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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 05:17, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

Elmhurst Hospital Center

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... that when three deaths occurred at Elmhurst Hospital Center in 1978, prompting a homicide investigation, the cause was found to be a shortage of nurses and beds? Source: NY Times 1978
- ALT1:... that the 500,000 patients that visited New York City's Elmhurst Hospital Center in 2004 spoke 100 languages or dialects, and "roughly half" didn't speak sufficient English? Source: NY Times 2005

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Kurti cabinet
Comment: ECTran71 created the article, but I expanded it five times past the original size so it could be eligible for DYK. My preference is for any hook that is not coronavirus-related, though.

5x expanded by Epicgenius (talk) and ECTran71 (talk). Nominated by Epicgenius (talk) at 22:36, 27 March 2020 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall:

Looks good. I prefer the first hook but wonder if it can be reworded to flow better. KAVEBEAR (talk) 03:01, 28 March 2020 (UTC)

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 * ... that when three deaths occurred at '''[[Elmhurst Hospital Center]]''' in 1978, prompting a homicide investigation, the cause was found to be a shortage of nurses and beds? <small>Source: [https://www.nytimes.com/1978/03/17/archives/shortages-at-elmhurst-hospital-are-forcing-some-life-and-death.html NY Times 1978]</small>
 ** '''ALT1''':... that the 500,000 patients that visited New York City's '''[[Elmhurst Hospital Center]]''' in 2004 spoke 100 languages or dialects, and "roughly half" didn't speak sufficient English? <small>Source: [https://www.nytimes.com/2005/04/15/nyregion/queens-hospitals-learn-many-ways-to-say-ah.html NY Times 2005]</small>
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 <small>5x expanded by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) and [[User:ECTran71|ECTran71]] ([[User talk:ECTran71|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) at 22:36, 27 March 2020 (UTC).</small>
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