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13 October 2023

• 15:3415:34, 13 October 2023 diff hist −37 The Terminal List Copyedit.
• 15:3115:31, 13 October 2023 diff hist −14 Without Remorse (film) Copyedit. Tense.
• 15:0715:07, 13 October 2023 diff hist +5 A Haunting in Venice Box office gross. Use the same figures consistently. $103.7 normally rounds up to $104 million and it is misleading and inaccurate to truncate it to $103 million.
• 15:0315:03, 13 October 2023 diff hist 0 Leap Year (2010 film) Update Rotten Tomatoes. 24%/144 reviews.
• 15:0015:00, 13 October 2023 diff hist −77 Wild Mountain Thyme (film) Cast in Cast section not Plot section. WP:MOSFILM.
• 14:5814:58, 13 October 2023 diff hist −9 Wild Mountain Thyme (film) WP:SDEXAMPLES YEAR film by DIRECTOR eg "2017 film by Jordan Peele"
• 14:5714:57, 13 October 2023 diff hist −16 P.S. I Love You (film) It is a sad romantic film, that happens to include moments of comedy but it is not a comedy (or a tragedy either). WP:FILMGENRE try to stick to primary genre.
• 14:5514:55, 13 October 2023 diff hist +221 The Miracle Club Metacritic
• 14:0014:00, 13 October 2023 diff hist +2 Teen Wolf (franchise) Template:Infobox film says "Use condensed, rounded values"
• 13:5813:58, 13 October 2023 diff hist −22 Spy Kids 2: The Island of Lost Dreams WP:OVERSECTION sequels are sequels, it is weird to categorize them as "other media". Novelization does not need a subheading, it can stand alone.
• 13:5713:57, 13 October 2023 diff hist +14 Spy Kids 2: The Island of Lost Dreams WP:FILMPLOT 400-700 words
• 13:5213:52, 13 October 2023 diff hist −9 The Fast and the Furious: Tokyo Drift WP:SDEXAMPLES YEAR film by DIRECTOR eg "2017 film by Jordan Peele"
• 13:4913:49, 13 October 2023 diff hist −1,100 Terrifier 2 WP:FILMGENRE try to stick to primary genre. Revert Tags: Undo references removed
• 13:4713:47, 13 October 2023 diff hist +256 Talk:The Creator (2023 film) →Poster with billing block
• 13:3113:31, 13 October 2023 diff hist −4 Naruto Shippuden: Legends: Akatsuki Rising Avoid unnecessary site specific jargon such as "metascore". It is a score out of 100, or a percentage.
• 13:2913:29, 13 October 2023 diff hist −1 A Dotted Line MOS:NUMERAL " The aim is to promote clarity, cohesion, and consistency," avoid unnecessary inconsistency. use words or numbers, avoid messy mix of both at the same time.
• 13:2713:27, 13 October 2023 diff hist −31 A Dotted Line Avoid unnecessary site specific jargon such as "metascore". It is a score out of 100. copyedit.
• 13:2513:25, 13 October 2023 diff hist +15 More Than Just a Dream Avoid unnecessary site specific jargon such as "metascore". It is a score out of 100. Also MOS:SLASH
• 13:2413:24, 13 October 2023 diff hist +39 Sudden Strike 3: Arms for Victory Avoid unnecessary site specific jargon such as "metascore". Instead state clearly that this is a score from Metacritic
• 13:2213:22, 13 October 2023 diff hist −1 Big Ass Spider! Rotten Tomatoes score should include the number of reviews for proper context. Reception section has the basics covered. It could be longer but it does not necessarily need to be longer. Remove outdated expand section tag.
• 13:2113:21, 13 October 2023 diff hist −35 Big Ass Spider! Put both review aggregators together
• 13:1913:19, 13 October 2023 diff hist +65 Big Ass Spider! metacritic score should include the number of reviews for proper context.
• 13:1813:18, 13 October 2023 diff hist +7 Big Ass Spider! Avoid unnecessary site specific jargon such as "metascore". Metascore score is redundant.
• 13:1713:17, 13 October 2023 diff hist −30 Big Ass Spider! WP:SDEXAMPLES YEAR film by DIRECTOR eg "2017 film by Jordan Peele"
• 13:1613:16, 13 October 2023 diff hist +36 ICarly 2: iJoin the Click! Not sure the absence of information is worth reporting in an encyclopedia but copyedit poor phrasing anyway. Avoid unnecessary site specific jargon such as "metascore".
