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About Wikipedia project

Hello, professor! I would like to choose "Honjok" as my project.

Honjok is a kind of people who do something alone like a person going to a theater alone or a person eating alone in a restaurant.

I think the reason why these kind of words exist in Korea is that Korea is collective culture so doing something alone is a little bit strange or new for Korean culture.

There is ko:혼족 in Korean Wikipedia. Can I translate this one to English? I saw many students translating English one to Korean one.

In ko:혼족, it has no information about social influence or cultural influence so I can expand them while translating into English. Or I can write new one about Honjok.

I would like to know your opinion about my subject! --Soyeon Park 14:44, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Qkrthdussla, It is an interesting choice, but the article already exists in English at Honjok. That said, you can expand such articles, but I am unsure if there is enough material to expand them for the full project. It may be better to chose a different topic, while you can also expand Honjok in English and/or Korean for some extra credit. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:05, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
User:Piotrus, I did not know Honjok already exists in English Wikipedia. I should have searched Honjok. I only searched "Honbob" :( ...
Then I would like to choose "Watcha" as my subject. It is Korean streaming service like Netflix. It is one of the most popular streaming services in Korea.
I think there is only Korean (ko:왓챠) and Japanese Wikipedia about it so I can choose it as my project. What do you think about it? --Soyeon Park 05:41, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Qkrthdussla, The company is interesting, but note that the Korean article is rather short. You can translate it to English, but you'll also need to expand it. Has the company been covered by major Korean newspapers or discussed by scholars in academic publications? Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:31, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus, yes, I think some major Korean newspapers have covered the company because of Covid 19 which make ott services more important.
Or I can expand Neflix page in Korean Wikipedia (ko:넷플릭스) by translating English one to Korean one. For now, English Neflix page is way more expanded than Korean one. Would you tell me which one is better? --Soyeon Park 05:35, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Qkrthdussla, If there is coverage about the company, go ahead and give it a try, just keep in mind Wikipedia needs to provide objective facts, and have to avoid advertising language. So for your sources, you cannot use press releases and other material from the company itself. As for Netflix, that topic has already been chosen for translation by your colleague Kim Sungil, so I am afraid it is not available. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:20, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus, I am so sorry that I have asked much more questions than other students. This may be my last question about the subject. I have searched Watcha to check how much articles and newpapers are about it. I think there are more press releases than articles and newspapers about Watcha. So can I translate and expand game streaming service Twitch or social network service Instagram to Korean one? I think ko:트위치 or ko:인스타그램 does not have enough information as English one. --Soyeon Park 06:04, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 : Wiki project topic selection (Shinhee Kim, Minkyo Jeong)

Hello, professor. I wanna tell you about the formation of a team for main wiki project and the topics. The team members are Jeong Minkyo, Kim Shinhee, and we are planning to do one English wiki and one Korean. I’m leaving a message on behalf of the team, and if you give us an feedback, we'll check it out together. : )

 English Wikipedia Topic : Housing patterns of people in their 20s and 30s in Korea
 Reason for Selection: Currently, housing problems in South Korea cause housing types such as "sharehouses" or "one-room" among the younger generation. We would like to take note of this.
 Korean Wikipedia topic :  Up-cycling (Korean, ‘새활용’)
 Reason for Selection:  it was considered a notable social phenomenon as a new alternative to the use of disposable products and the seriousness of environmental problems.

Please check our topic and give us feedback. Thank you!! Kyokyoyaaaaa talk💬 11:04, 24 March 2021 (UTC) Shinhee Kim (talk) 11:05, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Shinhee Kim and Kyokyoyaaaaa, As for your topic. 1) Expanding ko:새활용 with Upcycling is a good idea - approved. Howver, 2) " Housing Types of 2030 Generation in Korea" needs more consideration. The issue is interesting, but the title itself is unclear. You say "housing patterns", which makes more sense, to it should be Housing patterns of 2030 Generation in Korea. But what is the "2030 Generation in Korea"? The 2030 generation has not been born yet. Please consider that Wikipedia is not a place for original research (please see WP:NOR/ko:위키백과:독자 연구 금지] as well as the WP:GNG/ko:위키백과:문서 등재 기준 guidelines. After you read those, and still want to work on that topic, please tell me what academic/newspaper sources you intend to use.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:06, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, professor,Piotrus. I'd like to explain what you said.
There seems to have been an error in our expression. It is regrettable that what we intended was misrepresented.
We are going to work on a project about "Housing patterns of people in their 20s and 30s in Korea." So, it's not about the population born in 2030, it's a project about current young adult generation in Korea.
Currently, housing problems in South Korea cause housing types such as "sharehouses" or "one-room" among the younger generation. We would like to take note of this and proceed with the project. Because it is about the current housing patterns of young people, it is expected to be possible through finding out existing academic and news materials, not new research. There seems to be no problem with originality because it is about the current phenomenon. I wonder if it would be okay to do it this way.
Please check our topic again and give us feedback. : )
Thank you. Kyokyoyaaaaa talk💬 11:48, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Kyokyoyaaaaa, Ah, now I understand. The idea is very good, as long as you can find reliable sources for it. I recommend you submit the list of such sources to me soon (it is required for the outline deadline anyway). However, it is also a small section of the (very poor) article on Real estate in South Korea. Perhaps it would be better to reconsider your topic as writing about the 'Real estate in South Korea' in general, in which you could have a section about the 'Housing patterns of people in their 20s and 30s in Korea'? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:09, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotrus Hello, professor! I understood what you said, and when I checked the article or thesis on the related topic, I thought it would be a little difficult for us to proceed. So we decided to change the subject, and the newly set topic is "Korean Proverbs." When I looked up related information, I think we could organize the folklore characteristics related to Korean proverbs by investigating the type and origin of Korean proverbs. Academic papers related to the study of proverbial types, such as ethnicity, were also found. I look forward to hearing from you if I can proceed with the changed topic. Thank you. :) Shinhee Kim (talk) 10:51, 27 March 2021 (UTC), Kyokyoyaaaaa talk💬 10:53, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Kyokyoyaaaaa, Yes, the topic of Korean proverbs is interesting and should be written about. Is there a corresponding Korean Wikipeda artice? In either case, the topic approved! Please add it to our dashboard under your assigned topics. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:16, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jakub Dębski

