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Inappropriate language and grammar

The market, composed mostly of small traders in the foreground is an unplanned mess, the distant hills in the background are home to many of the affluent elite.

Besides being a run-on sentence, this seems to violate NPOV. "[A]n unplanned mess" is not objective or encyclopedic. If this sentence cannot be re-worked and re-worded to be (a) grammatically correct; and (b) factual, it should be removed.4.243.152.45 06:47, 27 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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