User contributions for HauntedSoil

5 December 2024

• 16:0516:05, 5 December 2024 diff hist 0 m Tender Is the Flesh →Critical reception: Fixed a spelling error: replaced 'complimenting' with 'complementing'. Tag: Visual edit

6 November 2024

• 09:3909:39, 6 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Bruce Vilanch Added an Oxford comma. Tag: Visual edit

14 September 2024

• 06:3006:30, 14 September 2024 diff hist −10 m 17pdr SP Achilles Excised superfluous 'some's. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 August 2024

• 08:5108:51, 26 August 2024 diff hist −1 m V-J Day in Times Square Excised a superfluous comma. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 July 2024

• 14:3814:38, 28 July 2024 diff hist +2 m Definition Replaced an indefinite article with the definite article, for clarity. The definite article in this instance refers to the 'new term' introduced in the clause immediately prior. Tag: Visual edit

8 June 2024

• 17:1617:16, 8 June 2024 diff hist +10 m Wheel of the Year →Beltane (May Eve): Changed 'Queen of the May' to 'May Queen', the more commonly used, and familiar, term. Tag: Visual edit

29 May 2024

• 20:1620:16, 29 May 2024 diff hist −1 Antichrist (film) →Ratings and censorship: Excised a superfluous comma. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:5919:59, 29 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Antichrist (film) →Depression and mental illness: Removed the previously added Oxford comma. The section wherein the comma was appended is a quotation from literature. As such, the comma was removed such that the quotation's punctuation remains intact. Tags: Manual revert Visual edit
• 19:5719:57, 29 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Antichrist (film) →Depression and mental illness: Added an Oxford comma. Tags: Reverted Visual edit

29 April 2024

• 19:1219:12, 29 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Dieppe Raid →Daily Telegraph crossword controversy: Fixed a grammatical error. Tag: Visual edit

26 April 2024

• 23:0923:09, 26 April 2024 diff hist −15 m Stellan Skarsgård Previously, it was specified that Andor could be seen on Disney+. This felt too close to an advert for Disney+, so that element has been removed. Tag: Visual edit

1 April 2024

• 17:5417:54, 1 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Mary Whitehouse Inserted an Oxford comma. Tag: Visual edit

30 March 2024

• 11:0311:03, 30 March 2024 diff hist +1 m London Underground cooling Inserted an Oxford comma. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 10:3410:34, 30 March 2024 diff hist +1 m London Underground cooling Inserted a comma. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 10:3310:33, 30 March 2024 diff hist +1 m London Underground cooling Inserted a comma. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 March 2024

• 20:4420:44, 20 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Sarajevo Replaced 'latter' with 'Ottoman', because 'latter empire' didn't make sense: there was no former empire mentioned to which the Ottomans could be considered the latter. Tag: Visual edit

19 March 2024

• 18:1718:17, 19 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Habitus (sociology) Inserted an Oxford comma. Tag: Visual edit
• 14:0414:04, 19 March 2024 diff hist −3 m Wicked Bible →Errors: Replaced 'purposefully' with 'purposely'. I believe whomever wrote purposefully meant purposely, where purposefully means 'with purpose', and purposely means 'on purpose'; i.e., purposely is an antonym to 'accidentally'. Tag: Visual edit

18 March 2024

• 16:1916:19, 18 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Poll tax (Great Britain) →Origins: Inserted an Oxford comma. Tag: Visual edit

16 March 2024

• 10:2410:24, 16 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Heavy cruiser →Development: Inserted an Oxford comma. Tag: Visual edit

13 March 2024

• 22:2222:22, 13 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Unreformed House of Commons Replaced 'who' with 'whom'. Tag: Visual edit
• 22:2022:20, 13 March 2024 diff hist +3 m Unreformed House of Commons Change 'the House of full of' to 'the Commons was full of', the latter which makes sense. Tag: Visual edit
• 22:0322:03, 13 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Whigs (British political party) Inserted an Oxford comma. Tag: Visual edit

7 March 2024

• 11:3011:30, 7 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Three-age system Inserted an Oxford comma. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 March 2024

