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18:2018:20, 23 May 2023 diff hist −1 Women and religion Corrected grammar Tag: Visual edit

14:4314:43, 22 May 2023 diff hist −29 Cultural psychology Grammar and diction edits Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
14:3714:37, 22 May 2023 diff hist −24 Women in Christianity →Church practice: Edited for grammar Tag: Visual edit
14:3414:34, 22 May 2023 diff hist +3 Women and religion →Christianity: Edited for grammar Tag: Visual edit
14:3014:30, 22 May 2023 diff hist +9 Women and religion →Christianity: Edited for grammar Tag: Visual edit
14:2514:25, 22 May 2023 diff hist −10 Women and religion →Christianity: Edited for grammar Tag: Visual edit
14:2114:21, 22 May 2023 diff hist +1 Women and religion →Christianity: Reduced redundancy Tag: Visual edit
14:1514:15, 22 May 2023 diff hist −22 Women and religion →Christianity: Reduced wordiness Tag: Visual edit
14:0714:07, 22 May 2023 diff hist −84 Women and religion →Christianity: Corrected grammar and tone, leaving content as is Tag: Visual edit
14:0214:02, 22 May 2023 diff hist −1 m Women and religion Split run-on sentence Tag: Visual edit

21:1521:15, 20 May 2023 diff hist +17 Feminism and racism →Asian American women: Splitting run-on sentences and reducing wordiness Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
21:1121:11, 20 May 2023 diff hist −39 Feminism and racism →Asian American women: Converted to an encyclopedic tone Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
21:0921:09, 20 May 2023 diff hist +8 Feminism and racism →Asian American women: Converting to an encyclopedic tone Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
21:0821:08, 20 May 2023 diff hist +149 Feminism and racism →Asian American women: Added a citation Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
21:0021:00, 20 May 2023 diff hist −20 Religion in the United States →Freedom of religion: Reduced redundancy and wordiness Tag: Visual edit
20:4620:46, 20 May 2023 diff hist +5 Religion and human migration →Aliyah to Israel: Edited according to source cited and reworded for a more encyclopedic tone Tag: Visual edit
20:4020:40, 20 May 2023 diff hist +348 Religion and human migration →Aliyah to Israel: Added citation for a reliable source Tag: Visual edit
20:2920:29, 20 May 2023 diff hist +214 User talk:Pentopper →A barnstar for you!: Reply Tag: Reply

05:2805:28, 22 April 2023 diff hist +311 Housing gap →India: Rephrased using a more encyclopedic tone - content has not been changed Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
05:2005:20, 22 April 2023 diff hist +66 Housing gap Rephrased using a more encyclopedic tone Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
05:1405:14, 22 April 2023 diff hist +27 Foreign worker →Switzerland: Added a citation Tag: Visual edit
05:1305:13, 22 April 2023 diff hist +1,075 Foreign worker →Germany: Added book/journal sources as per template message's suggestion Tag: Visual edit

07:4107:41, 14 April 2023 diff hist −22 Psychology of religion →Religion and health: Removed redundant words for increased fluency Tag: Visual edit
07:3807:38, 14 April 2023 diff hist −28 Psychology of religion →Overview: Removed redundant words for increased fluency Tag: Visual edit
07:3507:35, 14 April 2023 diff hist −5 Psychology of religion Reworded for clarity Tag: Visual edit

19:0419:04, 11 April 2023 diff hist +1,054 Religion and human migration Added information, extended the introduction (did not remove what was previously there) Tag: Visual edit
06:4006:40, 11 April 2023 diff hist +2 Foreign worker →Canada: Improved diction to suit encyclopedic language Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: references
06:3506:35, 11 April 2023 diff hist −13 Health ecology →History: Edits for fluency and clarity Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
06:3306:33, 11 April 2023 diff hist −24 Health ecology →History: Grammar edit for clarity and fluency Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
06:2906:29, 11 April 2023 diff hist −35 Health ecology Copy-editing for grammar, wordiness and clarity Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
00:4700:47, 11 April 2023 diff hist −51 Human migration →Definition: Paraphrased for clarity, the meaning of the passage remains the same Tag: Visual edit
00:4000:40, 11 April 2023 diff hist −48 Religion and human migration →Mormon migration to Utah: Reworded for clarity Tag: Visual edit
00:3800:38, 11 April 2023 diff hist −44 Religion and human migration →Massachusetts Bay Colony: Grammar and clarity fixes Tag: Visual edit
00:3400:34, 11 April 2023 diff hist −29 Religion and human migration →Plymouth Colony: Re-worded based on issues with grammar and clarity Tag: Visual edit
00:2900:29, 11 April 2023 diff hist −80 m Religion and human migration →Aliyah to Israel: Made grammar edits regarding clarity and concision Tag: Visual edit
00:2300:23, 11 April 2023 diff hist −11 m Religion and human migration Re-worded based on issues with grammar and clarity Tag: Visual edit

23:3723:37, 8 November 2022 diff hist −30 Psychology of religion Reworded the intro. paragraph Tag: Visual edit
23:2523:25, 8 November 2022 diff hist −25 Cognitive psychology Reduced the wordiness of the paragraph Tag: Visual edit
23:1523:15, 8 November 2022 diff hist −14 m Cognitive psychology →History: Diction and punctuation Tag: Visual edit
05:4905:49, 8 November 2022 diff hist −1 m History of psychology →Early psychological thought: Corrected verb tense Tag: Visual edit
05:4705:47, 8 November 2022 diff hist +1 m History of psychology →Cognitivism: Grammar and diction edits Tag: Visual edit
04:4704:47, 8 November 2022 diff hist −25 m Forensic psychology →Forensic psychology in popular culture: Made grammar edits, fixed punctuation and wordiness Tag: Visual edit
04:4304:43, 8 November 2022 diff hist +2 m Forensic psychology →Establishment in Psychological Societies: Made grammar edits, fixed punctuation and wordiness Tag: Visual edit
04:3804:38, 8 November 2022 diff hist −23 m Forensic psychology →Early Development of Forensic Psychology: Copy-editing for grammar, wordiness and clarity Tag: Visual edit

23:4423:44, 20 October 2022 diff hist −2 m Hindustani classical music →Instruments: Grammar fixes Tag: Visual edit
23:3623:36, 20 October 2022 diff hist +3 m Raga →Terminology: Made grammar edits, fixed punctuation and replaced some words with more effective vocab Tag: Visual edit
23:3323:33, 20 October 2022 diff hist +3 m Raga Made grammar edits Tag: Visual edit
23:2123:21, 20 October 2022 diff hist +11 m Pump organ →In the Indian subcontinent: Made grammar edits, fixed punctuation and wordiness Tag: Visual edit
23:1323:13, 20 October 2022 diff hist +292 m Pump organ Added a citation Tag: Visual edit

02:2102:21, 23 September 2022 diff hist −18 Pump organ →Harmonium: The caption for Indian Harmonium was slightly expanded on, providing a context in which the instrument would be played. Tag: Visual edit

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