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'''Coronavirus disease 2019''', known as '''COVID-19''', is a disease caused by [[SARS-CoV-2]], which is severe acute respiratory syndrome coronavirus 2.<ref>{{cite web|title=Coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19)—Symptoms and causes|url=https://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/coronavirus/symptoms-causes/syc-20479963|access-date=14 April 2020|website=Mayo Clinic}}</ref> First found in [[Wuhan]], [[Hubei]], [[China]], it has caused a global [[pandemic]] known as the [[COVID-19 pandemic]].<ref name="Hui14Jan2020">{{cite journal|display-authors=6|vauthors=Hui DS, I Azhar E, Madani TA, Ntoumi F, Kock R, Dar O, Ippolito G, Mchugh TD, Memish ZA, Drosten C, Zumla A, Petersen E|date=February 2020|title=The continuing 2019-nCoV epidemic threat of novel coronaviruses to global health—The latest 2019 novel coronavirus outbreak in Wuhan, China|journal=International Journal of Infectious Diseases|volume=91|issue=|pages=264–266|doi=10.1016/j.ijid.2020.01.009|pmc=7128332|pmid=31953166|doi-access=free}}</ref><ref name="WHOPandemic">{{cite press release|title=WHO Director-General's opening remarks at the media briefing on COVID-19|website=[[World Health Organization]] (WHO)|date=11 March 2020|url=https://www.who.int/dg/speeches/detail/who-director-general-s-opening-remarks-at-the-media-briefing-on-covid-19---11-march-2020|access-date=12 March 2020|url-status=live|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200311212521/https://www.who.int/dg/speeches/detail/who-director-general-s-opening-remarks-at-the-media-briefing-on-covid-19---11-march-2020|archive-date=11 March 2020}}</ref> The first confirmed patient tested positive for the virus on 17 November 2019.<ref name="tracedback">{{Cite web|last=Ma|first=Josephine|date=13 March 2020|title=Coronavirus: China's first confirmed Covid-19 case traced back to November 17|url=https://www.scmp.com/news/china/society/article/3074991/coronavirus-chinas-first-confirmed-covid-19-case-traced-back|url-status=live|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200313004217/https://www.scmp.com/news/china/society/article/3074991/coronavirus-chinas-first-confirmed-covid-19-case-traced-back|archive-date=13 March 2020|access-date=28 May 2020|website=[[South China Morning Post]]|name-list-format=vanc}}</ref> The pandemic is still ongoing. {{Color|red|Live numbers omitted: there's no way we can repeatedly update them.}}
'''Coronavirus disease 2019''', known as '''COVID-19''', is a disease caused by [[SARS-CoV-2]], which is severe acute respiratory syndrome coronavirus 2.<ref>{{cite web|title=Coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19)—Symptoms and causes|url=https://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/coronavirus/symptoms-causes/syc-20479963|access-date=14 April 2020|website=Mayo Clinic}}</ref> First found in [[Wuhan]], [[Hubei]], [[China]], it has caused a global [[pandemic]] known as the [[COVID-19 pandemic]].<ref name="Hui14Jan2020">{{cite journal|display-authors=6|vauthors=Hui DS, I Azhar E, Madani TA, Ntoumi F, Kock R, Dar O, Ippolito G, Mchugh TD, Memish ZA, Drosten C, Zumla A, Petersen E|date=February 2020|title=The continuing 2019-nCoV epidemic threat of novel coronaviruses to global health—The latest 2019 novel coronavirus outbreak in Wuhan, China|journal=International Journal of Infectious Diseases|volume=91|issue=|pages=264–266|doi=10.1016/j.ijid.2020.01.009|pmc=7128332|pmid=31953166|doi-access=free}}</ref><ref name="WHOPandemic">{{cite press release|title=WHO Director-General's opening remarks at the media briefing on COVID-19|website=[[World Health Organization]] (WHO)|date=11 March 2020|url=https://www.who.int/dg/speeches/detail/who-director-general-s-opening-remarks-at-the-media-briefing-on-covid-19---11-march-2020|access-date=12 March 2020|url-status=live|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200311212521/https://www.who.int/dg/speeches/detail/who-director-general-s-opening-remarks-at-the-media-briefing-on-covid-19---11-march-2020|archive-date=11 March 2020}}</ref> The first confirmed patient tested positive for the virus on 17 November 2019.<ref name="tracedback">{{Cite web|last=Ma|first=Josephine|date=13 March 2020|title=Coronavirus: China's first confirmed Covid-19 case traced back to November 17|url=https://www.scmp.com/news/china/society/article/3074991/coronavirus-chinas-first-confirmed-covid-19-case-traced-back|url-status=live|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200313004217/https://www.scmp.com/news/china/society/article/3074991/coronavirus-chinas-first-confirmed-covid-19-case-traced-back|archive-date=13 March 2020|access-date=28 May 2020|website=[[South China Morning Post]]|name-list-format=vanc}}</ref> The pandemic is still ongoing. {{Color|red|Live numbers omitted: there's no way we can repeatedly update them.}}



