSIOPEIA\|<b style="#0000FF">talk</b>]])</sup> 06:48, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

	:: Hitmanagement201, Thank you for providing inline ciation for [[Line 7 (Hangzhou Metro)]] and it has been reviewed. Please do the same for [Draft:Line 3 (Hangzhou Metro)]]. Happy editing. [[User:CASSIOPEIA\|<b style="font-family:Georgia;font-size:80%;color:#FA0"> CASSIOPEIA</b>]]<sup>([[User talk:CASSIOPEIA\|<b style="#0000FF">talk</b>]])</sup> 08:22, 8 March 2018 (UTC)		:: Hitmanagement201, Thank you for providing inline ciation for [[Line 7 (Hangzhou Metro)]] and it has been reviewed. Please do the same for [[Draft:Line 3 (Hangzhou Metro)]]. Happy editing. [[User:CASSIOPEIA\|<b style="font-family:Georgia;font-size:80%;color:#FA0"> CASSIOPEIA</b>]]<sup>([[User talk:CASSIOPEIA\|<b style="#0000FF">talk</b>]])</sup> 08:22, 8 March 2018 (UTC)