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Boat class

If this vessel isn't a part of any class of submarine, and is a one-off, unique model, it should say so more clearly. I leave the article thinking "so I guess, if I interpret what was said correctly, it was a unique vessel". What does "similar to the Sturgeon class" mean? That its identical in hull but has different machinery? You could just as easily say that it's 'similar' to the LA class. They are all roughly shaped the same and laid out the same. According to the profiles in this book beside me, the Lipscomb is significantly longer and more slender than the Sturgeon, much closer to the appearance of the LA class, although all three have the same basic lines. It should say somewhere "the Glenard P. Lipscomb was a class of one vessel, similar to the preceding Sturgeon class and the succeeding Los Angeles class" so the reader doesn't have to sift through clues in the text.

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+If this vessel isn't a part of any class of submarine, and is a one-off, unique model, it should say so more clearly. I leave the article thinking "so I guess, if I interpret what was said correctly, it was a unique vessel". What does "similar to the Sturgeon class" mean? That its identical in hull but has different machinery? You could just as easily say that it's 'similar' to the LA class. They are all roughly shaped the same and laid out the same. According to the profiles in this book beside me, the Lipscomb is significantly longer and more slender than the Sturgeon, much closer to the appearance of the LA class, although all three have the same basic lines. It should say somewhere "the Glenard P. Lipscomb was a class of one vessel, similar to the preceding Sturgeon class and the succeeding Los Angeles class" so the reader doesn't have to sift through clues in the text.
+[[Special:Contributions/64.222.107.65|64.222.107.65]] ([[User talk:64.222.107.65|talk]]) 22:46, 6 September 2020 (UTC)