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== Semi-protected edit request on 2 December 2018 ==
== Semi-protected edit request on 2 December 2018 ==


{{edit semi-protected|Markelle Fultz|answered=no}}
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"On November 2018" = "In November 2018" [[Special:Contributions/2605:E000:9149:8300:3C3F:FD1E:779D:1F04|2605:E000:9149:8300:3C3F:FD1E:779D:1F04]] ([[User talk:2605:E000:9149:8300:3C3F:FD1E:779D:1F04|talk]]) 08:39, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
"On November 2018" = "In November 2018" [[Special:Contributions/2605:E000:9149:8300:3C3F:FD1E:779D:1F04|2605:E000:9149:8300:3C3F:FD1E:779D:1F04]] ([[User talk:2605:E000:9149:8300:3C3F:FD1E:779D:1F04|talk]]) 08:39, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
: {{not done}} The only place November is listed is in the sentence " On November 20, 2018, his agent Raymond Brothers announced Fultz would not participate in practice or games until an apparent shoulder injury was evaluated; Fultz’s also reportedly suffered a right wrist injury." Using the word "In" would not make make sense since it lists a specific date. [[User:HickoryOughtShirt?4|HickoryOughtShirt?4]] ([[User talk:HickoryOughtShirt?4|talk]]) 08:50, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

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Jersey Number

Until it is officially confirmed that he is wearing that number during the regular season, it shouldn't be listed on his article.--MarcusPearl95 (talk) 05:36, 7 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Biogeography slip-up

Why is Upper Marlboro described as being "23 miles outside of" Annapolis instead of as something like "positioned 8 miles southeast of D.C.", the latter is much more definitive. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:1010:B009:3CAF:8479:6313:45B1:1D39 (talk) 03:49, 12 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:32, 19 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 20:32, 19 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

High school career

  • "all-boys college-prep private school," - I understand what this means but it should be written as "college-preparatory"
  • "As a 5-foot, 9-inch sophomore," - use the convert template on 5-foot, 9-inch
  • "then-assistant coach Cory McCrae said" - THE MOS discourages use of the word "then" in this case
  • "he measured 6 feet, 3 inches." - same as the second point
  • Wikilink MVP to Most valuable player

References

  • There is no access date to Reference 15
  • References 16, 17, 18, 19 & 21 are missing their author(s)
  • Reference 24 is missing Associated Press as the agency

A very good article overall. Just the minor nibbles from me. MWright96 (talk) 11:52, 20 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 I believe I addressed the points you raised. Thank you for your compliment on the article.TheGracefulSlick (talk) 03:30, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Semi-protected edit request on 2 December 2018

"On November 2018" = "In November 2018" 2605:E000:9149:8300:3C3F:FD1E:779D:1F04 (talk) 08:39, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done The only place November is listed is in the sentence " On November 20, 2018, his agent Raymond Brothers announced Fultz would not participate in practice or games until an apparent shoulder injury was evaluated; Fultz’s also reportedly suffered a right wrist injury." Using the word "In" would not make make sense since it lists a specific date. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 08:50, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]