Mam wątpliwości dotyczące encyklopedyczności bohatera biogramu. Czy młody popularny Youtuber i znany niemalże wylącznie z własnych publikacji rysownik zasługuje na hasło w anglojęzycznej Wikipedii?--SalomonSalmon (talk) 22:42, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

SalomonSalmon, Raczej nie. Niszowy wywiad, niszowy news, i gorzej. Zgłosisz na pl wiki? Ja mogę zgłosić tutaj. Tak samo z Magdalena Trzebiatowska, zgadzam się że raczej nie ency. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:36, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jakub_D%C4%99bski

Zgłoszone w pl wiki--SalomonSalmon (talk) 11:18, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

A z M.Trzebiatowską jest też możliwy problem z COI, ta sama osoba która zaczęła hasło wrzuca swoje zdeklarowane dzieło na commons.. SalomonSalmon (talk) 11:44, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

SalomonSalmon, Dzięki. Zgłosiłem do usunięcia na en wiki. Jak znajdziesz więcej - daj znać, chętnie pomogę w czyszczeniu. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:19, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

We finished Deadline3 (Week4) - Jung Eunjin & Yun Chanmi

Hello, professor.

We have uploaded news and videos to our sandbox that can be cited in "Cognitive bias" and "Women in South Korea." Please check it. :)

Jung Eunjin's sandbox

Yoon Chanmi's sandbox


And we add a reference to a live article (outside the sandbox).

인지편향 -- We translated this article from Eng to Kor.

Women in South Korea -- We added the 13th footnote to this article.

Thanks for read it. Please give us your feedback. Have a nice day! --Eunjin Jung (talk) 08:54, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Eunjin Jung, Chanmi0618 Thank you for updating me on your progress. The sources look good. When adding Korean sources to English Wikipedia, please use both Korean (Hangul) and English (use the 'translated title' field to translate the title). Also, please add proper names of the newspapers (Kyunghyang Shinmun not news.khan.co.kr etc.)
Regarding adding a reference, this is correct but I do not see any reference added to ko:인지 편향? Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:45, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finished W4 Extra Credit Assignment! - Jung Eunjin

Hello, professor! I uploaded an extra credit assignment on the blog of our class.

Here's the link to my assignment.

I'd appreciate it if you could confirm it. Have a good day! :D--Eunjin Jung (talk) 09:31, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Eunjin Jung, Sure - extra credit blog acknowledged, good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:47, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4) / Somin Park

Hello, I finished Deadline 3. I added citations to two articles. Please check if I did it right.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%95%98%EC%9D%B4%ED%8A%B8%EC%A7%84%EB%A1%9C https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/WAVVE#cite_note-2 --Somsorosomsom (talk) 09:36, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Somsorosomsom, Well done, [1] and [2] look correct. I noticed that WAVVE does not have an English Wikipedia article; you can translate it for extra credit :) Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:49, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4) /Park Chanyoung

Hello, professor. I finished Deadline 3(week4). I added citations to two articles. Is it correct...? https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/TvN https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%99%A9%ED%9D%AC%EC%B0%AC Isidorepcy (talk) 09:41, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Isidorepcy, Yes, well done, [3] and [4] look good! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:52, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finished Deadline 3

Hello professor. I add a citation to 2 articles. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iron_law_of_oligarchy#cite_note-1 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Green_Day#cite_note-1

JiSooGeun (talk) 09:50, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

JiSooGeun, The references were well-formatted but they have been removed as noted by another editor ([5], [6]) - Wikipedia cannot be a source for itself. You need to find reliable sources that are not Wikipedia (newspaper, books. journals). Please try again and let me know when you are done. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:59, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4 Deadline 3 (Everyday Life and Social Structure)

Hello, professor. I finished week4 deadline3. Thank you. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kim_Il-sung_Stadium#References Hanjiseung (talk) 12:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hanjiseung, Good job with referencing! Well done! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:12, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Dead line week4

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Itaewon_Class#cite_note-8 Hello, I'm Baek Ji Woo. Please check it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jiwoo2020 (talkcontribs) 13:29, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jiwoo2020, I am afraid I can't verify that you have added this reference (or any other) on English Wikipedia: [7]. Which article did you edit? If possible, please locate and provide me with a WP:DIFF for your edit. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:18, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Added quotes and modified footnotes. I'm attaching it to make sure it's correct.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Choi_Ji-woo Incorrect link uploaded. I'm sorry.Jiwoo2020 (talk) 16:28, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jiwoo2020, Better, but reviewing your edits, I noticed that while you did correctly add a reference to the paragraph that beings with "Choi majored in aerobic dance..." you also removed another reference from an earlier part of the article, and deleted the section heading 'personal life'. I have therefore restored the previous version. Please try to add your reference again, this time without removing any other existing content. You are halfway there! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:46, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Choi_Ji-wooFootnote [53] has been added without deletion. Please check the additional blog assignments, too.Jiwoo2020 (talk) 16:33, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jiwoo2020, Excellent, this is correct, assignment completed successfully, and good job blogging too! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:16, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week2) / Minjeong Lee

Professor, I am Minjeong Lee who is taking a class of collective intelligence.

I completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students and enrolled in the course.

I'd appreciate it if you could check it out. I'm sorry for being late.

 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lxxmnmn (talkcontribs) 15:07, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply] 
Thank you for letting me know about your progress. Please try to WP:SIGN your messages correctly - it is one of the lessons that you can learn in the training for students. Good luck! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:22, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week3) / Minjeong Lee

Professor, I am Minjeong Lee who is taking a class of collective intelligence.

I'd like to edit two Wikipedia articles.


