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¶ I made a very slight change in phrasing the reason for her suicide, as it originally seemed ambiguous, as if she had died while actually engaged in wrestling hand-to-hand with Octavian. Sussmanbern (talk) 05:01, 17 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Death of Cleopatra/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I eagerly but patiently await your review and critique of the article. Regards, Pericles of Athens^Talk 19:15, 2 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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2.d Y (20% is highest, due to phrase similarities)
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Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

occurred on either the 10 or 12 August 30 BC in I believe the the should be removed, as 10 or 12 August makes more sense unless it is changed to 10th or 12th.
while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon are more tepid by stating it was circa 12 August. suggest while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon state it was c. 12 August.
Charmion adjusting her diademed crown before she herself fell suggest Charmion adjusting Cleopatra's diademed crown before she herself fell
@PericlesofAthens: That is all my suggestions, passing now. I apologize for taking so long. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:21, 23 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Pericles' comments

@Iazyges: has the review started? I can't tell. Is there something I should do right away? I guess it's good to know that there are no dead links or missing citations. Pericles of Athens^Talk 13:50, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@PericlesofAthens: Apologies on the delays, I've been busy IRL. I'll try my best to start/finish the other reviews within the week. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 04:06, 9 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Iazyges: are you still busy? Pericles of Athens^Talk 14:42, 17 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@PericlesofAthens: Apologies for the long wait, I should have time now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:41, 18 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Iazyges: excellent! I have amended the article according to your prose suggestions. Best wishes, Pericles of Athens^Talk 02:26, 23 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Rename?

Should this be moved to Death of Cleopatra VII to be in line with the articles on her early life, reign? T.Shafee(Evo&Evo)^talk 12:44, 10 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

That's a good question! Some editors/GA reviewers have argued that the articles Early life of Cleopatra VII and Reign of Cleopatra VII should be moved to "Early life of Cleopatra" and "Reign of Cleopatra", respectively, to conform with the naming style of Death of Cleopatra and the main article Cleopatra. Any editor can be bold and move the articles as they wish, but we haven't yet formed a clear consensus for renaming the articles in any of our talk page discussions. I think we'd have better luck garnering attention for this issue at the talk page for the main article. Pericles of Athens^Talk 13:50, 10 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Cleopatra

it was a bit hard to figure out. Rated 4/10. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 120.29.243.54 (talk) 03:30, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Parade in Rome: prudence against

“To parade one female Ptolemy in chains through Rome may be regarded as her misfortune; to parade two looks like the Ptolemys were careless,” a later sociographer would obliquely demur towards the consideration.

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+== Parade in Rome: prudence against ==
+“To parade one female Ptolemy in chains through Rome may be regarded as her misfortune; to parade two looks like the Ptolemys were careless,” a later sociographer would obliquely demur towards the consideration.