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Researchers have determined how sexual objectification of women in film negatively impacts the mindset of girls and young women. Research has discovered{{weasel inline|date=November 2018}} that when girls have had an extended exposure to films in which female super heroes were dressed in over-sexualized costumes, they became more aware of their own body competence. This type of exposure can cause a detrimental view of female roles in the film industry. The over-sexualization of female roles in popular Hollywood films has been found to have a negative effect on girl's self-esteem and can cause them to want to alter their bodies to look more like the actresses in films and movies.<ref name=":0" /> |
Researchers have determined how sexual objectification of women in film negatively impacts the mindset of girls and young women. Research has discovered{{weasel inline|date=November 2018}} that when girls have had an extended exposure to films in which female super heroes were dressed in over-sexualized costumes, they became more aware of their own body competence. This type of exposure can cause a detrimental view of female roles in the film industry. The over-sexualization of female roles in popular Hollywood films has been found to have a negative effect on girl's self-esteem and can cause them to want to alter their bodies to look more like the actresses in films and movies.<ref name=":0" /> |
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The most often criticized aspect of the use of women in mass media is sexual objectification, with dismemberment being a part of objectification.
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Additionally, the sexual objectification of women in film has a detrimental effect on girls and young women. Research shows[weasel words] that when girls had extended exposure to films in which female super heroes were dressed in over-sexualized costumes, they became more aware of their own body competence. Additionally, the exposure impacted their view of the female gender and female roles. Such over-sexualization in popular Hollywood films takes away from girl's self-esteem and encourages them to want to alter their bodies to look more like the actresses in films and media.[1]
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Researchers have determined how sexual objectification of women in film negatively impacts the mindset of girls and young women. Research has discovered[weasel words] that when girls have had an extended exposure to films in which female super heroes were dressed in over-sexualized costumes, they became more aware of their own body competence. This type of exposure can cause a detrimental view of female roles in the film industry. The over-sexualization of female roles in popular Hollywood films has been found to have a negative effect on girl's self-esteem and can cause them to want to alter their bodies to look more like the actresses in films and movies.[1]
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- ^ a b Pennell, H.; Behm-Morawitz, E. (2015). "The Empowering (Super) Heroine? The Effects of Sexualized Female Characters in Superhero Films on Women". Sex Roles. 72 (5/6): 211–220. doi:10.1007/s11199-015-0455-3.