Talk:Una-class submarine
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Una-class submarine is currently a Warfare good article nominee. Nominated by Saxum (talk) at 16:38, 27 February 2014 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria and will decide whether or not to list it as a good article. Comments are welcome from any editor who has not nominated or contributed significantly to this article. This review will be closed by the first reviewer. To add comments to this review, click discuss review and edit the page.
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:28, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:28, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
- I cleaned up the infobox a bit, but you need to provide conversions for the diving depth and the power of the motors as well as their usage in the main body.
- No bullets in the infobox.
- Capitalize Lieutenant Colonel as it's a proper noun in that usage.
- Convert 10 meters. In general provide a conversion to English units on the first usage of any measurement.
- utilizing a Stirling engine change "utilizing" to "the addition of"
- Hyphenate "single hulled" as it's a compound adjective for design.
- You do not need to specify the output when converting knots; it automatically converts into kmh and mph.
- Special forces in the description paragraph needs to be replaced by special forces personnel or naval commandos; something like that.
- No DABs, no overlinks, external links good.
- Images appropriately licensed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:24, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
- First of all, thank you for your fixes. I hope I answered to all of the requests above with the edits I made. Please let me know if I missed something. --Saxum (talk) 14:00, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
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