One is a Korean article about the gender pay gap. I will add the contents based on the English article because this article lacks contents.

English article -> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gender_pay_gap

Korean article -> https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%82%A8%EB%85%80%EC%9D%98_%EC%9E%84%EA%B8%88_%EA%B2%A9%EC%B0%A8


The other is an English article about the "Welcome to Video" case. The "Welcome to Video" case is a case in which Korean operator Son Jeong-woo traded video clips of children's sexual exploitation through the website of the Dark Web. There is a Korean article about this, but there is no English article. So I will create and edit a new document.

Korean article -> https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9B%B0%EC%BB%B4%ED%88%AC%EB%B9%84%EB%94%94%EC%98%A4_%EC%82%AC%EA%B1%B4 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lxxmnmn (talkcontribs) 00:25, March 27, 2021 (UTC)

Lxxmnmn, Good choices, both topics are important and in need of expansion on Wikipedia. Approved! Please add them the the dashboard under your assigned articles. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:25, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finished Deadline 3 (week4) (Kim Hye-Jin)

Hello professor. I finished Dedline 3. I edited three wiki articles.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Song_Kang (I added link.)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Han_So-hee (I added citation.)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grey%27s_Anatomy#Cast%2C_characters%2C_and_appearance_period (I added title.)

Please check. Thank you! Have a nice day :) --HyeJin Kim2 15:25, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

HyeJin Kim2, Good start. Regarding adding a link, please read MOS:REPEATLINK. The reference ([8]) was added correctly, and your edit to the heading was technically correct as well (although whether the heading is now too long is something that may be worth discussing on talk). Keep up the good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:29, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Please check my Week 4 assignment

Hello, Professor.

I added a new topic to my own Wikipedia sandbox(citation). I'm worried that I didn't fully understand the assignment yet, so please check if I did it correctly.

And I edited a total of 20 edits last week and this week. Can you check it only if I put a link to all the articles I edited..?

Also, I'm going to write an article about 'Beauty Store'. I told you by e-mail and added it to the dashboard. Please check it too. Pkccccj 16:52, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pkccccj, Good start! Your sandbox looks correct. To complete Deadline 3 assignment, please add a reference to a live article (outside the sandbox). Then you can tell me which article you updated and I will tell you if it was done correctly. Regarding your weekly edits I can see them here. Your edits are helpful. In [9] you should change the external link to an internal link. Good job uploading a picture (File:BaeDDuck.png). You can get more credit points by adding a proper category to it (I discuss categories in one of the future videos). Keep up the good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:39, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week4) / Eun Su Seo

Hello, professor. I added a citation(the second one) to this article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cheonggukjang

Also, I wish to change my Wiki project from 'Translating two English articles' to 'Creating one English article.' I am planning to chose one and inform you before the Week 5 Deadline! May I? Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Seoeunsu19 (talkcontribs) 18:43, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Seoeunsu19, Good job adding the reference here. And yes, you can change your project - but please let me know what is your new proposed topic ASAP. Also, please remember to WP:SIGN your talk page posts on Wikipedia. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:44, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3 (Week 4) / Lee ye han

Hello, professor! I finished Deadline 3. I added citations to two articles. please check it. Have a nice day!--Lee ye han (talk) 04:56, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lee ye han, Your edit at [10] watch technically (code-wise) correct, but YouTube is not a reliable source, and linking a music video itself is not considered a proper way to reference articles (see also WP:PRIMARY) so you edit was reverted by another editor. Please try to add a reliable reference to an article (hint: it should be based on text, not video). Your edit on Korean Wikipedia is better ([11]). Good luck with your future edits! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:42, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/D-2_(mixtape)#Music_video https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%95%84%EC%9D%B4%EC%9C%A0

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Subin Choi

Hello professor : )

I finished Dedline 3 (Week 4). I edited two wiki articles.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hyun_Jin-young (external link added, footnote 4)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nam_Woo-hyun (external link added, footnote 44)

Please check.--Subin3754 (talk) 08:01, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Subin3754, Good job adding references here and here. Assignment completed! Just one question: in the last edit, you removed information about the concern in Japan - why? Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:41, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

As a result of my search, I deleted it because I couldn't find any articles or documents that could prove that I was going to have a concert in Japan. --Subin3754 (talk) 09:47, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Subin3754, Excellent job explaining your reasons, and I will award you extra credit for doing so here. In the future, I suggest you include such an explanation in your Wikipedia:Edit summary. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:49, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, Professor. thank you. : )--Subin3754 (talk) 04:52, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Shinhee Kim

Hello, professor! I finished the Deadline 3 task of collective intelligence. Please check this link reference is right. https://ko.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=%EC%9D%B4%EC%A0%9C%ED%9B%88&diff=prev&oldid=29039428

Also, I finished weekly wiki edit tasks. I completed a total of 20 last week and this week, so please check it out. Anything wrong, please tell me then I will modify it! Have a good day :) Thank you! Shinhee Kim (talk) 09:06, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Shinhee Kim, Good job adding the reference on Korean Wikipedia. I encourage you do also add it to the English article if it is missing that information (this would count for weekly edits too). Your weekly edits look good, I see no errors, very well done - keep up the good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:44, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3__Week4 / Suyoung Han

Hello professor!! I am Swim Han. I finished this Week4 assignment!

I added citations to these articles:

- Goryeo(just cite - 31) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goryeo#cite_note-36 - Gosiwon(edit and cite - 1) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gosiwon#cite_note-1

Please check my assignment!! I hope you have a nice day! --Swamming (talk) 09:30, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Swamming, Good job with adding the references here and here. I especially commend you for using high-quality (government/academic) works. Excellent job, keep it up! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:48, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 _ adding a citation

Hello professor, I'm Jisoo Jung.

