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Cleanup

I added a cleanup tag, as this article really needs it. 199.126.137.209 14:04, 7 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I've added a second cleanup tag because the article becomes increasingly confusing toward the end. It appears to have been written by one user, and then hastily corrected by another. Instead of re-writing the section in question, only a single sentence was added, and it degrades the quality of the article. Since the storyline is slightly different depending on the game in question, the article needs to clearly reflect that. At the moment it's pretty confusing to read. Needles-Kane 06:07, 11 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I also did a minor edit. If this info is truly invalid, do revert. --Kitetsu 10:57, 16 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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	:I've added a second cleanup tag because the article becomes increasingly confusing toward the end. It appears to have been written by one user, and then hastily corrected by another. Instead of re-writing the section in question, only a single sentence was added, and it degrades the quality of the article. Since the storyline is slightly different depending on the game in question, the article needs to clearly reflect that. At the moment it's pretty confusing to read. [[User:Needles-Kane\|Needles-Kane]] 06:07, 11 December 2006 (UTC)		:I've added a second cleanup tag because the article becomes increasingly confusing toward the end. It appears to have been written by one user, and then hastily corrected by another. Instead of re-writing the section in question, only a single sentence was added, and it degrades the quality of the article. Since the storyline is slightly different depending on the game in question, the article needs to clearly reflect that. At the moment it's pretty confusing to read. [[User:Needles-Kane\|Needles-Kane]] 06:07, 11 December 2006 (UTC)


			I also did a minor edit. If this info is truly invalid, do revert. --[[User:Kitetsu\|Kitetsu]] 10:57, 16 December 2006 (UTC)