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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:16, 3 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Checkpoint Charlie on the night of 9/10 November 1989
Checkpoint Charlie on the night of 9/10 November 1989

Created by Onceinawhile (talk). Self-nominated at 07:04, 30 September 2019 (UTC).[reply]


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: valereee (talk) 15:04, 1 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • I love ALT1, but while I see the fall called an "accident" in the source, I'm not finding the word accident or mistake in the article. What sentence supports the hook? --valereee (talk) 15:06, 1 October 2019 (UTC) ETA: is "mistake" what we want? Sources say "accidental," which is arguably quite different. This hook will likely get much attention, just want to make sure we get it right. --valereee (talk) 16:14, 1 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • The sentence in the article that supports ALT0, It soon became clear that no one among the East German authorities would take personal responsibility for issuing orders to use lethal force, so the vastly outnumbered soldiers had no way to hold back the huge crowd of East German citizens. does not have a citation. --valereee (talk) 16:06, 1 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Ping me when you have a chance to respond, and also see comments at article talk that are not problematic for DYK purposes but that I think we probably want to address before the hook runs. --valereee (talk) 16:16, 1 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Valereee. I have amended mistake to accident, and struck ALT0. The source is then the title of Sarotte's book. I doubt I'll have time to get this to GA in the next month unfortunately. Onceinawhile (talk) 08:12, 2 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Valereee and Onceinawhile: I noticed there are a few unsourced paragraphs and also a {{citation needed}} tag. Therefore it doesn't fit the sourced criterion yet. There also seem to be some {{page needed}} tags. I think ApprenticeFan should also be mentioned as one of the article expanders. epicgenius (talk) 16:20, 2 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed the cn (thanks, EG, I'd missed that) but Onceinawhile I can't find a source for that assertion about Krenz/Stoph in a one-sentence unsourced paragraph. We could add it to the paragraph that's above it, that actually would make sense, but I'm concerned that I'm not easily finding a source for that happening on that date. Our articles on Krenz, Stoph, and the Berlin Wall don't seem to help. Should we remove that sentence? Epicgenius, I don't think the page needed tags are necessarily a problem for DYK? Not that I wouldn't like to see those added, too, but I hadn't planned to fail the nom for that. I checked on the book, and the preview isn't letting me see full pages. --valereee (talk) 18:40, 2 October 2019 (UTC) ETA: I've requested the book from my library, I should be able to get those pagenos if you can't OIAW. --valereee (talk) 18:46, 2 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Valereee: I don't personally think the page-needed tags are a big deal. This would have been covered if the page had gone through GAN, but this is not GAN, so we can disregard them for now. However, the missing citations are pretty major, especially seeing as how the now-stricken hook didn't have a citation. epicgenius (talk) 19:07, 2 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I've added the material for the current hook, plus citation. I would like to see this go through at least a major review in time for its appearance, though. It could get a ton of views. Is there anyplace to go to ask for semi-urgent help? --valereee (talk) 19:48, 2 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I don't know anywhere off the top of my head that specializes in citation checking. I asked on Discord for help, so let's see if that works. Do you live in a major city, or near a library with a large collection? I can probably check my college's library or New York Public Library tomorrow. epicgenius (talk) 20:06, 2 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I do live in a large city with a first-class library system. I'm leaving town for two weeks first thing Saturday, but I've requested the book with all the page-neededs (Revolution 1989) and am hoping it comes in today or tomorrow so I can take it with me as I'll have some time to work while I'm out of town. --valereee (talk) 10:48, 3 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
valereee, have you gotten the relevant pages in the book yet? epicgenius (talk) 13:48, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Epicgenius, yes, it was here when I got home yesterday! Now it's just a matter of matching the page numbers to the assertions! --valereee (talk) 14:12, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
done! Thank goodness for well-indexed books! Passing this! --valereee (talk) 14:41, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

trying again --valereee (talk) 20:48, 18 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

How should (pictured) be inserted into the hook? feminist (talk) 15:27, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Feminist: I have done so above. Onceinawhile (talk) 00:21, 1 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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