I completed the 4th week assignment,'Adding a Citation'. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bap_(food)#cite_note-7

Please confirm. Thank you! --Newuser04 (talk) 09:30, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Newuser04, Very good, I commend you for using an academic reference here. Keep up the good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:28, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

professor, i have finished assignment Deadline 3.

history of communism

Professor, I added a case to my Wiki project and wrote a quote. Did I do the assignment correctly? The part I added is at the bottom of the document. EggSushi (talk) 09:33, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

EggSushi, Good job adding relevant and reliably referenced content, but please be careful of grammar/vocabulary issues. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:34, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week4) /Liu Xinlei

Hello professor. I finished Dedline 3. I edited wiki article. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/社會認同理論 please check it and hope you have a nice day!

--Rae041 (talk) 09:48, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Rae041, Good job adding more content and referencing it in [12]! Keep it up! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:36, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Yeseo Lim

Hello, professor! I'm Yeseo Lim. I finished Dealine 3. But I'm not sure if I did it right. I'd appreciate your feedback after checking. Thank you! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Economic_development --Ivisy6952 (talk) 10:45, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ivisy6952, Unfortunately, there were several problems with your edits there and they have been undone by another volunteer. The problems are 1) Namu Wiki is not considered a reliable source and cannot be used as a reference in Wikipedia 2) your reference was a bare URL and was not formatted with a citation template. Please try again, adding a reference to a reliable source (newspaper/book/magazine/journal) and formatting it correctly. Good luck and let me know when your make up edit is ready for a review! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:40, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I noticed that there were some problems in the process of carrying out the assignment, and I corrected them. I modified the URL to the correct form and used a Korean article as the reference. Please check the link above again! Thank you always. Have a nice day, professor! --Ivisy6952 (talk) 07:24, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ivisy6952, Your second attempt [13] appears to be well-formatted, although I recommend you use citation templates. I am not sure why User:MrOllie reverted your second try (without providing any justification). Let's ask him here. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:38, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotrus, For something as simple as a definition of GDP I think we can find something a little more accessible to our English readers than a Korean language newspaper. MrOllie (talk) 13:03, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
MrOllie, While I agree the source is not the best, given the language, how about {{better source needed}}? Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:58, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotrus, I just added a cite to the IMF's definition. MrOllie (talk) 14:03, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
MrOllie, Elegant solution, thank you :) On a side note, do note that one of my concerns here is to explain best practices to the new (student) editors. Too often they may not realize what they did wrong or how they could do things better unless we explain it to them in detail. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 14:06, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I thought it would be a good idea to add Korean articles to translate English articles into Korean. However, in the future, I will try to find more suitable materials. Thank you!--Ivisy6952 (talk) 03:55, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3/ PARK CHAEJEONG

Hello, professor.

I added a reference to [live article(outside the sandbox)].

Also I changed [the external link to internal link] (about Yeo Jin-goo), which you mentioned last talk message, so please check it too :) Pkccccj 15:36, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pkccccj, Good job here. But regarding [14], references are added at the end of a sentence, not a heading. Heading should not have references. Please move your reference to the end of the sentence for which it verifies the facts therein (the end of the 'Synopsis' section?). Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:41, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

DeadLine 3(week 4): Jeong Hyeon-su

Hello professor, I edited this wiki article. Please check it. Did I do correctly? https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Lee_Yong-soo_(activist)&action=history --Crocus131 (talk) 22:31, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Crocus131, Yes, good job with this edit. The content is relevant and well referenced, but please double check grammar/vocabulary. For example, you need to capitalize ramseyer into Ramseyer in the last sentence. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:43, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finished Deadline 3 (Week 4)

@Piotrus: Hello, professor. I finished Deadline 3 (Week 4). Did I do well? I'll do additional EDIT work after your review. I've added a citation related to Hapkido. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hapkido Please check it. Thank you. --Hyeonyoung Lee 21 (talk) 06:25, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hyeonyoung Lee 21, Pretty good, although another volunteer, User:Trappist the monk made some minor fixes [15] (you can thank him using the Wikipedia:Thanks function). Can you clarify if you cite a particular page (190) or did you want to indicate the work (thesis) has 190 pages total? Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:35, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

My dashboard activity history is displayed strangely. / Suyoung Han

Hello Professor, I am Suyoung Han. I am currently editing Wikipedia, and I checked the activities in the program dashboard.

However, the details were summarized as having written topics that are different from what I edited.

1. I have edited Kkoma Gimbap/Nude Gimbap in the Gimbap section, but the details say that I have written "ไนต์อินทูดรีมส์ ".

2. Also, I edited images of the English Wikipedia Siheung, but the description is written as Q1018337.

Each topic is clearly marked with my ID in the history.

What should I do if topics I wrote and topics in the dashboard activity are different? Thanks for reading my question! --Swamming (talk) 08:44, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Swamming, Hmmm. According to the website status, "The Dashboard is still having problems with database corruption. ". Don't worry about it too much as I can review your articles using other tools. I will award you extra credit for reporting this issue to me in detail :) Ping User:Sage (Wiki Ed) in case you find this error report helpful. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:42, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3 (Week4) / Giyeon Woo

Hello, professor. I am done with my deadline3 assignment. Please check whether I did it correctly or not. Thank you!--Woo-Giyeon (talk) 09:28, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Woo-Giyeon, I see [16]. The reference is formatted correctly, but please explain which part of the paragraph does the text support? The reference you added is about the British Parliament, which is not that relevant to the section you referenced. Best, please quote here the Wikipedia text that you are referencing, and then the text from the website you linked that supports it. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:46, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finished Deadline 3-2

Dear professor,

My first article chose an extensible article, so when I chose the second article, I chose to create an entry.I Finished Deadline 3 in my second article this week. (Moving out of the sandbox and add an inline reference outside the sandbox.): https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%96%B0%E9%97%BB%E5%AD%A6%E5%8F%B2

This week I made more than 40 edits in my two articles.: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%96%B0%E9%97%BB%E5%AD%A6%E5%8F%B2 https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/2019%E5%86%A0%E7%8A%B6%E7%97%85%E6%AF%92%E7%97%85%E7%96%AB%E6%83%85%E5%AF%B9%E6%95%99%E8%82%B2%E7%9A%84%E5%BD%B1%E5%93%8D

please confirm.