Revision as of 07:22, 9 August 2020

This is a draft on the renewal of the Coronavirus disease 2019 video summary narration script. A discussion here suggests that a refreshment of the Coronavirus disease 2019 video summary from this one, as it may benefit those who seek a Simple English summary of the lead. Once narration and editing is done, the new video may be put on the article and the script will be changed to the final product here.

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Coronavirus disease 2019, known as COVID-19, is a disease caused by SARS-CoV-2, which is severe acute respiratory syndrome coronavirus 2.[1] First found in Wuhan, Hubei, China, it has caused a global pandemic known as the COVID-19 pandemic.[2][3] The first confirmed patient tested positive for the virus on 17 November 2019.[4] The pandemic is still ongoing. Live numbers omitted: there's no way we can repeatedly update them.

Common symptoms for the virus include fever, cough, fatigue, and the inability to breath, smell, and taste.[5][6][7] Some, however, gets larger symptoms, like lung inflammation, multi-organ failure, full-body infection, and blood-clot. The severity of symptoms vary across cases—from mild symptoms to life-threatening ones. Symptoms can appear as early as two days to as late as fourteen days.[6][8] A usual way on noticing symptoms were RT-PCR, which is taking samples from the nose.[9][failed verification] Scanning the body using X-ray may help knowing the severity of one's infection, but is not advised.[10][11]

A person can get the virus by touching droplets when coming into close contact from someone coughing,[a] sneezing, or talking.[12][b] The droplets may fall directly to the ground,[13] but at times it stays in the air for a while.[14] Less commonly, people may become infected by touching a contaminated surface and then touching their face. The first three days were the virus' most contagious times, however some also do not get symptoms. The last two sentences of the third paragraph needs to be simplified.

Ways to prevent the virus include washing hands, social distancing, staying home, covering coughs by blocking or using masks, and not touching face using unwashed hands.[15][16] Types of masks used by the doctors and the sick were different than those by regular people.[17][18]

A cure has not been found to treat COVID-19. The World Health Organization announced the virus outbreak an international emergency[19][20] on 30 January 2020 and a pandemic on 11 March. Last sentence is not really needed, as it has been explicitly stated at the beginning that the pandemic is global.

Notes

  1. ^ An uncovered cough can travel up to 8.2 metres (27 feet).
  2. ^ "Close contact" is one meter (est. 3.3 feet) by the WHO and est. 1.8 meters (6 feet) by the CDC.

