Talk:Gavin Massey/GA1
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Reviewer: 1TWO3Writer (talk · contribs) 07:18, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
Part of August 2023 backlog.
There is an issue with some of the references; some links are either dead or redirect. 5, for example, is dead, while 83 redirects. Check all the sources, especially those retrieved years ago, and replace them with archived pages (perhaps on the Wayback Machine). If not, then replace with another source that says the same thing or delete the statement. I checklink'd and there are numerous problems, see here. Unfortunately, the tool can't fix the issue, so you'll have to do it manually. Until that's fixed, I'll put the review on hold.
123Writer talk 13:08, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- Okay I have sorted those dead links out now. Thanks. EchetusXe 16:13, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- Alright, I'll continue the review shortly. Good work. 123Writer talk 16:25, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
Infobox, Lead, Images, References
Infobox seems well-formatted, with info not in body cited in-line.
Lead provides a good overview of article, with good paragraphing that focuses on current and past affiliations. All info not cited in-line is cited in body, no issues.
Images are relevant to the subject, either own work or properly attributed to creator, and captioned properly.
Above issues on references have been fixed. I've archived all links so that doesn't become an issue in the future. (I couldn't use the bot prior as it'd just archive the redirect I think.) No issues.
Career
Watford
Spot-check: 4, 8, 10.
...on 85 minutes.
-> 85 minutes into the game.
Could also be at the 85 minute mark.
Your discretion.
123Writer talk 17:43, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
2010–11 season
Spot-check: 6, 13, 19
Did some copy-editing. See history for changes and holler if you have any issues.
123Writer talk 17:43, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
Wealdstone loan
Spot-check: 20, 25
25 makes no mention of his total games and goal count. Is it possible to find a source of some kind for this?
123Writer talk 17:43, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
2011–12 season
Spot-check: 26, 29
No issues.
Yeovil Town loan
Spot-check: 32, 35, 41, 45
No issues.
Colchester United loans
Spot-check: 46, 51, 53, 57
No issues.
Colchester United
Spot-check: 58
No issues. Actually, looking at the rest of the article, I wonder if the season subtitling could be removed and this entire section condensed to the more notable appearances. Thoughts?
123Writer talk 17:41, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
2012–13 season
Spot-check: 60, 63, 65, 70
63 says Graham Massey.
123Writer talk 17:17, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
2013–14 season
Spot-check: 72, 75, 78
Changed a football fan term into language more appropriate for a general audience.
123Writer talk 17:17, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
2014–15 season
Spot-check: 80, 85, 93
Again, some copy editing.
2015–16 season
Spot-check: 94, 97
No issues.
Leyton Orient
Spot-check: 101, 105, 107
Thought the term goal drought
was a bit strange so changed it. Other than that, no issues.
123Writer talk 17:41, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
Wigan Athletic
Port Vale
Career statistics
Sources seem reliable. Table is well-formatted, shows good statistical detail.