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Kinship discussions

Through IVF techniques, some old ideas of certain constellations of being "impossible", need to be considered nowadays. In Charis Thompson's book "Making Parents", she points out "Naturalizing Stratgies", that mothers use to justify kinship relations. In the 5th chapter, she points out, that for example mothers who need to use the services of a surrogate mother base their definition of kinship mostly on the given genetic relationship. On the other hand, other mothers who need to use egg-cells from another woman, still consider the baby being "theirs", basing the kinship on the fact of that they carried and gave birth to the child. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bonsaipotathoe (talk • contribs) 15:19, 7 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello Wiki community! I am a student at California State University East Bay, in a post-bacc program bioethics class. I have a few contributions to add to the invitro fertilisation page. Please give your feedback and own edits. I have Modified the ethical decisions in IVF with information and links. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cajjen12 (talk • contribs) 23:48, 1 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Cajjen12. Thanks for the work, but along with some possibly good amendments you have changed all the headings to max caps. According to WP:Style they should be sentence case. I have undone your edit, as the easiest way of restoring the correct style. If you wish to make the substantive changes again, please don't change the case of the headings. And it might be best to do the edits in stages, not all at once, so that others can see what you've done. Best wishes - SNALWIBMA ( talk - contribs ) 16:52, 23 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Foundations II: P2 - 5B - Topics and Goals

Possible topics to discuss:

age - maternal age and decreasing change of conception ^[1]
update success, average cost, insurance coverage, age caps, other guidelines in USA
find citation for Israel data - added to Israel section
drugs that are used in vitro fertilization
drug side effects, DDI, monitoring, - or add links to drugs
fertilisation vs fertilization?

JVIDUYA (talk) 20:13, 1 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

UCSF Peer Review of Team 5b by Team 5a

Do the group’s edits substantially improve the article as described in the Wikipedia peer review “Guiding framework”?

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Goals were to address:

age - maternal age and decreasing change of conception - Team 5b added information regarding outcomes of IVF at or over a certain age (more difficult and higher chance of adverse events).
update success, average cost, insurance coverage, age caps, other guidelines in USA
find citation for Israel data - added to Israel section
drugs that are used in vitro fertilization
drug side effects, DDI, monitoring, - or add links to drugs - Did not address drug drug interactions or drug side effects as their original goal stated
fertilisation vs fertilization?
Team 5b added: Updated the availability of IVF in different countries: age restriction, funding, statistics for USA with citation.

Does the draft submission reflect a neutral point of view? If not, specify…

Group 5B edited the article with a neutral point of view. The language they used did not contain any positive/negative or biased tones. Christinewmin (talk) 21:41, 5 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Are the points included verifiable with cited secondary sources that are freely available? If not, specify…

Are the edits formatted consistent with Wikipedia’s manual of style? If not, specify…

Is there any evidence of plagiarism or copyright violation? If yes, specify…

I searched their edits in Google and did not find any plagiarism. Great! Kshim054 (talk) 16:56, 6 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

^ Frattarelli, John L.; Miller, Kathleen A.; Miller, Bradley T.; Elkind-Hirsch, Karen; Scott, Richard T. (July 2008). "Male age negatively impacts embryo development and reproductive outcome in donor oocyte assisted reproductive technology cycles". Fertility and Sterility. 90 (1): 97–103. doi:10.1016/j.fertnstert.2007.06.009.

[1] Frattarelli, John L.; Miller, Kathleen A.; Miller, Bradley T.; Elkind-Hirsch, Karen; Scott, Richard T. (July 2008). "Male age negatively impacts embryo development and reproductive outcome in donor oocyte assisted reproductive technology cycles". Fertility and Sterility. 90 (1): 97–103. doi:10.1016/j.fertnstert.2007.06.009.

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