References

  1. ^ "Coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19)—Symptoms and causes". Mayo Clinic. Retrieved 14 April 2020.
  2. ^ Hui DS, I Azhar E, Madani TA, Ntoumi F, Kock R, Dar O, et al. (February 2020). "The continuing 2019-nCoV epidemic threat of novel coronaviruses to global health—The latest 2019 novel coronavirus outbreak in Wuhan, China". International Journal of Infectious Diseases. 91: 264–266. doi:10.1016/j.ijid.2020.01.009. PMC 7128332. PMID 31953166.
  3. ^ "WHO Director-General's opening remarks at the media briefing on COVID-19". World Health Organization (WHO) (Press release). 11 March 2020. Archived from the original on 11 March 2020. Retrieved 12 March 2020.
  4. ^ Ma, Josephine (13 March 2020). "Coronavirus: China's first confirmed Covid-19 case traced back to November 17". South China Morning Post. Archived from the original on 13 March 2020. Retrieved 28 May 2020. {{cite web}}: Unknown parameter |name-list-format= ignored (|name-list-style= suggested) (help)
  5. ^ Grant, Michael C.; Geoghegan, Luke; Arbyn, Marc; Mohammed, Zakaria; McGuinness, Luke; Clarke, Emily L.; et al. (23 June 2020). "The prevalence of symptoms in 24,410 adults infected by the novel coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2; COVID-19): A systematic review and meta-analysis of 148 studies from 9 countries". PLOS ONE. 15 (6): e0234765. doi:10.1371/journal.pone.0234765. PMC 7310678. PMID 32574165. S2CID 220046286. {{cite journal}}: Unknown parameter |name-list-format= ignored (|name-list-style= suggested) (help)CS1 maint: unflagged free DOI (link)
  6. ^ a b "Symptoms of Coronavirus". U.S. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC). 13 May 2020. Archived from the original on 17 June 2020. Retrieved 18 June 2020.
  7. ^ Hopkins, Claire. "Loss of sense of smell as marker of COVID-19 infection". Ear, Nose and Throat surgery body of United Kingdom. Retrieved 28 March 2020. {{cite web}}: Unknown parameter |name-list-format= ignored (|name-list-style= suggested) (help)
  8. ^ Velavan TP, Meyer CG (March 2020). "The COVID-19 epidemic". Tropical Medicine & International Health. 25 (3): 278–280. doi:10.1111/tmi.13383. PMC 7169770. PMID 32052514.
  9. ^ "Interim Guidelines for Collecting, Handling, and Testing Clinical Specimens from Persons for Coronavirus Disease 2019 (COVID-19)". U.S. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC). 11 February 2020. Archived from the original on 4 March 2020. Retrieved 26 March 2020.
  10. ^ Salehi S, Abedi A, Balakrishnan S, Gholamrezanezhad A (March 2020). "Coronavirus Disease 2019 (COVID-19): A Systematic Review of Imaging Findings in 919 Patients". AJR. American Journal of Roentgenology. 215 (1): 87–93. doi:10.2214/AJR.20.23034. PMID 32174129.
  11. ^ "ACR Recommendations for the use of Chest Radiography and Computed Tomography (CT) for Suspected COVID-19 Infection". American College of Radiology. 22 March 2020. Archived from the original on 28 March 2020.
  12. ^ "Q & A on COVID-19". European Centre for Disease Prevention and Control. Retrieved 30 April 2020.
  13. ^ Stadnytskyi V, Bax CE, Bax A, Anfinrud P (June 2020). "The airborne lifetime of small speech droplets and their potential importance in SARS-CoV-2 transmission". Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences of the United States of America. 117 (22): 11875–11877. doi:10.1073/pnas.2006874117. PMC 7275719. PMID 32404416.
  14. ^ "Q&A: How is COVID-19 transmitted?". www.who.int. Retrieved 12 July 2020.
  15. ^ "Advice for public". World Health Organization (WHO). Archived from the original on 26 January 2020. Retrieved 25 February 2020. {{cite web}}: Unknown parameter |name-list-format= ignored (|name-list-style= suggested) (help)
  16. ^ "Guidance on social distancing for everyone in the UK". GOV.UK. Archived from the original on 24 March 2020. Retrieved 25 March 2020.
  17. ^ Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (5 April 2020). "What to Do if You Are Sick". U.S. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC). Archived from the original on 14 February 2020. Retrieved 24 April 2020.
  18. ^ "When and how to use masks". World Health Organization (WHO). Archived from the original on 7 March 2020. Retrieved 24 April 2020.
  19. ^ "Statement on the second meeting of the International Health Regulations (2005) Emergency Committee regarding the outbreak of novel coronavirus (2019-nCoV)". World Health Organization (WHO). Archived from the original on 31 January 2020. Retrieved 11 February 2020. {{cite web}}: Unknown parameter |name-list-format= ignored (|name-list-style= suggested) (help)
  20. ^ Mahtani S, Berger M, O'Grady S, Iati M (6 February 2020). "Hundreds of evacuees to be held on bases in California; Hong Kong and Taiwan restrict travel from mainland China". The Washington Post. Archived from the original on 7 February 2020. Retrieved 11 February 2020. {{cite news}}: Unknown parameter |name-list-format= ignored (|name-list-style= suggested) (help)

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