At the same time, I created and published the Two articles in Blogging through Wikipedia(2021):https://www.blogger.com/blog/posts/7664683351975062690 And I have left a message under the Liu Xinlei classmate’s blog this week: https://socwiki2021.blogspot.com/2021/03/week4good-faith-collaboration.html?showComment=1616927894586#c1304754826000099100

Thank youJinsin chen (talk) 10:59, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jinsin chen, Good job starting your translation in the Chinese Wikipedia namespace, although I am not sure if their Manual of Style allows links to English Wikipedia. Good job with your edit, but please note that for the weekly edits, your edits have to be on articles other tha your m ain project. Good job with your blogging! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:54, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Finished Weekly Wiki Edit(Kim Yoon/User name: BBam BBam)

I did weekly wiki edit! Link is: https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/Hanyang_University/Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedia_(2021)/students/articles/BBamBBam Thank you! :) --BBamBBam (talk) 11:16, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

BBamBBam, For this week, I only see a single edit you made here. If I missed anything, please link the pages you edited. It is a substantial edit, with a reference, and therefore I would count it for more than a single edit, but please note that's the weekly assignment asks for '10 edits', so I recommend you make more edits. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:03, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Finished Deadline 3(Week 4) (Kim Yoon/User name: BBam BBam)

I finished Deadline3, and the link is : https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:BBamBBam/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 Please see it and give me the feedback if there are any problems! Thank you~ --BBamBBam (talk) 11:19, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

BBamBBam, I am afraid I do not see any reference in your Korean Wikipedia sandbox that you linked above. Also, please note that to complete the assignment, you need to add a reference to a live article (outside the sandbox). Then you can tell me which article you updated and I will tell you if it was done correctly. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:01, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
OMG, I added references but didn't press the 'publish' button! So, of course, you wouldn't have seen anything sorry:0 I corrected it! Could you check it again? --BBamBBam (talk) 06:04, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor~! I have a quesition, so I ask something~!!

Dear Professor Piotrus

Hello Professor!

I'm Young-Joo, Park in "Collective Intelligence" I put some images like this

Wikipedia said this should "My own image", but I can't get this image myself, so I take this image another site and take modify a picture like adding filter effect and so on...

If possible, I'd like to post a photo of myself, but I can't take this picture

So it's okay? or Something should do that? Capoco1234 (talk) 11:30, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Capoco1234, I am afraid that uploading modified images is not allowed. According to copyright, the modification does not give any ownership of the original image, and as such, the image needs to be deleted (ping User:Masur, User:-revi). You can only upload images that you have taken or created yourself, or that are in the public domain or otherwise are freely licenced. If you want to uploaded a photo of someone, found on another website, you need to contact them for permission which they need to forward to Wikipedia volunteers reviewing copyright issues. See commons:Commons:메일 양식 for the text you can use to send them and that they'll need to send to Wikipedia if they want this photo to be used here. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:25, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

oh! Thank you for your help! I must deleted picture and change another image!

Thank you!! Capoco1234 (talk) 06:49, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've done Deadline 3 and weekly wiki edits

Dear Professor Piotrus

I've done Deadline3 and weekly wiki edits. You can see what I've done here. Thanks a lot.

SangminChoe (talk) 11:32, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

SangminChoe, Nicely done with referencing here and in the other articles, and well done linking to your Korean Wikipedia contribution page. Good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:58, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Copy edit

Hi Piotrus.

Sorry to disturb you but I have been working tirelessly for two months now on the article 'Sigismund III Vasa' and I was wondering whether you can copy edit it (check any mistakes, restructure sentences, grammar etc.). All the references I have included are published book sources with attached page numbers. I have still the 'Legacy' section to do but other than that it is almost complete. My goal is to eventually nominate it and upgrade it to a GA or perhaps FA status (fingers crossed). Oliszydlowski (talk) 12:40, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Oliszydlowski, Sure, I'll take a look at it soon! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:26, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4): Adding an inline reference (citation), Minkyo Jeong

Hello, professor! I finished weekly 10 edits and adding an citation in this page :) Also, I registered main Wiki topic in the dashboard system.

Actually, I'm not sure that I did it in a right way... please check my assignments and give me feedback. Thank you :) Kyokyoyaaaaa talk💬 13:12, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Kyokyoyaaaaa, Good job adding the reference here. But I am not sure where are your other weekly edits? The weekly edits don't count edits for your main project/deadlines/posting to my talk page. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:31, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Oh, professor, Piotrus. I did it on March 22. Please check my edit here.Kyokyoyaaaaa talk💬 03:38, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Kyokyoyaaaaa, Ah, yes. Those are good, particularly here, but in [17], consider the rules for external links. We don't generally add links - such as to the companies websites - in the article body. Links in the article body should be only for other Wikipedia articles. The place for any external links is in the both section of the article called 'external links', so I suggest you fix your edits accordingly. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:07, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotrus Professor, I revised external links you mentioned. I wonder if the way I did it is right or not... please check the edit I did. Thank you : ) Kyokyoyaaaaa talk💬 04:48, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Kyokyoyaaaaa, Yes, I think this is now fixed correctly - good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:07, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finished the assignment for deadline 3 (week 4) -WANG XIAOLING

Hello Professor, I’m Wang Xiaoling of collective intelligence, I finished the assignment for deadline 3 (week 4). This is the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Zheng_Shuang_(actress,_born_1991)&diff=1014633603&oldid=1014633421. I also completed 10 Wikipedia task edits this week. In addition, I edited Wikipedia 30 times. Can I get extra credits? Wikipedia has been edited 40 times in total this week. Also please check the blog post about extra credits. Regarding the extra credits task for blogging, I wrote about my thoughts on the book "The Presentation of Self in Everyday Life", but the professor left me a message saying that my blog was wrong(This is a reply to my blog link: https://socwiki2021.blogspot.com/2021/03/w3-thoughts-on-reading-presentation-of.html). Can I not get extra credits for writing other books?

