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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on October 24, 2014. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Sports Illustrated* Swimsuit model Emily Ratajkowski is featured in the music video for "Blurred Lines", which was the number one song of 2013 in several countries?*
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Critics "noted" is POV

Why does the article say critics "noted" things? I feel this endorses their POV. See also WP:SAY Siuenti (talk) 09:44, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Siuenti, I have never heard WP:SAY. I am going to need some time to consider the use of note in the article. Are you aware of Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Emily Ratajkowski/archive5, which could use some commentary.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:29, 11 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Siuenti, I have addressed 6 of the 7 instances of noted. I feel the other one is best left alone.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 17:59, 12 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, I think that is an improvement. Siuenti (talk) 20:20, 12 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Personal life

The start of this section, dealing with relationships, looks like the sort of thing that would be front page on one of those gossip mags I see in checkouts. Is it of vital encyclopedic importance we include this information? The sources don't look to be particularly great and skirt far too close to WP:BLPSOURCES for my liking. Ritchie333 ^(talk) ^(cont) 12:18, 4 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Ritchie333, You are not being very direct. That is a four paragraph section. I am going to assume that you are opposing only the first paragraph which is about her relationships since that is what the edit history suggests you are really having problems with. I find it quite unusual to remove relationship content from a personal life section. That is one of the first things a reader would probably look to find in such a section. As she becomes more prominent, her relationships will appear in more reliable/prominent sources. However, you can see that we have tried to draw the line on relationships in the section above "Summary of content that we can not yet source", where we know of a longterm relationship that we are unable to adequately source. Surely there are some celebrities that have had a few marriages and one might eliminate non-marriages from the encyclopedic content, but in this case there is no such other perspective to diminish long term dating relationships. Many other celebrities include significant non-marriage relationships.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 16:32, 4 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
User:Ritchie333, we're at 113k here. Did you ever read WP:FART? Kelapstick got it going. Drmies (talk) 01:55, 11 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Drmies, since when do we count length based on the code. The article is under 25k in readable prose, which is not considered long by any stretch. However, keep up the good work on minimizing my excess coverage.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:21, 11 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  - Tony I measure size in any way I can. I consider this article to be ridiculously long. Drmies (talk) 20:32, 11 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
    - Both measures exist, but Wikipedia:Article size seems to focus on readable prose with 30-50KB of readable prose seeming to be a normal length for a broad topic.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 23:23, 11 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
      - You have every possible fact of her life in there. And we're still talking about someone who was in a music video, and had a few bit parts. Drmies (talk) 23:56, 11 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Why is she not listed as models of Catholic descent?

I sense some Wiki bigotry as every other aspect of her is listed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:642:4101:4167:40AE:1F73:64E6:AD1 (talk) 01:08, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Perhaps this was an attempt at some kind of sarcasm. If not, one very good reason is that there is no Category:Models of Catholic descent. Nor does the creation of one seem appropriate, since the religious "descent" (whatever that is) of a model is not a defining characteristic. General Ization ^Talk 01:16, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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"Her claim to being a feminist has been both supported and disputed."

This sentence in the lede is confusingly worded. It sounds like it's either stating that there is disagreement on whether or not she claims to be a feminist, or that she claims to be a feminist, but there is contention over whether she is actually a feminist. Either way it seems like a strange thing to put in a lede, so if there's no disagreement I'm going to remove it. Zeldafanjtl (talk) 21:14, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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+This sentence in the lede is confusingly worded. It sounds like it's either stating that there is disagreement on whether or not she claims to be a feminist, or that she claims to be a feminist, but there is contention over whether she is actually a feminist. Either way it seems like a strange thing to put in a lede, so if there's no disagreement I'm going to remove it. [[User:Zeldafanjtl|Zeldafanjtl]] ([[User talk:Zeldafanjtl|talk]]) 21:14, 8 April 2018 (UTC)