Talk:Death of Cleopatra
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¶ I made a very slight change in phrasing the reason for her suicide, as it originally seemed ambiguous, as if she had died while actually engaged in wrestling hand-to-hand with Octavian. Sussmanbern (talk) 05:01, 17 October 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)
- I eagerly but patiently await your review and critique of the article. Regards, Pericles of AthensTalk 19:15, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
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- occurred on either the 10 or 12 August 30 BC in I believe the the should be removed, as 10 or 12 August makes more sense unless it is changed to 10th or 12th.
- while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon are more tepid by stating it was circa 12 August. suggest while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon state it was c. 12 August.
- Charmion adjusting her diademed crown before she herself fell suggest Charmion adjusting Cleopatra's diademed crown before she herself fell
- @PericlesofAthens: That is all my suggestions, passing now. I apologize for taking so long. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:21, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
Pericles' comments
@Iazyges: has the review started? I can't tell. Is there something I should do right away? I guess it's good to know that there are no dead links or missing citations. Pericles of AthensTalk 13:50, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- @PericlesofAthens: Apologies on the delays, I've been busy IRL. I'll try my best to start/finish the other reviews within the week. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 04:06, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Iazyges: are you still busy? Pericles of AthensTalk 14:42, 17 April 2018 (UTC)
- @PericlesofAthens: Apologies for the long wait, I should have time now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:41, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Iazyges: excellent! I have amended the article according to your prose suggestions. Best wishes, Pericles of AthensTalk 02:26, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
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