• 13:1513:15, 13 October 2023 diff hist +14 The Room: Old Sins MOS:SLASH
• 13:1413:14, 13 October 2023 diff hist −4 The Room: Old Sins Avoid unnecessary site specific jargon such as "metascore". It is a score out of 100, or a percentage.
• 13:1413:14, 13 October 2023 diff hist −8 The Things We Do to Find People Who Feel Like Us Avoid unnecessary site specific jargon such as "metascore". It is a score out of 100, or a percentage.
• 13:1313:13, 13 October 2023 diff hist −13 Dead (Young Fathers album) Avoid unnecessary site specific jargon such as "metascore". It is a score out of 100, or a percentage.
• 13:1113:11, 13 October 2023 diff hist −70 Brainwashed: Sex-Camera-Power List not helpful when there is only a single item. Rephrase as WP:PROSE.
• 13:0913:09, 13 October 2023 diff hist +39 Brainwashed: Sex-Camera-Power WP:NAMEDREFS meaningful reference names.
• 13:0813:08, 13 October 2023 diff hist +15 Brainwashed: Sex-Camera-Power WP:SDEXAMPLES YEAR film by DIRECTOR
• 13:0813:08, 13 October 2023 diff hist −3 Brainwashed: Sex-Camera-Power Rotten Tomatoes should include the number of reviews counted for context. Avoid unnecessary site specific jargon such as "Tomatoemeter"
• 13:0013:00, 13 October 2023 diff hist +43 Spider-Man: Into the Spider-Verse Copyedit. "is scheduled for an indefinite release". So that is supposed to mean _not scheduled_ and a release date not currently set. Rephrase.
• 12:5512:55, 13 October 2023 diff hist +98 Bumblebee (film) Add very brief Premise to the lead section.
• 12:4112:41, 13 October 2023 diff hist −3 Transformers: Age of Extinction Revert. Please follow the WP:SIMPLE rules and explain with an edit summary WHY you felt it was necessary to make that change. Tag: Undo
• 12:3512:35, 13 October 2023 diff hist −35 Transformers: The Last Knight WP:UNDUE Remove extra details about other film from lead section summarizing this article about The Last Knight. Keep the focus on this film.
• 12:3312:33, 13 October 2023 diff hist −32 Transformers: Dark of the Moon WP:LEAD section is supposed to be a concise summary. Undid revision 1179930385 by 112.211.0.109 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 12:3212:32, 13 October 2023 diff hist −535 Bumblebee (film) Remove excessively verbose Premise/Plot summary from lead section. One brief sentence preferably please. WP:LEAD is supposed to SUMMARIZE the article. Tag: Undo
• 12:3012:30, 13 October 2023 diff hist +450 Three Fugitives Variety Tag: Disambiguation links added
• 12:2612:26, 13 October 2023 diff hist +905 Talk:One Piece (2023 TV series) →Budget: vague estimates are available but ...
• 12:1212:12, 13 October 2023 diff hist +613 Talk:One Piece (2023 TV series) →The 95% positive Rotten Tomatoes audience score: WP:UGC audience scores should not be included. Nielsen ratings and other more reliable sources should be used. Please read MOS:TVRECEPTION again.
• 12:0712:07, 13 October 2023 diff hist −34 Smallfoot (film) Copyedit redundant. Recipients of nominations are are still recipients. Tag: Reverted
• 12:0512:05, 13 October 2023 diff hist +4 Abominable (2019 film) Template:Cast listing
• 12:0412:04, 13 October 2023 diff hist +108 Abominable (2019 film) WP:ALT add description of the poster image. Please improve.
• 12:0212:02, 13 October 2023 diff hist −28 Abominable (2019 film) Copyedit redundant. Recipients of nominations are are still recipients.
• 12:0012:00, 13 October 2023 diff hist −10 Spider-Man: Across the Spider-Verse WP:OR and nothing in Hollywood is ever "final" if it makes enough money Undid revision 1179881596 by 2601:248:5600:6000:4A4:EA1C:D362:C7F2 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 11:5811:58, 13 October 2023 diff hist +152 Three Fugitives Metacritic
• 09:5009:50, 13 October 2023 diff hist −4 Terrifier (film series) TBD means to be determined. NA means Not Applicable. The Rotten Tomatoes score is not applicable because there are not enough reviews available. More reviews are unlikely, it is '''unrealistic''' to claim that the score remains "To Be Determined"
• 09:4609:46, 13 October 2023 diff hist −565 Bumblebee (film) Not properly sourced. Undid revision 1179841294 by 2603:6011:6400:FCF1:328C:AFA7:8F6B:373B (talk) Tag: Undo