Please check my homework, thank you!^^ WANG XIAOLING995 13:37, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

WANG XIAOLING995, Good job adding referenced content here, and your other edits look good too. For future extra credit, if you are interested in Chinese film controversies, maybe you could translate the article zh:赵立新 to English?
Do note that per MOS:BIRTHPLACE, information on birthplace is preferred in the body of the article, not its lead. Some of your edits have been reverted; please move the birth place information to the lower section.
Regarding your blog, the blog itself is very good, but you posted it in the wrong blog (the book is for our 'Everday Life' class, but you blogged about it in our 'Collective Intelligence' class blog). If you got invited to the wrong blog, please send me an email about this and I'll invite you to the correct blog so you can copy your blogs there. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:49, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus, 1) I can translate zh:赵立新 to English Wikipedia. How long is the deadline? 2) Thank you professor for your feedback, I will pay attention next time! 3)In the syllabus:"b) you can blog about the question poised in the syllabus for a given week (for some weeks it’s the same as a) above, but for some weeks it is different). The structure of the blog post should be similar to that of a), also you are welcome to incorporate other materials than simply the assigned readings for next week (you can also discuss the past readings, lectures, and anything else you find on your own). "

It seems that can write other books to get extra credits. I don’t know that this book is also available in other classes of the professor. I think this book is very famous and interesting so I want to write my thoughts about this book. I have written 4 blogs about this book. Can I get extra credits? Or if write a blog about this book, its won’t get extra credits? thank you!^^professor. Have a nice day~ WANG XIAOLING995 05:57, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

WANG XIAOLING995, There is no deadline for extra credit projects (well, the deadline would be the end of the class in late June). You can get extra credit for blogging about the book, just note that the credits will be applied to the class this book is relevant to (so if you blog about Goffman's Presentation... then the credits will be awarded for the Everday Life class). Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:10, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus, 1)Can I get extra credits by writing articles in other books through my blog? 2)If I make additional credits for Wikipedia editing, and the editor makes a mistake and is withdrawn, can I still earn additional credits?

Thank you professor for replying to me patiently, I wish you have a good day. WANG XIAOLING995 01:42, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

WANG XIAOLING995, If they are books that are assigned reading to our course, yes. Other than that, the preferred venue to earn extra credits is to do more Wikipedia edits, as it is more productive than blogging. Regarding making an edit that was a mistake, you can earn extra credit if you acknowledge what was the mistake and fix it either directly or by making a similar edit that is not a mistake. For example, if you add a sentence that is removed because it contained grammatical errors or was unreferenced, you can get credit by restoring that sentence with grammatical error fixed and/or the reference provided, as necessary. I hope this helps! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:29, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus, Already understand, thank you professor, I will work hard. have a good day^^ WANG XIAOLING995 03:01, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3 : week4 Youngsil Lee

Hello, @Piotrus: This week, I finished editing 10 Wikipedia content with a reference addition and also registered Wikipedia main project topics on the dashboard. Please give me feedback after checking. Thank you.--Youngsil (talk) 14:57, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Youngsil, Well done adding referenced content. It looks good, but keep in mind the importance of not only grammar/vocabulary but style. For example, "and made it with all his heart" likely needs rewriting or removing as it doesn't sound encyclopedic. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:03, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

finish assignment

@Piotrus: Professor, I've made 10 edits. please check it Hyeonyoung Lee 21 (talk) 15:01, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hyeonyoung Lee 21, Good start, but please try to add references to the content you add. For example, [18] - what reliable source confirms that it is famous in those regions? Who is the source of this finding? Or this? You may find that your edits are reverted if no reliable source is provided, particularly for issues related to medicine. See also WP:MEDRS. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:11, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3-Hyeonmin Song

Hello, professor. I edited wiki about Jjamppong. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jjamppong#Variations — Preceding unsigned comment added by Meanssong (talkcontribs) 15:08, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Meanssong, Well done adding content and references to [19], good job! Also, please remember to WP:SIGN your talk page posts correctly. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:14, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I forgot to sign my talk page post. I will be careful from now on. --Meanssong (talk) 05:45, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3 Assignment ?(WiKi, Chaehyoseung)

Hello professor, I am Chaehyoseung.I finish Deadline3(week4) Assignment https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mijoo#Television_shows Please chaek this link. I add some content and add links too. --Chaehyoseung (talk) 16:56, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chaehyoseung, Good job editing a table, but what you added are external links, not references. Please try to add correctly formated references (which should take the form of footnotes) and let me know when you are done. Good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:19, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Chaehyoseung, Unfortunately, this is still not correct. You now added an external link into a text; this is generally not allowed as it resembles spam - see also the friendly message & explanation another volunteer, User:Paper9oll, left for you at User_talk:Chaehyoseung#April_2021. You need to format your addition as a reference, in the form of a footnote that is not just a bare URL but specifies the author, publisher, date, title, an d so on. Please see WP:CITE and watch our course video tutorial on adding references. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:05, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Piotrus: Hi there, your student added Naver Search result as reference which is not consider reliable source hence this is the reason why I reverted the edit. Would recommended to use primary source or secondary source (preferably news source) instead. I have since added the supporting references to the unsourced content which was previously added by another editor. Paper9oll (🔔📝) 06:27, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Professor, I try again this assignment. Please check this link. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dana_(South_Korean_singer). I added external link. thank you.--Chaehyoseung (talk) 06:15, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chaehyoseung, I am afraid you are repeating your previous mistakes and even confirming this here ("I added external link" - yes, and this is NOT what the assignment requires - you should add a reference instead). Please stop, read the Wikipedia rules I and others linked, watch our video, and also read this talk page where many of your colleagues have reported their correct submissions (and compare them to yours). In your latest edit, already reverted by another volunteer, you have added external links (not references) and linked google search results (not acceptable) and youtube (also not acceptable). A reference should be a direct link to a newspaper, magazine or such, and correctly formatted (like described above). You can see an example of how a reference is added, correctly, here - this edit is courtesy of volunteer Paper9oll. Please study it carefully and compare it to yours [20]. Can you see the difference? You need not only to use the correct code (for references), but ensure that your references are reliable. Given that you have repeated the same error several times, I recommend that you first submit a reference in your sandbox, then I'll review it, and only then you should add it to the mainspace. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:32, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

[week4] Lee Yerin

Hello, professor, I'm Yerin Lee.

