Talk:Kill Bill (SZA song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 07:25, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Happy to take up this review. In the meantime, I'd really appreciate it if you could take up one of my many current GANs that might as well stall for a few months... Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 07:25, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ippantekina: thanks . I will be busy with another enwiki project + real life school nonsense this week, but I'll do my best to clear the backlog by reviewing one of your own ‍ ‍ Elias 🌊 ‍ ‍ ^{💬 "Will you call me?"}
_{📝 "Will you hang me out to dry?"} 07:39, 23 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

On first glance the article is meticulously written and formatted. Sources are properly cited and everything looks sooo neat.

Lead and infobox

In light of the issue with false titles (which I myself recently know), I suggest changing to "the American singer SZA"
"the lyrics discuss a fantasy to kill an ex-boyfriend and his new girlfriend out of jealousy, and it employs humorous" → "they employ"
"On its component Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart" is the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart really a component of the Hot 100?
"and received many multi-platinum certifications worldwide." and it received?
"including ~~but not limited to~~" pretty self-explanatory
Suggest adding {{short description}} manually as, per the GAN page, this article does not have one
Not sure if a release date for the remix is worth including in the Infobox
More to come. Ippantekina (talk) 03:20, 26 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]