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Your submission at Articles for creation: Francesco De Ferrari (March 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Praxidicae were:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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Praxidicae (talk) 17:41, 4 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, FaizanWrites! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Praxidicae (talk) 17:41, 4 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

March 2020

Hello, I'm Praxidicae. I noticed that you removed topically-relevant content from a Wikipedia article. However, Wikipedia is not censored. Please do not remove or censor information that directly relates to the subject of the article. If the content in question involves images, you have the option to configure Wikipedia to hide images that you may find offensive. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you may leave a message on my talk page. Thank you. Praxidicae (talk) 17:44, 4 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Re: Draft:Francesco De Ferrari

Hello FaizanWrites I have added projects Australia, Biography, Business, to your article. You may wish to join them, check their to-do, and meet new people with interest in these topics. ( To reply click "edit" next to this section, and add your reply at the end. ) Cheers, --Gryllida (talk) 01:07, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Sentences

Hi FaizanWrites

"De Ferrari has worked for blue-chip companies such as Deloitte, Nestlé and McKinsey.[7]" -- why "such as"? This does not add any information. Would be great to know year and place (country) of this work. This source is only a passing mention of this fact, and a better source would be required (as this is biography of a living person, sourcing is very strict).

"Prior to joining Credit Suisse, De Ferrari founded and led three different entrepreneurial ventures[8] including running an Arts exhibition and events company, retailing sunglasses and launching a tech company[8][9]". Years, places, names of companies would be excellent to include here. First source #8 is only a passing mention of the first sentence; second source #9 does not mention any sunglasses or exhibitions. Please be more careful about what information to include, and how to write it.

Please check this and correct. Thank you. --Gryllida (talk) 02:16, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Live chat apps

With Windows and Mac, Quassel IRC and HexChat may be useful. Then you don't have to keep the chat in a tab of your web browser. I find it more visually appealing and more efficient. Perhaps consider it. Welcome! --Gryllida (talk) 03:32, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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 Please check this and correct. Thank you. --[[User:Gryllida|Gryllida]] ([[User talk:Gryllida|talk]]) 02:16, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
+== Live chat apps ==
+With Windows and Mac, [[Quassel IRC]] and [[HexChat]] may be useful. Then you don't have to keep the chat in a tab of your web browser. I find it more visually appealing and more efficient. Perhaps consider it. Welcome! --[[User:Gryllida|Gryllida]] ([[User talk:Gryllida|talk]]) 03:32, 1 April 2020 (UTC)