User talk:LisaTruong3
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:25, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
A review of your article
The article is well chosen since there is much that could be added to it. You found a lot of references to look into which is great since I couldn't find as many for my own topic. I have checked the sources/references and they seem reliable. The content seems neutral since since you have also added a part of beneficial impacts followed by the noise pollution.
Some of the sentences could be rewritten. For example in the sentence "Noise pollution has also impaired fish hearing, killed and isolated whale populations, stress response developed in marine species, and changed species’ physiology." the following part " stress response developed in marine species" could be reworded. Some of the sentences feel a bit run-on and could be split into two.
Last paragraph of "Invasive species" could be shortened since it feels a bit repetitive.
For more balanced coverage, the future development of the article, "Overexploitation" could be further expended. It feels like a large topic, and currently is short compared to the rest of the text. In addition, "Overexploitation" could be combined with the original articles paragraph under "Pollution". I feel like they are closely interlinked and should either be placed closely or combined.
You added a large amount of examples into your work which really support the ideas of the text and show the magnitude of the problem. I did not yet add examples to my own work but after reading yours I definitely will.
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