First of all 1. Blog posting 2. Commenting 3. Editing 10 Wikipedia topics 4. Selecting topics I've finished, please check!

In addition, I have a question. First of all, I finished editing 10 Wikipedia this week on Saturday, March 27th, but when I checked, the Korean editing was not recorded on the dashboard, and a small number of English compilation was deleted. In this case, do I need to edit it additionally?

Secondly, please check my article subject ko: Independent bookstores.

Thank you always.--Yellieyellie (talk) 18:24, 28 March 2021 (UTC)@Lee yerin[reply]

Dashboard tool is experiencing some trouble, but don't worry, I can still monitor your activity using other tools. Regarding the content you added that has been reverted / deleted, please check messages I and others left on your talk, it explains why some of it was removed. For example, this was poorly formatted, unreferenced and of unclear relevance. Are those official instagram accounts of Hanyang? If so, they could be added to the external links section; they don't need their own subsections. But don't worry, may of your other edits are good and have not been deleted.
Regarding Independent bookstore, it is an interesting topic but the article is not very good. You can translate it to Korean for extra credit, but for the main project, please choose a different topic. See User:Piotrus/Ideas for students. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:29, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The Signpost: 28 March 2021

Wiki Assignment Deadlin 3: Jung Eunjin & Yun Chanmi

Hello, professor. We checked your feedback. And we understood everything.

We added a reference[1] to the "인지 편향."

Based on the references added to this article, we will continue the translation process.

I think we can add more accurate and diverse references through the translation process.

So we completed Deadline 3. Is it correct?

Please check it. And we're sorry to late.

Now we will start working on Deadline 4. Thank you for reading it. Have a nice day! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Eunjin Jung (talkcontribs) 07:20, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Eunjin Jung, Good job with [21], it is correctly done. However, as I noted before, this deadline is individual, not a group. Both of you have to add a reference, each from their own account. So one of you still needs to finish this assignment. Good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:26, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4) -YUNCHANMI& JUNGEUNJIN

Hello professor, we have finished editing the article on the subject of "Cognitive Biases" and "Women in South Korean," so please check it out. Below is the corresponding address.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%B8%EC%A7%80_%ED%8E%B8%ED%96%A5#cite_note-1

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Women_in_South_Korea#Legal_rights — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chanmi0618 (talkcontribs) 08:52, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chanmi0618, First, please in mind that this deadline is individual. Each of you has to complete it using their own account (and report it here). The edit to Korean Wikipedia seems good, but I had to undo your edit to English Wikipedia since it was not in English: [22]. Please remember to use English on English Wikipedia. Finally, please remember to WP:SIGN your posts when posting on talk pages. Please let me know if you fix the edit on the 'women in South Korea' page so I can review it again. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:57, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Modest flowers

Thank you for what you said on Yoninah's talk, - see also Wikipedia:Wikipedia Signpost/2021-03-28/Obituary! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:34, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Gerda Arendt, I read it already! And what I said was the least I could do. It's said, and what is even sadder is the realization that as Wikipedia matures, such events are going to become normal... Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:30, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3(again) - Eunsun Choi

Professor, I left a talk few days ago, but didn't receive your comment!

I told

"Hellp, professor! I finished Deadline 3 (week 4) assignment. I edited this article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Surveillance_capitalism#Response adding reference number 37. Could you check my assignment? And also I edited this one https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Social_Dilemma#Scientific_basis adding reference number 16. I am not sure whether I'm going well or not but sure that editing wikipedia makes me more and more interested. Still not good enough, I'll try to do my best to follow this class!"

Please check again and give me an advice. Thank you. :) --This is silverline (talk) 16:34, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This is silverline, Good job! Here are thoughts on how you can improve those edits: 1) The reference here is well-formatted, but that sentence was already referenced. Keeping in mind this is English Wikipedia, what is the benefit of the reference you added for most readers? Also, when adding Korean-language references to English Wikipedia, I suggest you see the optional 'translated title' parameter and add an English translation of the Korean title (do not remove the Korean title, both should be visible). 2) Re [23], when adding a citation to a book, please add the page number(s) for the pages you consulted. Readers who want to read more about this issue may not want to read the entire book and instead may want to look at the specific page or two which contain the relevant information.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:36, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3- Oh Serin

Hello, professor. I started editing Wikipedia. But the subject I set was harder than I thought. It will take some time to add more content. (I'll try to add it as soon as possible) Could you check if I'm editing it correctly?

Here's a link. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:IQ#References — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ohserin (talkcontribs) 17:02, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ohserin, Dear Oh Serin. It's a good start, but since you want to translate the article to Korean, you should copy your sandbox to Korean Wikipedia (where you have a sandbox too). The sooner you do so the better, as technical parts like code (including references) will not copy well, so some of the work you do here, in English Wikipedia's sandbox, is wasted as you'll have to do it again from scratch on the Korean side.
Also, please remember to WP:SIGN your talk page posts. Good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:51, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week4. Thank you for your feedback

@Piotrus: Thank you for your reply. I also thanked User: Trappist the monk for helping me with my revision 'Hapkido'. The whole page is 190 pages, and the part I’ve quoted is pages 13-21. Should I correct my citation information? Also, what exactly does "volume" mean? Is it correct to write "Volume = p.190, Pages = 13-21"? Sorry for being awkward at Wikipedia. ㅠㅠ Thank you for your help. Have a nice day :-) Hyeonyoung Lee 21 (talk) 02:30, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hyeonyoung Lee 21, Great that you learned how to send a thank you note to other editors :) And yes, please correct the information to list pages 13-21. I think it is usually not necessary to report the total number of pages (190). Nothing to be sorry for, learning how to write quality content takes time and you are making good progress! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:55, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Questions about the reference

@Piotrus: Hello Professor. Thanks for the detailed feedback on my assignment. First, the source of information for 19 is Doosan Encyclopedia. Could it be a good reference?

