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We need prose, please, not a set of lists. Your referencing scheme took a lot of work to create, but you have misunderstood. The citation itself is to be by the point cited. What you have done is achieved duplicating your list of references. I'm sorry this means changing your diligent work, but, since you will be redrafting the article, this is a great time to do this. I have not reviewed past these two points.

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Makeda ‘Dread’ Cheatom Makeda 'Dread' Cheaton (b.1942-), an American entrepreneur, civil activist, and icon in San Diego’s African-American community, is the founder of the WorldBeat Cultural Center in Balboa Park, creator of the Children’s EthnoBotany Peace Garden, and co-founder of Casa del Tunel in Tijuana, Mexico. Cite error: The <ref> tag has too many names (see the help page). Retrieved 7 July 2020

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^ Pollack, Mimi, 2016, Nurturing Immigrant Art and Giving Back; https://sandiegofreepress.org/2016/12/makeda-dread-cheatom/#.XwIayyhKg2w
^ Salaam, Elizabeth, 2012, Your Child is my Child; https://www.sandiegoreader.com/news/2012/apr/04/feature-your-child-my-child/
^ Prince Sefa-Boakye, n.d., Princes Daily Journal, Makeda’s Story and her Legacy for Peace; https://princesdailyjournal.com/interestingpeopl/makeda-dread-founder-and-ceo-of-the-world-beat-center/makedas-story-and-her-legacy-for-peace/
^ DeWyze, Jeannette, 1981, Marianne Makeda Cheatom – reggae matriarch of San Diego vegetarians; https://www.sandiegoreader.com/news/1981/may/21/cover-prophet-sharing/
^ Varga, George, 2016, 35th Bob Marley Day Festival the Last for Makeda Dread; https://www.sandiegouniontribune.com/entertainment/music/sdut-makeda-reggae-lends-fest-end-of-an-era-2016jan30-htmlstory.html
^ Balboa Park Cultural Partnership, World Beat Center LEED certification, 2012 https://bpcp.org/sustainability/leed-certifications/
^ KUSI Newsroom, 2015, Honoring Dr. King’s Dream; https://www.kusi.com/honoring-dr-kings-dream/
^ Davis, Rose, 2012, World Beat Center Peace Pole: Indian Voices Newspaper, July/August 2012, p. 6; www.indianvoices.net/archives
^ Davis, Rose, 2015, WorldBeat Center’s New Kumeyaay Indigenous Garden: Indian Voices Newspaper, August 2015, p. 1; www.indianvoices.net/archives
^ , Berenice, 2018 Highlights at WorldBeat Center: http://www.worldbeatcenter.org/archives/30174 ,
^ Women’s Museum of California; https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Women%27s_Museum_of_California
^ Balboa Park Cultural Partnership, 2015, https://bpcp.org/sustainability/awards-recognition/sustainability-partners-breakfast-and-awards/

[Pollack2016-1] Pollack, Mimi, 2016, Nurturing Immigrant Art and Giving Back; https://sandiegofreepress.org/2016/12/makeda-dread-cheatom/#.XwIayyhKg2w

[Salaam2012-2] Salaam, Elizabeth, 2012, Your Child is my Child; https://www.sandiegoreader.com/news/2012/apr/04/feature-your-child-my-child/

[PrinceSefa-3] Prince Sefa-Boakye, n.d., Princes Daily Journal, Makeda’s Story and her Legacy for Peace; https://princesdailyjournal.com/interestingpeopl/makeda-dread-founder-and-ceo-of-the-world-beat-center/makedas-story-and-her-legacy-for-peace/

[DeWyze1981-4] DeWyze, Jeannette, 1981, Marianne Makeda Cheatom – reggae matriarch of San Diego vegetarians; https://www.sandiegoreader.com/news/1981/may/21/cover-prophet-sharing/

[Varga2016-5] Varga, George, 2016, 35th Bob Marley Day Festival the Last for Makeda Dread; https://www.sandiegouniontribune.com/entertainment/music/sdut-makeda-reggae-lends-fest-end-of-an-era-2016jan30-htmlstory.html

[BalboaPark2012-6] Balboa Park Cultural Partnership, World Beat Center LEED certification, 2012 https://bpcp.org/sustainability/leed-certifications/

[KUSI2015-7] KUSI Newsroom, 2015, Honoring Dr. King’s Dream; https://www.kusi.com/honoring-dr-kings-dream/

[Davis2012-8] Davis, Rose, 2012, World Beat Center Peace Pole: Indian Voices Newspaper, July/August 2012, p. 6; www.indianvoices.net/archives

[Davis2015-9] Davis, Rose, 2015, WorldBeat Center’s New Kumeyaay Indigenous Garden: Indian Voices Newspaper, August 2015, p. 1; www.indianvoices.net/archives

[Berenice2018-10] , Berenice, 2018 Highlights at WorldBeat Center: http://www.worldbeatcenter.org/archives/30174 ,

[WomensMuseum-11] Women’s Museum of California; https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Women%27s_Museum_of_California

[BalboaPark2015-12] Balboa Park Cultural Partnership, 2015, https://bpcp.org/sustainability/awards-recognition/sustainability-partners-breakfast-and-awards/

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 '''Makeda ‘Dread’ Cheatom'''
-Makeda 'Dread' Cheaton (b.1942-), an American entrepreneur, civil activist, and icon in San Diego’s African-American community, is the founder of the WorldBeat Cultural Center in Balboa Park, creator of the Children’s EthnoBotany Peace Garden, and co-founder of Casa del Tunel in Tijuana, Mexico. <ref name="NAACP2019" /><ref name="Pollack2016" />
+Makeda 'Dread' Cheaton (b.1942-), an American entrepreneur, civil activist, and icon in San Diego’s African-American community, is the founder of the WorldBeat Cultural Center in Balboa Park, creator of the Children’s EthnoBotany Peace Garden, and co-founder of Casa del Tunel in Tijuana, Mexico. <ref name="NAACP" /ref>  <ref name="Pollack2016" />
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 ==== References ====
-*<ref name="NAACP2019"> Makeda "Dread" Cheatom: 2019 NAACP San Diego award winner; https://www.sandiegonaacp.org/2019/09/16/makeda-dread-cheatom-2019-naacp-san-diego-branch-presidents-award-winner/</ref> Retrieved 7 July 2020.
+<ref name""NAACP2019">Makeda "Dread" Cheatom: 2019 NAACP San Diego award winner; https://www.sandiegonaacp.org/2019/09/16/makeda-dread-cheatom-2019-naacp-san-diego-branch-presidents-award-winner/</ref> Retrieved 7 July 2020
 *<ref name="Pollack2016"> Pollack, Mimi, 2016, Nurturing Immigrant Art and Giving Back; https://sandiegofreepress.org/2016/12/makeda-dread-cheatom/#.XwIayyhKg2w </ref> Retrieved 5 July 2020.
 *<ref name="Salaam2012"> Salaam, Elizabeth, 2012, Your Child is my Child; https://www.sandiegoreader.com/news/2012/apr/04/feature-your-child-my-child/</ref> Retrieved 5 July 2020.