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Remixes
There's one more remix you might have to add to the list. I remembered there being a 12" vinyl of a Fingazz remix featuring singer/rapper Diamonique. Given the age of the song, the vinyl of it may have already disappeared; however, the remix does appear on Fingazz's discography. ElMeroEse (talk) 01:11, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
FAR might be needed
From a glance, I'm not sure this is up to FA-standards. The lead doesn't include genres, critics' opinions, or anything on the music video. The "track listings" section is unreferenced, and so is most of "In pop culture". I'm also not sure if the audio samples are really beneficial. I'll check back in a week or so to see if any improvements have been made. Otherwise, I will list this at FAR. Snuggums (talk / edits) 22:24, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
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Peer review the fourth
I plan on taking this article back to WP:PR, but I already have another article waiting to be responded to – once that's out, I'll put mine in. Thatoneweirdwikier | Say hi 16:41, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 03:00, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
Looks good from first glance. Might take me a while to review it but will try as fast as possible. LOVI33 03:00, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
- Target 12-inch to Twelve-inch single
- Target Right Track Recording to MSR Studios
- Target 1980s to 1980s in music
- The song was written by Stefani, Pharrell Williams and Chad Hugo → The song was written by Stefani, Pharrell Williams and Chad Hugo, with the latter two handling the production as The Neptunes.
- Release date in lead does not match release date in infobox
- 48th Grammy Awards → 48th Annual Grammy Awards
- Done all. User:Thatone
weirdwikier | Conversations and Contributions 05:28, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done all. User:Thatone
Writing and inspiration
- Looks Good! Amazing writing.
Composition and musical style
- Move ref 10 to the end of the sentence
- It is in verse-chorus form with → The song is in verse-chorus form
- Move ref 13 to the end of the sentence
- Done all. User:Thatone
weirdwikier | Conversations and Contributions 05:29, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done all. User:Thatone
Critical reception
- Target music critics to Music journalism
- Eric Greenwood of Drawer B called the song "moronic and embarrassingly tuneless. I'd quote the lyrics → Eric Greenwood of Drawer B called the song "moronic and embarrassingly tuneless," while also writing "I'd quote the lyrics ...
- It feels like there are more negative reviews shown then positive, maybe stick to: "Hollaback Girl" received mixed reviews from music critics.
- Done all. User:Thatone
weirdwikier | Conversations and Contributions 05:31, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done all. User:Thatone
Commercial performance
- Wikilink 50 Cent and Olivia
- It replaced 50 Cent's "Candy Shop" featuring Olivia, which had spent the previous nine weeks at number one on the chart. It maintained the number-one position for four consecutive weeks → It ended the nine-week run of 50 Cent's "Candy Shop" featuring Olivia, and maintained the number-one position for four consecutive weeks.
- Target We Belong Together to We Belong Together
- "Hollaback Girl" ranked second on the 2005 Hot 100 year-end chart, beaten by Mariah Carey's "We Belong Together" → "Hollaback Girl" ranked second on the 2005 Hot 100 year-end chart, being kept from the top spot by Mariah Carey's "We Belong Together"
- Unsure what feat means in maintained this feat, maybe change to record
- Move ref 36 to end of sentence
- Target crossover to Crossover music
- 1.2 million downloads;[38][39] it was certified → 1.2 million downloads.[38][39] It was certified
- It was certified five-times platinum by the Recording Industry Association of America.[40] It was later re-certified platinum, for the same sales, due to the change of the RIAA certification criteria for singles.[41][a] → It was certified five-times platinum by the Recording Industry Association of America and was later re-certified platinum, for the same sales, due to the change of the RIAA certification criteria for singles.[40][41][a]
- On the year-end list for Hot Digital Songs in 2005, "Hollaback Girl" placed at the top of the chart. → On the year-end list for Hot Digital Songs in 2005, "Hollaback Girl" topped the chart.
- Done all. User:Thatone
weirdwikier | Conversations and Contributions 05:37, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done all. User:Thatone
Music video
- The video opens with a scene of Stefani → It opens with a scene of Stefani
- released commercially through CD singles and digital downloads, and some → released commercially through CD singles and digital downloads. Some
- move ref 57 to the end of the sentence
- Done all. User:Thatone
weirdwikier | Conversations and Contributions 05:38, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done all. User:Thatone
Live performances
- Looks Good! No issues found
Track listings
- Looks Good!
Remixes
- Looks Good!
Credits and personnel
- Change title to 'Personnel', 'Credits and personnel' is used when recording locations or publishing is also included
Charts
- Looks Good!
Certifications
- Looks Good!
Notes/See Also
- Move Notes to below See also in accordance with MOS:FNNR
References
- No Issues Found
External links
- Looks good!
Final comments and verdict
- On hold for now. Overall this definitely passes the GA criteria, there are just some issues I have found that, if addressed, will definitely improve it's GA criteria. If addressed, I will pass it. LOVI33 03:59, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
- @LOVI33: I have finished addressing your comments. User:Thatone
weirdwikier | Conversations and Contributions 05:40, 21 June 2020 (UTC)- Thatoneweirdwikier, thats great! I will pass it now. LOVI33 13:28, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
- @LOVI33: I have finished addressing your comments. User:Thatone
Did you know nomination
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The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 07:24, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
- ... that Gwen Stefani's song "Hollaback Girl" was the first single ever to sell more digital downloads than CDs? Source: Stefani, Peas Lead Singles Boom
- Reviewed: Exempt
Improved to Good Article status by Thatoneweirdwikier (talk). Self-nominated at 15:02, 21 June 2020 (UTC).
- Substantial article, meeting of GA criteria implicates DYK pass. Article was promoted to Good status within 7 days of nomination. Editor is QPQ exempt. Hook is interesting, cited, and short enough for DYK. I will note that DYK does get an abundance of "[article] was the first [blank]" hooks submitted so editors occasionally recommend that nominators submit one or two alternate hooks, but I personally think this hook is interesting enough to stand on its own. Morgan695 (talk) 04:56, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review! User:Thatone
weirdwikier | Conversations and Contributions 06:22, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review! User:Thatone
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