Second, the source of this finding is the Encyclopedia of Korean Ethnic Culture and the source of this information is Doosan Encyclopedia. Can various Korean encyclopedias be a good reference??

--Hyeonyoung Lee 21 (talk) 03:14, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hyeonyoung Lee 21, Yes, Korean encyclopedias like the Doosan Encyclopedia or the specialized Encyclopedia of Korean Ethnic Culture (which likely needs an article about itself to be written) - or encyclopedias in general - are reliable sources. See also WP:RS which answers your question: "Reputable tertiary sources, such as introductory-level university textbooks, almanacs, and encyclopedias, may be cited". I recommend reading the RS page, it is very helpful in understanding what 'reliable' means on Wikipedia. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:21, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4 (Week5) JeongYoon Oh

I have completed the Deadline 4 assignment. Is this the right way? Please check. Thank you.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JeongYoon_Oh/sandbox --JeongYoon Oh (talk) 13:17, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

JeongYoon Oh, It's a good start, but if you want to translate an English Wikipedia article to Korean Wikipedia, you should copy your sandbox to Korean Wikipedia (where you have a sandbox too). The sooner you do so the better, as technical parts like code (including references) will not copy well, so some of the work you do here, in English Wikipedia's sandbox, is wasted as you'll have to do it again from scratch on the Korean side. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:13, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

As you answered, I copied the translation of "Vogue(magazine)" into my sandbox to a Wikipedia article in Korea. I'll also attach a link to Korean Wikipedia, so please take a look. Since you said that references are not copied well, from now on, I will translate and modify them right away in Korean Wikipedia articles, not in my sandbox. The reason why I wrote draft into my sandbox was to do deadline 4. Is my assignment completely confirmed?

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B3%B4%EA%B7%B8_(%EC%9E%A1%EC%A7%80)JeongYoon Oh (talk) 13:00, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

JeongYoon Oh, Yes, good job. As noted in the syllabus, the outline is required only for non-translation projects. If you are simply translating content from English to Korean, as written in the syllabus, "I expect your translation to be at least 50% done". Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:59, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finished deadline 1

I finished deadline 1 and enrolled in the dashboard system. I'm so sorry for the late completion. I will work hard on my assignment from now on.--Seora3085 (talk) 15:29, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Seora3085, Better late than never - try to catch up as quickly as you can, and ask me for help if needed. Good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:15, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week 3) - Jung a Byeon

I chose the article that I want to translate. Can I proceed with this? Cite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the help page).https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marriage_in_South_Korea Byeon jung a (talk) 15:46, 30 March 2021 (UTC) --Byeon jung a (talk) 15:55, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Byeon jung a, Yes, that topic is available. I have approved it - please add it to the dashboard as one of your selected articles. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:14, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - jung a Byeon

I completed my 4th week assignment. Please check if I did the assignment correctly. --Byeon jung a (talk) 15:54, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Byeon jung a, I assume you refer to this? The reference is good, but the content you referenced already had two other references. Try to add a reference to content that does not have a reference. Also, in that edit you added the text "(A Love Story". Note that you need to add a space before the parenthesis, and close it. Also, is this the official English name of the movie? I don't see it mentioned in Il Mare. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:20, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
piotr

I solved the problems you pointed out. And I want to tell you that Ilmare's subheading is a love story. --Byeon jung a (talk) 06:25, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Byeon jung a, Good job, your new edits look like an improvement. Keep up the good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:55, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Most z Commons

Dotyczy https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Gws_warsawbridge_01.jpg

Tak jak jest zapisane w dyskusji - to nie most Poniatowskiego, a tory nie są tramwajowe. Poniatowski był szerszy i nie miał drewnianej jezdni, a także prostych balustrad. To most kolejowy pod Cytadelą, tzw. czwarty.

Jezdnia Poniatowskiego z tego samego okresu dla porównania - https://fotopolska.eu/743690,foto.html?o=b3066&p=3

W efekcie do odlinkowania będą hasła, pod które zdjęcie zostało podczepione w innych Wiki. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jale (talkcontribs) 05:19, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week 3) - Seo ra Jeong

I chose the article! Can I proceed this topic? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cognitive_psychology--Seora3085 (talk) 08:46, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

April 2021 WikiProject Military History Reviewing Drive

Hey y'all, the April 2021 WikiProject Military History Reviewing Drive begins at 00:01 UTC on April 1, 2021 and runs through 23:59 UTC on April 31, 2021. Points can be earned through reviewing articles on the AutoCheck report, reviewing articles listed at WP:MILHIST/ASSESS, reviewing MILHIST-tagged articles at WP:GAN or WP:FAC, and reviewing articles submitted at WP:MILHIST/ACR. Service awards and barnstars are given for set points thresholds, and the top three finishers will receive further awards. To participate, sign up at Wikipedia:WikiProject_Military_History/April 2021 Reviewing Drive#Participants and create a worklist at Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/April 2021 Reviewing Drive/Worklists (examples are given). Further details can be found at the drive page. Questions can be asked at the drive talk page. MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 17:26, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Adding one of my articles in Did You Know

I am glad that you read some of my articles related to Poland with great interest. I would love to have one of my articles in Did You Know section. If possible can you help me add any one of the article to the section ? Toadboy123 (talk) 17:44, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Gaeun Um (retry)

Hello, professor:) I retried my assignment. My number is 44. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Economic_inequality#cite_ref-81 Here is the link. Please check it! Thank you so much!--Garongronga (talk) 15:04, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]