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All links to shsid.org are now dead. Editors note. [[User:Zamaster4536|Zamaster4536]] ([[User talk:Zamaster4536|talk]]) 12:41, 10 January 2016 (UTC)
All links to shsid.org are now dead. Editors note. [[User:Zamaster4536|Zamaster4536]] ([[User talk:Zamaster4536|talk]]) 12:41, 10 January 2016 (UTC)

== Bias and outdated information ==

Certain parts of the article contains biased information. The language sounds harsh towards the school faculty. For example, the sentence "The school also has a gym that students aren't allowed to use because it 'belongs' to the country" sounds sarcastic and does not adhere to the objective tone of an encyclopedia. Large sections of the article cite no sources and sound as if it was written by a student who goes to this school (which it probably is). This leads to an informal-sounding article.

Also, there are parts that may be outdated. Teachers come and go. New buildings are built. The article does not speak about the new building put into use this year, Zhengtao Building.

[[User:RyanGeLOL|RyanGeLOL]] ([[User talk:RyanGeLOL|talk]]) 12:11, 7 October 2019 (UTC)RyanGeLOL

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The Meadows? I don't think that's worth an entire section... Uncle Ma was here (talk) 12:54, 5 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Assess

More content is needed if you want to avoid deletion. Dahliarose 23:39, 23 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

This content should be seperate from the SHS content. Personal experiance relates that the two schools have very little in common, thus the statment from SHS should be removed, and an extended stament from SHSID should be added. Incidentally, the Meadows section is also incorrect and contains various rumors that cannot be confirmed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 222.66.202.142 (talk) 01:30, 27 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

All links to shsid.org are now dead. Editors note. Zamaster4536 (talk) 12:41, 10 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Bias and outdated information

Certain parts of the article contains biased information. The language sounds harsh towards the school faculty. For example, the sentence "The school also has a gym that students aren't allowed to use because it 'belongs' to the country" sounds sarcastic and does not adhere to the objective tone of an encyclopedia. Large sections of the article cite no sources and sound as if it was written by a student who goes to this school (which it probably is). This leads to an informal-sounding article.

Also, there are parts that may be outdated. Teachers come and go. New buildings are built. The article does not speak about the new building put into use this year, Zhengtao Building.

RyanGeLOL (talk) 12:11, 7 October 2019 (UTC)RyanGeLOL[reply]