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:::Could you also add those sources there so it doesn't look like it's just one source using the seemingly wrong term? '''[[User:Vaselineeeeeeee|<b style="color:black">Vaseline</b><b style="color:lightgrey">eeeeeee</b>]]<sup><small>[[User talk:Vaselineeeeeeee|<span style="color:gold">★★★</span>]]</small></sup>''' 14:29, 22 July 2020 (UTC) |
:::Could you also add those sources there so it doesn't look like it's just one source using the seemingly wrong term? '''[[User:Vaselineeeeeeee|<b style="color:black">Vaseline</b><b style="color:lightgrey">eeeeeee</b>]]<sup><small>[[User talk:Vaselineeeeeeee|<span style="color:gold">★★★</span>]]</small></sup>''' 14:29, 22 July 2020 (UTC) |
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:::: They're not RSes though. They're simply sheet music. [[User:Walter Görlitz|Walter Görlitz]] ([[User talk:Walter Görlitz|talk]]) 17:53, 22 July 2020 (UTC) |
:::: They're not RSes though. They're simply sheet music. [[User:Walter Görlitz|Walter Görlitz]] ([[User talk:Walter Görlitz|talk]]) 17:53, 22 July 2020 (UTC) |
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== Key and score == |
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The article says it was originally written in the key of G major, but the score and corresponding audio file are in F major. If it's more commonly performed in F major today, that ought to be explained and cited. (I found [https://www.thecanadianencyclopedia.ca/en/article/o-canada] which says "A lower key — F, E or E flat — is preferable when it is sung.") Otherwise, it would be better to change the score to G major, to match the original. --[[User:Bigpeteb|Bigpeteb]] ([[User talk:Bigpeteb|talk]]) 19:46, 22 July 2020 (UTC) |
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Borrowings
In a recent peer-reviewed paper published in the leading musicological journal The Musical Quarterly, the distinguished musicologist Ross Duffin has made a sophisticated extended argument for the composer of this anthem having borrowed themes from Mozart, Liszt, Wagner, and Matthias Keller. Duffin readily concedes that he cannot definitively prove his case, but I believe that any careful reader of his paper will agree that he has made a very persuasive argument in all four cases. Duffin also makes very clear that he does not think less of Lavallée for such borrowing, which was a well-represented and well-accepted practice at the time. A new subsection mentioning Duffin's contribution (not by me) has recently been reverted, twice, with the justification that Duffin's is "just an opinion." It is not a mere opinion, but a careful study that needs to be at least mentioned in this Wikipedia article. I have modified the reverted subsection slightly to make it a bit more acceptable to critics, and re-posted to the article. I would only ask that the editor who has twice reverted the earlier version please read Duffin's paper before considering reverting once more.Ajrocke (talk) 16:39, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
- It is not supported by all musicologists, only his own. We cannot easily read his paper because it's paid. Thanks for the third opinion though. Walter Görlitz (talk) 17:08, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
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The performance direction (in the 'Melody' section) should be changed from "maestoso è risoluto" to "maestoso e risoluto" (since "è" means "is" whereas "e" means "and"). Also, the translation of "risoluto" as "resolved" should possibly be changed to "resolute" (according to the English-Italian part of www.linguee.com). 82.3.26.111 (talk) 12:04, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
- Partially done. The source does use "è" instead of "e", which is something I think they used in error as "majestic is resolved" does not quite make sense, so changed those. Kept "risoluto" meaning "resolved" per linked article. Vaselineeeeeeee★★★ 13:50, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
- I found other sources that used maestoso è risoluto, so it's either a copy error or an obscure rule in Italian. I marked it with a {{sic}} instead. Walter Görlitz (talk) 14:02, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
- Could you also add those sources there so it doesn't look like it's just one source using the seemingly wrong term? Vaselineeeeeeee★★★ 14:29, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
- They're not RSes though. They're simply sheet music. Walter Görlitz (talk) 17:53, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
- Could you also add those sources there so it doesn't look like it's just one source using the seemingly wrong term? Vaselineeeeeeee★★★ 14:29, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
- I found other sources that used maestoso è risoluto, so it's either a copy error or an obscure rule in Italian. I marked it with a {{sic}} instead. Walter Görlitz (talk) 14:02, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
Key and score
The article says it was originally written in the key of G major, but the score and corresponding audio file are in F major. If it's more commonly performed in F major today, that ought to be explained and cited. (I found [1] which says "A lower key — F, E or E flat — is preferable when it is sung.") Otherwise, it would be better to change the score to G major, to match the original. --Bigpeteb (talk) 19:46, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
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