Talk:Waluigi/GA2
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Reviewer: Pi.1415926535 (talk · contribs) 22:39, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
I'll take this review. Waah! Pi.1415926535 (talk) 22:39, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
- This is very close to GA - just some small changes. My comments are below. Please respond with {{done}} when completed, or reply to the item if you have questions/disagree. I'll place on hold to give you time. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 01:00, 23 February 2024 (UTC)
Infobox and lede
- I would remove the final sentence of the first paragraph: the information about him being Wario's tennis partner and sidekick can be moved to the next paragraph, since it's more about his first appearance than a general statement, while the second half of the sentence is redundant.
- Add a sentence about his most noticeable features (tall and lanky, purple, upside-down L) to the lede.
Concept and creation
- Absolutely perfect photo choice in this section.
- The second paragraph should be moved later in this section, probably before the last paragraph.
Waluigi's appearance was designed...
: This sentence should be split in two- Address the "better source needed" tag
Characteristics
- Consider moving this above the "concept and creation" section
(gamma)
→(an upside-down "L")
evil-looking
is subjective - stick to neutral descriptors unless quoting a source.His original role was to be the tennis partner of Wario, but their relationship is ambiguous.
: move this to the middle of the next paragraphIn various Mario sports games...
: split this sentence in two
Appearances
- Clarify that he did not appear in any 2023 games
After Mario Party 3, he returned as a playable character in every subsequent game in the Mario Party series,
: remove the comma afterseries
and move citation to the end of the sentence.- Make sure that the verb tense matches - some are in past tense here, others in present tense.
- No need to mention the shutdown date for Dr. Mario World
Reception
- The lede mentions Waluigi being an internet meme, but that's not discussed in this section.
- I'd add a wiktionary link to wikt:colorway, since that's not a terribly common term.
Done I think all of the above are fixed, but let me know if I have missed anything. Thanks for reviewing. Fieryninja (talk) 12:57, 23 February 2024 (UTC)
Overall
Happy to pass this now. Good work! Pi.1415926535 (talk) 20:45, 23 February 2024 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail: