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You say HPD causes needs for attention from multiple people which LEADS to marital problems. Maybe it should read that it "can lead". |
You say HPD causes needs for attention from multiple people which LEADS to marital problems. Maybe it should read that it "can lead". |
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Thank you for the feedback I have added a fair amount of information with your criticism in mind. I have talked about attachment, i dug deeper and wrote about HPD and culture/environment although it was hard to find studies for HBD I did find studies that relate to culture and personality disorders in general. |
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== February 2018 == |
== February 2018 == |
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You wrote how culture plays a role in HPD. Any sources or evidence of this you could provide?
Could expand more on points
Compare the genetic causes and environmental causes that lead to HPD
Is there any attachment or temperament styles that lead towards HPD?
You say there are few studies done between HPD and culture. Could you maybe try to find one or two if they exist?
You say HPD causes needs for attention from multiple people which LEADS to marital problems. Maybe it should read that it "can lead".
Peer Review Response Thank you for the feedback I have added a fair amount of information with your criticism in mind. I have talked about attachment, i dug deeper and wrote about HPD and culture/environment although it was hard to find studies for HBD I did find studies that relate to culture and personality disorders in general.
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