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*<ref name="IndianVoices2015"> Indian Voices, 2015, The Stone that the Builder Refused: Indian Voices Newspaper, Oct. 2015, p. 3, 11; www.indianvoices.net/archives </ref> Retrieved 5 July 2020. |
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*<ref name="WomensMuseum"> Women’s Museum of California; https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Women%27s_Museum_of_California </ref> Retrieved 5 July 2020. |
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Makeda ‘Dread’ Cheatom, an American entrepreneur, civil activist, and icon in San Diego’s African-American community, is the founder of the WorldBeat Cultural Center in Balboa Park, creator of the Children’s EthnoBotany Peace Garden, and co-founder of Casa del Tunel in Tijuana, Mexico.[1] [2]
Early life
Marianne Makeda Cheatom was born in 1942 in Paducah, Texas [3]. Her father was in the Air Force there and then transferred to the San Diego Naval Air Station when Makeda was 3 months old [4].
Education
Makeda graduated from San Diego High School (c. 1962)[5]. As an experimental cook, she studied food services and culinary arts at San Diego City College and telecommunications at Mesa Collage [3]. She also studied Transcendental Meditation.
Accomplishments
As a restauranteur, Makeda founded Prophet International Vegetarian Restaurant (1971-1985)[3], which was the first vegetarian restaurant in San Diego, attracting luminaries such as George Harrison, Gloria Swanson, Dick Van Dyke, Dyan Cannon, and Dick Gregory.[1][5]. As an entrepreneur, she founded The Baobab, an African crafts/cultural center in Golden Hill area starting in 1981.[5]. As a reggae music promoter, she staged her first reggae concert in 1980); she organized Bob Marley Day Festival concerts, which attracted most of the famous Reggae artists; all told, 35 annual reggae festivals were produced.[6]. As a radio show host of Reggae Makossa, she has been on the air for over 25 years.[1]. As the founder of the WorldBeat Center in Balboa Park since 1989, Makeda created a music, dance, arts and World Peace center for the African diaspora which includes African-Americans, Afro-Caribbean, and Africans [1]; the venue received LEED Silver Certification in 2012 [7]. As a Cultural Ambassador, Makeda acknowledges that San Diego and Balboa Park are ancestral Kumeyaay Indian territory, and she states this at the beginning of programs run at the WorldBeat Center [8], inviting Kumeyaay people to share their culture.[9]. As an award-winning garden creator, Makeda created the Children’s EthnoBotany Peace Garden which has been recognized [1]Cite error: The <ref> tag has too many names (see the help page). Retrieved 5 July 2020.
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- ^ a b c d Salaam, Elizabeth, 2012, Your Child is my Child; https://www.sandiegoreader.com/news/2012/apr/04/feature-your-child-my-child/
- ^ a b Prince Sefa-Boakye, n.d., Princes Daily Journal, Makeda’s Story and her Legacy for Peace; https://princesdailyjournal.com/interestingpeopl/makeda-dread-founder-and-ceo-of-the-world-beat-center/makedas-story-and-her-legacy-for-peace/
- ^ a b c d DeWyze, Jeannette, 1981, Marianne Makeda Cheatom – reggae matriarch of San Diego vegetarians; https://www.sandiegoreader.com/news/1981/may/21/cover-prophet-sharing/
- ^ a b Varga, George, 2016, 35th Bob Marley Day Festival the Last for Makeda Dread; https://www.sandiegouniontribune.com/entertainment/music/sdut-makeda-reggae-lends-fest-end-of-an-era-2016jan30-htmlstory.html
- ^ a b Balboa Park Cultural Partnership, World Beat Center LEED certification, 2012 https://bpcp.org/sustainability/leed-certifications/
- ^ a b KUSI Newsroom, 2015, Honoring Dr. King’s Dream; https://www.kusi.com/honoring-dr-kings-dream/
- ^ a b Makeda and the World Beat Center a San Diego Community Treasure: Indian Voices Newspaper, Jan. 2012, p. 10; www.indianvoices.net/archives
- ^ Davis, Rose, 2015, WorldBeat Center’s New Kumeyaay Indigenous Garden: Indian Voices Newspaper, August 2015, p. 1; www.indianvoices.net/archives
- ^ Indian Voices, 2015, The Stone that the Builder Refused: Indian Voices Newspaper, Oct. 2015, p. 3, 11; www.indianvoices.net/archives
- ^ , Berenice, 2018 Highlights at WorldBeat Center: http://www.worldbeatcenter.org/archives/30174 ,
- ^ Women’s Museum of California; https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Women%27s_Museum_of_California
- ^ Balboa Park Cultural Partnership, 2015, https://bpcp.org/sustainability/awards-recognition/sustainability-partners-breakfast-and-awards/