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:::I've left {{ping|Titodutta}} one final talk page message as it appears he edited two days ago; I suppose we can wait for a response for a few more days. If he still doesn't respond after a few more days, then this nomination can be closed. Thanks. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 08:51, 2 June 2018 (UTC)
:::I've left {{ping|Titodutta}} one final talk page message as it appears he edited two days ago; I suppose we can wait for a response for a few more days. If he still doesn't respond after a few more days, then this nomination can be closed. Thanks. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 08:51, 2 June 2018 (UTC)
:::* Sorry for delay in replying. I do not have a more interesting hook for this article. {{Smiley|sad}} --[[User:Titodutta|Titodutta]] ([[User_talk:Titodutta|talk]]) 09:14, 2 June 2018 (UTC)
:::* Sorry for delay in replying. I do not have a more interesting hook for this article. {{Smiley|sad}} --[[User:Titodutta|Titodutta]] ([[User_talk:Titodutta|talk]]) 09:14, 2 June 2018 (UTC)
:::::Noted. {{ping|BlueMoonset}} endorsing marking this for closure. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup>
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Aami Ashbo Phirey

Created by Titodutta (talk). Nominated by Lahariyaniyathi (talk) at 04:35, 22 March 2018 (UTC).

  • Article has 1676 characters, and was created on 21 March. I've made a couple of tweaks. No QPQ required. Not sure if the hook is interesting enough to people unfamiliar with Anjan Dutt's work, but it is sourced appropriately. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 18:33, 27 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Agreed, the hook is not hooky for an international audience. Do you have another suggestion? Yoninah (talk) 23:34, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
  • In addition to concerns about the hook, the article itself might need some work: the article at the very least needs some copyediting due to grammatical errors. In addition, much of the "Release and reception" section, apart from needing a copyedit as well, lacks references, and in any case needs to be expanded or at least be converted to prose form as opposed to a list. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:05, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
I've moved this back to the pending nominations page per my comments above. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:17, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
  • Oh! Right after the film's release that section was added, and you are right that the section needs some work. About hook, I do not have any other hook suggestion, unless I force something, which I do not want to do. I'll work on the mentioned section. Regards. --Titodutta (talk) 08:10, 7 May 2018 (UTC)
  • I copyedited the article and added a "citation needed" tag under Release and reception. Yoninah (talk) 09:53, 7 May 2018 (UTC)
  • I could not find the ToI review that gave the movie 1.3/5. I got this one where information is different. I have removed the portion from the article. --Titodutta (talk) 17:50, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
  • Unfortunately, neither nominator nor creator has responded—the nominator hasn't edited for quite a while, and the creator hasn't responded to a talk-page ping. Marking for closure as unsuccessful, though if a new hook is proposed before this closes, the review can resume. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:14, 2 June 2018 (UTC)
I've left @Titodutta: one final talk page message as it appears he edited two days ago; I suppose we can wait for a response for a few more days. If he still doesn't respond after a few more days, then this nomination can be closed. Thanks. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 08:51, 2 June 2018 (UTC)
  • Sorry for delay in replying. I do not have a more interesting hook for this article. --Titodutta (talk) 09:14, 2 June 2018 (UTC)
Noted. @BlueMoonset: endorsing marking this for closure. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew