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== The Article on [[Naugatuck |
== The Article on [[Naugatuck]]... == |
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I did some major style edits and added source tags, but this paragraph still makes me angry: |
I did some major style edits and added source tags, but this paragraph still makes me angry: |
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Revision as of 04:53, 26 December 2006
I say! I have found this article most intriguing! Now we can make the peons feel even more inferior! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:How_to_copy-edit.--JRNorbergé 20:38, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
I was reading the PETA article before and it seems biased twards non-peta ideas. That's a little ironic, don't you think? JRNorbergé 02:43, 12 November 2006 (UTC) - I can't remember if I was being sarcastic, or if I misused ironic... I hope the former. JRNorbergé
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The Article on Naugatuck...
I did some major style edits and added source tags, but this paragraph still makes me angry:
"As American manufacturing declined in the late 20th Century, the mills closed and the town fell on largely hard times. With the expansion of suburbs, especially in New Haven and Fairfield County, the town is largely a bedroom community for the lower-middle class. With this, many of Naugatuck's neighbors are fairly wealthy. Middlebury and Oxford are affluent towns that have higher performing school districts, but the price to live in these suburbs is high. Currently, many new more expensive homes are being built as people from Fairfield county and other areas are looking for more affordable housing and convenient access to major highways." JRNorbergé 04:52, 26 December 2006 (UTC)