Talk:Will Smith
Appearance
By far, his best role as an actor was in the film Six Degrees of Separation. "== Accuracy/Flow ==
First, "I ain't black, I'm just dirty." - is that really a quote by him? Seems like a prank. Second, what on earth is 'cut-up behavior'? That type of slang is not really encyclopedic. Finally, the entire article needs betterformatting - it just doesn't flow very well at all. Maybe more about his family, to whom he's stayed close throughout his career? Istvan 08:40, 4 March 2006 (UTC)
- The phrase "cut-up behavior" is perfectly good English and therefore I see no problem with it being in this article, as it does accurately describe his high school behavior. I do agree with you, though, that the flow of this article is a little clumsy, and could do with some work. I hope I remember to come back to it and try and improve the flow a little bit. -- Jalabi99 10:20, 1 April 2006 (UTC)
Needs Editing
The whole Trivia section needs editing, because part of it is in fragments and the rest is complete sentences. It will sound better if it isn't a little of both.--Martin925 02:30, 19 April 2006 (UTC)
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This page was damaged and should be repeared.