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... that in the Bengali film Aami Ashbo Phirey the father-son duo of Anjan Dutt and Neel Dutt worked together after 11 years? https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bengali/movies/news/aami-ashbo-phirey-trailer-anjan-dutt-back-with-a-bang-in-swastika-mukherjee-starrer/articleshow/62915763.cms

Created by Titodutta (talk). Nominated by Lahariyaniyathi (talk) at 04:35, 22 March 2018 (UTC).

Article has 1676 characters, and was created on 21 March. I've made a couple of tweaks. No QPQ required. Not sure if the hook is interesting enough to people unfamiliar with Anjan Dutt's work, but it is sourced appropriately. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 18:33, 27 March 2018 (UTC)

Agreed, the hook is not hooky for an international audience. Do you have another suggestion? Yoninah (talk) 23:34, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

In addition to concerns about the hook, the article itself might need some work: the article at the very least needs some copyediting due to grammatical errors. In addition, much of the "Release and reception" section, apart from needing a copyedit as well, lacks references, and in any case needs to be expanded or at least be converted to prose form as opposed to a list. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 00:05, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

I've moved this back to the pending nominations page per my comments above. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 01:17, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

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 :*  [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Article has 1676 characters, and was created on 21 March. I've made a couple of [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Aami_Ashbo_Phirey&type=revision&diff=832735359&oldid=831781390 tweaks]. No QPQ required. Not sure if the hook is interesting enough to people unfamiliar with Anjan Dutt's work, but it is sourced appropriately. [[User:Krimuk2.0|Krimuk2.0]] ([[User talk:Krimuk2.0|talk]]) 18:33, 27 March 2018 (UTC)
 ::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Agreed, the hook is not hooky for an international audience. Do you have another suggestion? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:34, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
-[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] In addition to concerns about the hook, the article itself might need some work: the article at the very least needs some copyediting due to grammatical errors. In addition, much of the "Release and reception" section, apart from needing a copyedit as well, lacks references, and in any case needs to be expanded or at least be converted to prose form as opposed to a list. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 00:05, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
+:*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] In addition to concerns about the hook, the article itself might need some work: the article at the very least needs some copyediting due to grammatical errors. In addition, much of the "Release and reception" section, apart from needing a copyedit as well, lacks references, and in any case needs to be expanded or at least be converted to prose form as opposed to a list. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 00:05, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
+:::I've moved this back to the pending nominations page per my comments above. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 01:17, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
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