Template:Did you know nominations/Shriya Pilgaonkar
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Shriya Pilgaonkar
Shriya Pilgaonkar
- ... that ....In 2012, Shriya Pilgaonkar won a scholarship to do a summer course in screenplay adaptation at Harvard University?
- ALT1:At the 51st Maharashtra State Film Awards, Shriya Pilgaonkar was awarded with the Maharashtra State Government Award for Best Debut and Most Promising Newcomer Award?
- ALT2:... that ...Shriya Pilgaonkar known as an actress, decided to become a professional swimmer under 7 and became a gold medallist and state level swimmer under 9?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Pizza cheese
2x expanded and sourced (BLP) by 991joseph (talk). Nominated by Mr. Smart LION (talk) at 05:55, 13 May 2016 (UTC).
The source say nothing about "winning a scholarship" to Harvard, just that she did a summer-course there. As for ALT1: to me, it looks as if she won one award, but two sources name the award differently? ALT2 seem correct, though not very relevant (it is not swimming which has made her known). Article length is ok. Huldra (talk) 21:19, 13 May 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for editing the hooks, User:Mr. Smart LION, but the problem is in the article: there are things there which I cannot find in the quoted sources. Like the scholarship, like two prizes. Those things were put there by new editor Gouravbhosale (who probably also should be mentioned among the DYKmakes), and must be cleaned up before this article can be promoted, IMO; Huldra (talk) 08:37, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
