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Aami Ashbo Phirey

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• ... that in the Bengali film Aami Ashbo Phirey the father-son duo of Anjan Dutt and Neel Dutt worked together after 11 years? https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bengali/movies/news/aami-ashbo-phirey-trailer-anjan-dutt-back-with-a-bang-in-swastika-mukherjee-starrer/articleshow/62915763.cms

Created by Titodutta (talk). Nominated by Lahariyaniyathi (talk) at 04:35, 22 March 2018 (UTC).

• Article has 1676 characters, and was created on 21 March. I've made a couple of tweaks. No QPQ required. Not sure if the hook is interesting enough to people unfamiliar with Anjan Dutt's work, but it is sourced appropriately. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 18:33, 27 March 2018 (UTC)

• Agreed, the hook is not hooky for an international audience. Do you have another suggestion? Yoninah (talk) 23:34, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

• In addition to concerns about the hook, the article itself might need some work: the article at the very least needs some copyediting due to grammatical errors. In addition, much of the "Release and reception" section, apart from needing a copyedit as well, lacks references, and in any case needs to be expanded or at least be converted to prose form as opposed to a list. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 00:05, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

I've moved this back to the pending nominations page per my comments above. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 01:17, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

• Oh! Right after the film's release that section was added, and you are right that the section needs some work. About hook, I do not have any other hook suggestion, unless I force something, which I do not want to do. I'll work on the mentioned section. Regards. --Titodutta (talk) 08:10, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

• I copyedited the article and added a "citation needed" tag under Release and reception. Yoninah (talk) 09:53, 7 May 2018 (UTC)