• 14:1614:16, 4 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Middle name Inserted an Oxford comma. Tag: Visual edit

28 February 2024

• 00:0400:04, 28 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Shorthand Fixed the subclauses by moving a comma to the correct place. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

27 February 2024

• 13:4013:40, 27 February 2024 diff hist 0 m VX (nerve agent) Appended a (former) sentence as a clause. As a standalone sentence, it read as a wrongly-separated subclause. Tag: Visual edit

12 February 2024

• 15:2815:28, 12 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Heinkel He 162 Volksjäger Replaced a comma with a semicolon, for clarity. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 January 2024

• 12:1612:16, 7 January 2024 diff hist +1 m Draft horse Added an Oxford comma. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 January 2024

• 17:5217:52, 6 January 2024 diff hist 0 m Tuberculosis →Extrapulmonary: Replaced a comma with a semicolon. Tag: Visual edit

20 December 2023

• 14:4314:43, 20 December 2023 diff hist +1 m Magda Goebbels Fixed a grammatical error. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:4214:42, 20 December 2023 diff hist +2 m Magda Goebbels Fixed a grammatical error. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:4014:40, 20 December 2023 diff hist +3 m Magda Goebbels Fixed a grammatical error. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 December 2023

• 23:5623:56, 7 December 2023 diff hist −1 Unemployment →Structural unemployment: Changed 'circle of poverty' to 'cycle of poverty'. I think it was meant to say 'cycle', but am not certain - I am no expert on the subject matter. Tag: Visual edit
• 12:3612:36, 7 December 2023 diff hist +8 m Real wages Switched various instances of 'he' for 'they' to make the article more gender neutral. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 November 2023

• 12:0612:06, 23 November 2023 diff hist +1 m BBC World Service Fixed grammar. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 12:0512:05, 23 November 2023 diff hist +3 m BBC World Service Fixed grammar. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:0000:00, 23 November 2023 diff hist +3 m Supercruise Fixed grammar. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 November 2023

• 16:4716:47, 18 November 2023 diff hist −9 m Offender profiling Fixed grammatical error. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 November 2023

• 00:3400:34, 6 November 2023 diff hist −1 m Imperial Japanese Army Air Service Fixed a spelling error. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:3100:31, 6 November 2023 diff hist +3 m Imperial Japanese Army Air Service Changed wording so it is grammatically correct. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 November 2023

• 20:3720:37, 5 November 2023 diff hist +9 m Oil-for-Food Programme Added two words because the clause wasn't grammatically correct without them. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 October 2023

• 12:3812:38, 6 October 2023 diff hist +2 m Sequence stratigraphy Fixed grammatical errors. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 September 2023

• 19:3419:34, 23 September 2023 diff hist +1 m Modern architecture →Origins: Fixed spelling errors. Altered 'Coagent' to 'Coignet'. Tag: Visual edit

18 September 2023

• 23:2023:20, 18 September 2023 diff hist +6 m Western Allied invasion of Germany →Eisenhower's plans: Altered tense to match the tense of the rest of the sentence. Tag: Visual edit
• 23:0023:00, 18 September 2023 diff hist +3 m John Howard (British Army officer) →Early life: Fixed a grammatical error. Tag: Visual edit

6 September 2023

• 23:1723:17, 6 September 2023 diff hist +2 m Ilyushin Il-2 Created a clause for clarity. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:0823:08, 6 September 2023 diff hist +1 m Ilyushin Il-2 Changed 'less' to 'fewer'. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:0523:05, 6 September 2023 diff hist +1 m Ilyushin Il-2 Changed 'less' to 'fewer'. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 July 2023

• 12:4012:40, 11 July 2023 diff hist +66 Comptroller of the Navy (Navy Board) Changed the text to become gender neutral. Also added some punctuation and made minor edits to sentence structure to increase clarity. Minor edit box not checked due to potentially controversial gender neutral changes (though not controversial such that I personally recognise - perhaps it is significantly controversial to someone more knowledgeable than I) and potential, though unlikely, and, if extant, to a minor degree, alteration of meaning due to sentence restructuring. Tag: Visual edit