Talk:Sam Irving/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:50, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Link manager.
Four paras looks a little too much for the lead here, perhaps three with a merge or two?
Northern England any use as a link?
Also non-League football.
"persitent" typo.
"on eseason" typo. Looks like you borrowed my keyboard for this one!
Could link Captain (association football)?
North East England has an article.
"non-League" link.
"in the North-East of England" do you need to repeat it like this?
"1920–21 season" is there an article for this? Which particular season was it? Ah, you link it/name it later... do it here.
Link penalty area.
"missing out on third place"" relevance...
"o injury.[5] His injury" repetitive.
"during the season" well it was at the end of the season really.
"against England in" link England national team.
Dundee Derby -> derby
"deflected shot of a" of or off?
"In total made 183" he
"Football League First Division " overlinked.
"a finger infection " ->" an infected finger"
Burnley is overlinked.
As is Chelsea.
"20-match tour of South America" WOW! I'd love to know more about this (not for this article specifically).
Dundee United overlinked.
Is Director of football a better link than Managing director?